User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Raven's Feather/@comment-1427879-20170829192320/@comment-2142396-20170904184248

Oh, thanks! I actually intended to portray both sides of the conflict as being in the wrong instead of presenting one ultimate villain, since the whole clash happened because both woodlanders and ravens first assumed the worst and then refused to let it go out of sheer stubbornness. So when I hear you say that Wingbreaker or Barktooth were exhausting, I’m torn between feeling pleased that I succeeded in my mission and wondering whether I overdone it and made the characters unlikable. ;)

I think I’ll skirt the question concerning the feather for now, mostly because it will be touched upon in the final part. ;) As for Second Star’s journey, I think it’s mostly how the ravens said earlier, he had to fly slower because of the dusk, plus I think he could’ve swerved on his way a little because he couldn’t see properly. We will see how the things would tie up in the final, so stay tuned! :)