User blog comment:JumpoverMoon/The Path to Take/@comment-1427879-20111022164928

I think I one point you put supporst instead of support or supports. Beside that it seemed free of grammar errors. Well, the haversacks having gone seemed to affect them in more ways than one. I like how you differed the dormouse by recognizing the hair on the tail. I think I like Ro. Poor Callie...be strong! I wonder who the beast is and if they'll help her. Sorry it took me so long to read this. Good update, KIU!