User blog comment:Pirate Vixen 101/The Pirate of Flagal/@comment-1630956-20100121010038

End of first Paragragh: Insides, the sounds of crashing and knocking were heard.

Fix by: Take the s off Inside

Fourth paragraph from the end Falla had fallen quite.

Fix by quite should be spelled quiet.

Third paragraph from the end So, keep quite, and let nature take it's course."

Fix by again quite should be spelled quiet

Second paragraph from the end Huntress had a confused look on his once whining face, but she understood it wholesomely.

Fix by Huntress is a she as far as i know and i'm not sure if wholesomly fits in this context. Instead of wholesomely try completely.

Second paragraph from the end With a smile of confidences,

Fix by Take the s off confidences so that it's confidence.

Now for other comments... So Huntress' mum's a herbalist and her dad's dead. Great job you've veered away from Mariel of Redwall and made the story yore own! Keep it up!