User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/The Coming of Badger Lady/@comment-26879391-20160103211348

Great Start with the Prologue! I like how it connects directly towards 'The Taggerung's Battle', and even mentions Mordbrenn and the Rapscallions. The beginning is rather reminiscent of the first chapter of 'Taggerung', where Sawney is meeting with Grisoul. I was happy to be seeing more of Rarog's tribe, and finaly seeing Sumra. He reminds me of a little brother figure to Rarog, which is touching, in my opinion ;). I also loved how you incorporated the Juska's face paint with their rank withing the tribe, since the face paint is a huge factor in Juska lore and culture.

Also, yay, Prophecies! Personally, I never really liked the idea of 'Destiny', but here you made it work! I see Rarog is rather superstitious, which kind of reminds me of Sawney Rath (who, I must admit, was a pretty nice 'villain'.) And of course, Badger lore is heavily influenced by prophecies and the Badger carvings. I'm also really glad Orlando is here :). I always wanted to see a bit more of him, since we got to see Auma, but never her father.

Overall, I am VERY exited for this fanficition! I've always wondered about Cregga, since she is SUCH a huge pillar in the Redwall Mythos, yet she is shrouded in so much mystery! I would like updates, and overall, Can't wait to see the Rose Eyed Ravager! (Also, Flower-Grower Cracked me up XD. ALso, I really like how you incorporated a lot of Slavic and Germanic words in the character's names. I myself am a bit slavic ((Polish ;))), and it was a lot of fun looking up the characters' names, and figuring out their meaning.)