User blog comment:Thornclaw Braveheart/The Conquerors/@comment-1146641-20100612114755

When I said "update me", I mean, "leave a message on my talk page TELLING me that you updated" ;) Otherwise I have to remember to come find it, and... well...

Anyway, I think this is good. You are definitely getting better as time goes on. You a great job describing villains... very in-character...

What would be great, is if you even add Brang in the story :) One of my fave badger Lords of all time ;)