User blog:Mariel of Redwall/Mariel and Dandin: Never Again

Ok so this is my first fan fic on redwall wiki, thanks to Hollyfire53 begging me to write one, here it is. Tell me what you think about it. Hope you guys like it!

Part One
A young mouse, sleeping in Mossflower Wood, was awakened by the sun shining in his eyes. He sat up, rubbed the sleep out of his eyes, and yawned. He looked over his shoulder at his companian, who was another mouse like himself.

She was still asleep. He smiled.

The young mouse got up, and rekindled the fire from last night. He was well built, with dark brown eyes, and dressed in a brown tunic, worn from seasons of traveling. Once the fire started, the mouse went over and got his haversack. He opened it up and took out what food was left.

A few minutes later, the other mouse awoke to the smell of smoke. She sleepily opened her eyes, sat up, and yawned.

The male mouse looked away from the food and fire at the sound of her yawn. “Mornin’ sleepy head.” He joked. The mousemaid smirked at him with a playful look in her eyes.

“Dandin swordcarrier, your such a toad!” she teased, throwing a pinecone at him. Dandin lifted his paws to block his face from the pinecone, looking hurt at the comment.

“Me? A slimy toad? Why I never!” he said with mockingly. “Beside Mariel,” getting slightly more serious. “Your more like a toad than me.” Mariel gasped sarcastically and threw more pinecones at him.

“Cease fire!” he called out while Mariel threw the cones at him. “Or you’ll be t’blame when Saxtus finds out who killed his dear, best friend.” Mariel rolled her eyes, “Yeah, killed with pinecones,” and kept tossing.

“And, you won’t get any breakfast,” Dandin added, remembering he had the food.

Mariel reluctantly stopped. “Fine, you win. For now,”

Dandin smirked, “I knew you’d see it my way,” He was taking some scones out of the haversack when a he felt something hit the back of his head. “Ouch!” he turned around quickly to face Mariel, who was “inocently” looking around and whistling. “Hey! I thought I told you t’stop,”

But she just smiled at him and shrugged her shoulders, “What?”