User blog comment:JamesOfVallron/A tale of two brothers./@comment-3403118-20110505011834

'Tis more like an allegory or a fable to me at the beginning, but it's still good and I believe it will soon come to be a rather nice story. If there is something wrong with your computer, it could be slow or could have some sort of virus that could be causing your computer to not run as well, or the computer couldn't handle uploading the information although there are no images. Also, one of my methods in editing is starting off on microsoft word then copying and pasting your text into the blog edit.