User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/The Coming of Badger Lady/@comment-1427879-20160201032243

Oo, interesting! I wonder how long ago the fight between the blood-red fox and the badger happened. Could the badgers be Cregga's ancestors or the parents of another famous badgerlord? Hopefully, she'll learn once she reaches the mountain. Her mother's death was sad, but it was a good insight into her Bloodwrath. Also, I like how you portray her and Astar's friendship. It's clear that they're good friends, but relationships are sometimes rough, but also sometimes just teasing (and yes, Cregga, Astar was obviously going to join you). Her parting with the Goldenpaws was good, too. I'm excited to finally be on the road! I noticed a few missing as and thes as well as a think misspelled as thing. Otherwise, it looks good. KIU!