User blog:MissTaggerung/Fwirl's story

"Goodbye, I'll miss you!" "Oh, Jenizine! Don't go... Think of the babe, you won't see it untill it is three seasons old!"Jenizine's wife reminded him. "Goto Redwall my dear, they will look after yyou and the babe there. I'm sure of it! Tell my ol' matey Tam that I say hi. Goodbye."and with his last sentence he turned and walked over to his crew, who were all ready to set sail. They were going off to the Southern Seas to fight the Ratslime Horde. They were going to avenge the rest of the tribe that the Ratslime killed. Only twenty one were left out of 200. Twenty were going off to fight, and Ashen Star was the only female left. But she was going to have a babe, and had to get somewhere safe for it to be born. She was going to Redwall!

Chapter One
Off set Ashen Star, heavily loaded with her child, in the cool spring dawn.She cilmbed over mountains, ran across desert plains, climbed through trees when she came to a swamp, she was exausted at the end of her third day on the move.She sat down between the large roots of and oak, and said ;"I'm so hungry. I sure could do with a strawberry cordial and a turnip pie right now!", turnip pie was a famous delicacy that her mother had made,"I wonder if anybeast lives around here?" "Well, sure there'd be creatures living around 'ere! Why? Was ya thinkin' this 'ere was a barren land? Eh! Wharra ya thinkin missy?" Star screamed. Who was that? "Um...hello? Is anybeast there? I can't see anybeast."she called out nervously. "No there'd not be anybeast here, only everybeast!" she heard some giggling and, then out of nowhere, an old mouse appeared,"Who might I hve the pleasure of meeting?" said the mouse, in its queer accent. "I-i-i-i'm called Ashen Star, S-s-ir!" Star was terribly shy, and addressing somebeast as old as this, she was quite terrified.

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The seas were as stormy as a babe who had just eaten an orchard full of grapes' stomach. Jenizine and his crew were having trouble. Ther were many leaks in their boat and they couldn't see further than two paws lenghts in front of them, it was so dark.

"Jeni! Me ole matey, I thinks we gotta abandon ship!" called out a squirrel known as Saliterion, Teri for short. "Aye, Teri I think you are right!" Jeni called back, "Everybeast, ABANDON SHIP!!! NOW!!!" nobeast dared question him. That was how The other twenty squirrels in the Natenue tribe's lifes ended.

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Star felt a pain. And she knew that the babe was coming.

After the babe arrived, Star thought about whant Jeni would have wanted to call her. When Jeni got back she would show him how wonderful their babe was. She ached over names but finally decided that Fwirlizine was to be the babe's name.

Fwirl and Star had a great time at the old mouses den. They stayed there until Fwirl could walk, Which was a quater of a season later.As they said goodbye, the Ratslime's scout saw them. The scout ran back to camp to tell Ventra of the den. Ventra was a sly vixen, who had gained leadership because she had killed the previous Cheif when he was asleep. She had lied and said that he was awake and she won in fair combat.

Ventra planned on raiding the den, as she thought that the old mouse might have been some sort of Cheiften.