Talk:Sholabar's Band

Oy! Enough with the dangling participles!
Before I fixed it a sentence in this article read,

In an attempt to engage some of martin the warrior's companions, Folgrim thundered in to the rescue.

This sounds as if Folgrim is trying to engage the companions instead of the vermin. I have found too many articles with similar problems and I don't have the time to go through every last article and make it coherent so PLEASE, everyone, be careful how you word sentences!

God Bless,

--Scotty Bluefleck, Mountain Hare from the Highlands Matt 25:40  17:25, March 29, 2011 (UTC)