User blog comment:Ailavyn Siniyash/Noonvale/@comment-4516809-20111127204023

Just a tip on harespeak: Don't put wot or sah in the same sentence. It is good if you put something like that in every other sentence or three.

Example: Pippy, go fetch some blinkin' water from the well! We are hungery and you can't have soup without water, wot!

See the way that the wot kinda accents it?

Other than going overboard with wots, it is a great story an I don't think that your riddles stink. KIU!