User talk:Sambrook the otter

YES, IRST POST!!!
Update on Tirborath(Sambrook's story RW).

WINK Shieldmaiden    Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 23:16, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

re- graphic novel
for tirborath, right? hmm. . . I'll have something tomorrow- a rough script for the first page or so.

WTH, i'll start now! Shieldmaiden    Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 23:27, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

BTW, update on irborath. Shieldmaiden    Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 23:28, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

actually, my second!
I already had an archive, thanks to Zaran. I'm busy here, as you can tell. Shieldmaiden    Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 23:30, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

Whaddaya mean? She has grey fur and a white underbelly. Or, do you have a Marlfox book cover with a Marlfox on it? Like that if ye do. Mauran Axestripe  Talk to me!, 00:30, 16 January 2009 (UTC)

Update! Hope you enjoy!
Update on The True Tale of Rukky Garge, this is a big'un!--Tree Climber  Talk! 02:18, 16 January 2009 (UTC)

i don't know how to write in Graphic novel script format, but
being a screenwriter, I know how to do a movie script, so that's how I formatted it.

Enjoy! If you don't understand the terminology, ask me.

yeah, I cheated on the descriptions.

EXT ARIEAL SHOT MOSSFLOWER WOODS

A red dot can faintly be seen. The sunrise is awash in many intense and glorious colors onto the clouds; many shades of blue, orange, purples, pink, red all decorate the sky on the horizon.

EXT MOSSFLOWER WOODS OUTER WALL OF ABBEY

One of the gates is ajar.

Superimpose: Hmm… looks like it’s going to be another crisp, beautiful autumn day.

EXT REDWALL ABBEY GROUNDS BY GATEHOUSE RECORDER

A window is in the wall. A middle aged squirrel maid with glasses holding a quill pen peers out dreamily. She is smiling.

Superimpose: From my window I see our Abbey grounds and oh how beautiful 'tis. I watch as the dead, many-hued leaves rustle and sigh as a playful breeze sweeps them away. They are brought before the glorious morning. The sunrise is awash many intense and glorious colors onto the clouds; many shades of blue, orange, purples, pink, red all decorate the sky on this wonderful morning.

INT GATEHOUSE RECORDER

The squirrel maid begins writing. A faint SCRATH is heard as she puts pen to paper.

Superimpose:The sun also seems to make our abbey stones become a pink-rosy hue with the walls providing a relief contrast and sense of security. Tis quite a marvelous sight to behold. I only wish I could be out there enjoying it before morning becomes alive with abbey life. But it cannot be so, I am duty bound to be our recorder.

INT GREAT HALL TAPESTRY OF MARTIN THE WARRIOR

The sword of Martin the Warrior hangs over the Tapestry. The pommel is red, carved in shape of a rose, and the hilt is bound with black leather. The blade,and metal holding the pommelstone in place are all the same silvery-white shade. However, the crosspiece is whiter and newer looking.

Superimpose: I am fairly new at it, but I am still eager to learn all about it. I am told by the last recorder, Brother Maltirks, that the job comes with its pleasures and its problems, one of which I believe I just relayed to you. But here is where I have good news, for the last several seasons I have been working on a writing, actually more of an account of the lives of many creatures. I must give many, many thanks to the kind abbey dwellers who have told me all they know about that long off tale. I have pieced together the stories to create the tale of "Tirborath." I have just finished it and I am to share the writings to all of Redwall (and yourself).

PAGE TWO

INT GATEHOUSE RECORDER

The maid closed the large leather bound journal. The contents look as if they had once been burned.

EXT ABBEY GROUNDS

We can see her closer- wearing a brown shawl over a brown habit, clutching the book close.

EXT ABBEY GROUNDS DOOR TO GREAT HALL

The door is open and Dibbuns are flooding out. The squirrel maid has a stern look

RECORDER: Hello, what’s this?

CLOSE UP DIBBUN SQUIRREL

DIBBUN: Da h’abbott sented us to fetch you. He says to maka sure you h’aint fallen asleap and forgetted about e’ story!

MEDIUM SHOT RECORDER SQUIRRELS

RECORDER: Ah, well, I'm on my way now!

PAGE THREE

FULL SHOT CAVERN HOLE REDWALLERS The recorder is dragged in with her paws by the Dibbuns.

CU CAVERN HOLE REDWALLERS

They are all silent, waiting for the story to start.

CU CAVERN HOLE RECORDER

She has opened up the book. She looks over her glasses at the crowd of eager Redwallers, obviously a bit nervous.

RECORDER: Fate, sorrow, love, death, hatred, war. Not too often do these things walk paw in paw, but in the time I will tell you of, they proceeded to do so. The lives I will tell you of are all intertwined by fate one way or another, living as friends and foes. ..

(chuckles)
Don't worry mate take as long as you need.--Soren Rudderdale (The Warrior)  Talk Matey! 18:04, 16 January 2009 (UTC)

Yo
Update on

Martin the Warrior II- RTN Part IV Shieldmaiden    Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 02:10, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

Update on
Tirborath(Sambrook's story RW)

A quick Q- you said that the squirrel's name was Tallborath, yet the storie's name is Tirborath- do I need to change it?

Also, yo mentioned that Tallow was black furred- was that intentonal? <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 03:16, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

Just thought I'd let you know
I'm working on a pic of Esmeralda. But, I stink at wildcats and realistic trees so don't expect it until tomarrow. Pinedance Coneslinger [[User talk:Pinedance Coneslinger|<font color="navy" size="2">Talk!--Pinedance Coneslinger 04:22, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

Update
on A Coneslinger's Revenge. Pinedance Coneslinger <font color="navy" size="2">Talk!--Pinedance Coneslinger 04:48, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

Busy
Sorry, if I haven't been active much, school has been keeping me busy and I'm re editing my 2 stories and writing a third one. After Januaray is over, I should be active again.

Great decision of allowing Shieldmaiden to continue your story, she can write it like it was her own

<font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain    <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 05:24, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

Re
change away. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 13:03, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

Tis Hollyfire
Cool signature! Backgrounds fit you perfectly!


 * <font color="orchid" style="background:Black">Hollyfire <font color="cyan" style="background:Black">Queen Tsarmina's Lair 13:17, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

Hola,
udate on Tirborath(Sambrook's story RW) I added something.

And yes, those are all fabed Redwall weapons.

Sella's is Zaran's blade, Tirbit had Orlando's Axe, Alba has Rakkety Tam's claymore (Or should I say doogy's?), Tallow has Martin's sword (wait till you see what I do with THAT!), Rivris had Finnbarr's blades (They're somewhere in the Redwall Gatehouse), And Driko has a ladle. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 14:12, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

BEFORE I FORGET
When you Draw Martin's sword in the GN, Make sure that in the picture when I have the recorder talking that the guard is whiter nd newer- looking on Martin's sword than the rest of the blade, but when you show a close up of it else where, make sure that the guard is grey. I'd tell you why, But It'd be a BIG giveaway. . .<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 16:24, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

Naughty boar
making the blade invincible but making the handguard ordinary silver. . . <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 18:24, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

MAJOR UPDATE
MTWII

Two dead!

Martin the Warrior II- RTN Part IV <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 04:58, 18 January 2009 (UTC)

?
"=O"? what's that supposed to mean? Or is it a smiley?<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 05:03, 18 January 2009 (UTC)

Update
Tirborath(Sambrook's story RW)

and

Martin the Warrior II- RTN Part IV

<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 14:42, 18 January 2009 (UTC)

Welcoming
As I explained to Shieldmaiden, could we not put "first" etc., on people's talk pages? It trivializes the whole process. --<font color="Green">LordTBT  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 17:43, 18 January 2009 (UTC)

Yo, Sambrook,
How you doing? Me bored. Can you look at Hollyfire's Tale? TY.


 * <font color="orchid" style="background:Black">Hollyfire <font color="cyan" style="background:Black">Queen Tsarmina's Lair 18:44, 18 January 2009 (UTC)

Do your best
And i'll love it!--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale (The Warrior)  <font color="Aqua" size="2">Talk Matey! 19:29, 18 January 2009 (UTC)

a note
Redwall the siege is th first 4 episodes. (Yeah, I've seen it). . . How's the GN going? <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 22:45, 18 January 2009 (UTC)

yes, i know,
i couldn't really concentrate on it because my brother was SCREAMING IN MY EAR and he kept moving the table. --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Please leave a message after the beep...or after you click 01:11, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

Update!
Update on The True Tale of Rukky Garge!--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 02:12, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

Don't Worry
the knife is fine.--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale (The Warrior)  <font color="Aqua" size="2">Talk Matey! 16:18, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

have you read update fro
A Tale of Two Quests cris started chapter one

about to update Tirborath, MTWII, and Tagg quest <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 17:48, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

Update
Tirborath(Sambrook's story RW) <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 18:15, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

Addd wot yew like
you are the original author, after all. (BTW< LOrd TBT deleted the pic you made of zounzdican for the illustration for Book One. Can you re-upload it?) <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 01:46, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

course I want to see
What's it called? never mind, I'l just check the upload log. BTW, update on Taggerung Quest <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 02:36, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

Thankee
Thankee thankee thankee etc. etc. <font color="Goldenrod ">Mauran Axestripe  <font color="goldenrod" size="2">Talk to me!, 02:49, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

Oh, no! It's perfect!<font color="Goldenrod ">Mauran Axestripe  <font color="goldenrod" size="2">Talk to me!, 02:51, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

THANK YOU!!!!!!!
I'm thinking about taking off the Matthias pic andletting Zounzdican run the show. What do you think? <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 02:52, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

== OK ==

How does it look? BTW, I'll be off for a second- on again ina sec unless something unexpected happens. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 03:01, 20 January 2009 (UTC) OK, I'm back now! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 03:05, 20 January 2009 (UTC)<

Sratch that. Bedtime, grrrr. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 03:08, 20 January 2009 (UTC)