User blog comment:Segalia/Journey of Warriors: A Sequel to SRV/@comment-1427879-20181231181436/@comment-2142396-20190127083257

Haha, 50% of fluff seems like a good description for this update! :D I admit I expected more action and plot from the otters’ section, but this update was enjoyable nonetheless. I like how you portrayed the process of healing and recovery after the battle with ‘troll’ so realistically and showed how much time and effort it takes to get back up after an injury. I myself tend to be guilty of skipping this element and throw my characters into action too quickly, so it was interesting to see the battle’s aftermath from another point of view. ;)

Another element I really liked is the camaraderie that formed between Seg, Lijel and the hares. At this point of the story the hares really became a part of the gang, though of course they are not as close to the otters as the rest of their band – I found myself especially attached to Shadow, she is my favourite of the trio. And 'the crew' has a raft now, however ramshackle it may be, so I guess it wouldn't take them long to get to Marlfox lake. I'm very looking forward to the next update, Segalia!

P.S. By the way, you mistakenly typed 'Riplar' a couple of times when you probably meant Rocky or Bounder. ;P