User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/The Curse of the Bloody Waves (2012)/@comment-4983187-20120417030437

Nice! Bit of advice to help you:

"Ah, little one gone insane!"

she said.

Don't know if it's a formatting issue or anything, but just saying, it looks less confusing if you put it like so:

"Ah, little one gone insane!" she said.

Just putting it out there. Liking the fanfic! Keep me updated! ~The Ghost Writer