User blog comment:Burglebuber/Burglebuber Sixclaw: A Tale of Redwall/@comment-3148757-20130414200026

I have to agree with Biklay; not a terrible story but it was far too rushed. Try to slow the story down a bit in future works so that the action, flow, etc are all equally balanced out. Overall, I found the action hard to follow and the chapters were definitely too short, however, practice makes perfect and if you keep these things in mind I'm sure you'll find success! :)