User blog comment:Segalia/Segalia Riverstorm's voyage/@comment-1427879-20120703180804

Here's the edited version! The first book, being the oldest, obviously received the most treatment. Events are tweaked, grammar issues fixed, sentence structures improved, accents made better etc. There's quite a bit of little changes, maybe even enough for you to read it all again! That said, having gone back through this, I'm thankful to every one of my readers who read the first part and still continued. The first book is only about a fifth of the final fanfic, if even, so it shouldn't take too long to read. The whole fanfic is about 52,000 words.

The second book mainly received grammar and accent fixes. However, I did change the song in Ch. 7 Pt. 1 that Nottenc sings to Mumzy. It is now one that I made up. Fun fact: my fav. chap. is probably ch. 10. But I do like most of it...luckily enough :P The third book is mainly commas. I probably could have done more in some areas, but I'm happy with the way it is for now. Please respond to the two new polls! If you answered the third option for the first poll, please inform me of any linking, spelling or other issues you have found. Thanks!

@Salem: High praise indeed! I'm sorry that you cried, but happy that it had that effect. Does that make sense?

@SilverP: Idk how to respond to this. :DD was literally my face the whole time I read your comment. So thank you very much! I'm glad you're looking forward to the sequel. Silver's char, even second generation, was interesting to write so thank you for letting me borrow him! I'm glad you like my writing style...BJ himself? Wow...that, obviously, means a lot to me. Thank you. Will do! I'm just glad you commented in the end!

@Starpetal: Absolutely! Yeah, I'm kinda sad too. It was fun to write! Thank you! Yeah, it did; in the original version, she was actually protecting Malrua against other Redwallers, but it turned out a bit different. Thank you! And don't be hard on yourself, Noonvale is good! I'm glad you enjoyed it; thank you! Ah, I was wondering about that. Thank you for commenting now!