User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-26879391-20150905173321

Oh man! I finally got around to read this! I feel so accomplished!

Alright. For starters, Freedom and Maple are just lovable characters! They're mature, but with a touch of child-like innocence. I hope to see them in the future! Also, nice touch with the Squirrels, Broom being Maple's father and all.

Oh, Shamra Shamra Shamra Shamra Shamra. What is Astar going to do to you? I am interested to see how the Weaselmaid is going to end up. However, her choice makes a lot of sense, on her character. Nabon's choice also makes sense, although I'm also interested in him as well.

Daaaaang. Everyone is getting the Bloodwrath! Simon is a pretty interesting character, though he leans toward the side of most Redwall Champions; cool, calm, collective. Olva is also pretty nice. I wish we could've seen more of her in the beginning. As for the Snake Ark (I'm sorry...I forgot her name!), I was kind of disapointed that the snake wasn't as friendly as she seems. However, it's very normal for an adder! Rarely in Redwall would a Snake be nice. Also, touching on Abbess Bikkle, I'm very happy to see her! I'm glad to see her mature to an adult! As for Triss, well, good ol' Trisscar stayed the same, which is nice to see! That little bushtail just won't give up!

My Favorite part was by far the ROLT. I love Norse Mythology, and It was enjoyable to spot all the little references! Ull is just so likable! Reminds me of Sam Shukusky from "Moonrise Kingdom."

I was caught off guard that Surt was Skoggi's father! I always imagined the Stoat being this sulky teenager. It was very heartwarming to see Surt and Skoggi interact among each other! Laufey is also very sweet!

Uh Oh! Things don't seem to be going well for the Otter Trio! Simon, Olva, and Moska make a very enjoyable team! It's nice to see Olva get some action, at last. Poor Nabon. He's becoming a puppet of his father! That's not good at all! Although, I must say, he did kind of ask for it.

Now, onto Foxglove and Kars. That was a very touching story, I must say. For one, they seemed to have a pretty Sand and Fire Relationship (If you get that reference~). However, their warming up to each other was very sweet to read about. I'm rooting for Foxglove, but I also don't want Turfee to die!

This is a very Redwall-like Fanfic! I'd be nice to have updates! KIC!