User blog comment:Llamao/Vaheenra Longfletch: Book One/@comment-1738724-20110326085911

Well, there was a few typos at the beginning of Chapter Three, I think. So the 'Wraith' is already betraying, eh?

The way you described Lord Greypelt and Frintshed is the same way as BJ did with Lord Stonepaw and Fleetscut. Likewise with Abbott Jenkus and how he got Abbott, and he has conditions, as well as bringing up the food to Skipper and the 'friend, foe, or food?' thing. Just and observation.

The badger is coming for Nadezca... I hope he doesn't kill himself. I think Trindle was dreaming of Nadezca. I think Trindle gonna become a warrior, since he handles kitchen knife wherever he goes...KIC!