User blog comment:LordTBT/News:Redwall Wiki Art Contest 2009 Voting/@comment-1031927-20091103011043

OK- criticism time!!!

1: The head is disproportionate

2:Eye placement seems off

3:The sword and hand placement is wrong

4:No criticism

5:Too human, chest, hips and paw seem wrong, and the tail is too long

6:Paws wrong, door handles not colored

7:Too girly, tail too long for a sable

8:No criticism

9:Eye placement wrong, nose askew, and tail seems awkward. Also the paws

10:Arms too spindly, tail wrong for a sable, ear placement inaccurate, hips too narrow

11:Something about the paws and the tail

12:Snout too narrow for a sable and the tail.