User blog comment:The Dicer/The Shadow Jester/@comment-1427879-20120612145110

Once you put of instead of on but otherwise I think you were free of mistakes. I had a feeling the cloaked figure would be a vermin. I like the idea of the Band, probably the hope the old hare was talking about. My only question would be why none of the wives or elder children can come with them; I like the idea of using the Marlfox Island though. KIU!