User blog comment:Skipper Rorc/The Runaway/@comment-988934-20100101232803

This is without a doubt, one of the most well written fanfictions I've ever read, somehow it looks like you are following Brian Jacques way of writing his sequences then *zip*, it curves around, yet it still has what makes it Redwall.

Details are wonderful, I especially like how you included the difference between sea otters and river otters. Not many people realize that the two types of otters only share the same name and subfamily, beyond that, fur length and texture, size, weight, etc. are all different. Also the hint to Russano's research about Lord Brocktree was a nice touch

I see very little grammar and spelling errors, which means less typing for me xD

I'm actually pretty skeptical about seers and although it's part of Mist's "visions", I find that the order of looking for a wandering babe with a daggar to be very unrealistic itself coupled with the fact there is a daggar toting wandering babe...yea...probability just went out the window...