User blog comment:Selound/Tyde/@comment-2207385-20110423220932

what I nice story to read, the scenery in the begining was an exceptional work and really brought the story to a vivid start, I was surprised to see such detail in the connection between all the characters mentioned, since its barely the begining of the story it usually takes a bit more time for that to become apparent, nice job!! and good start!

Happy storytelling!!