User blog comment:Ronnie Macleaf/Freedom Pirates/@comment-1427879-20120219002730

Wasn't Farhol following them? I wonder what's going to happen between him and Sophie in the end. Your dialogue is good but your grammar could still use some work. The description at the top is all falling into place now! Wan and Sophie will get captured by the vermin party for Makko and maybe eventually the ship will come. And i wonder what happened to Dvun. KIU!