User blog comment:Skipper Rorc/The Rise of Freedom-Part 2/@comment-1427879-20130502020918

So, I did have to go back and read a bit to gain some context and remember the story since it's been so long. Besides one or two punctuation errors, there was a missing t from though and once you put stoop instead of stood. As for the update itself, it was good. I liked the fight scenes though I find the jumping off a guard's head slightly implausible. I also really liked the description of Colan when his parents died. This is definitely a new twist so it'll be really cool to see you continue it! The delay does make me feel better about the lack of updating on my own fanfics, but oh well. Good job, Rorc, KIU!