User blog comment:Varkanax39/The Last Champion: A Novel of Redwall (fanfic)/@comment-8728029-20120701054535

"...and eternity claimed her." I really like that phrase; it's beautiful. I might have to steal it at some point. May I? Please? Pretty please with cherries on top? Okay, fine, I'll stop being ridiculous.

ANYWAYS, great update! Poor Meliana, poor Rodan... Where's Raya? This story is so dark, but I guess it's a nice change from my writing, because I am pretty terrible at writing dark scenes, so even the saddest moments tend to be rather light.

Sorry it took me so long to comment; I was away with no internet access and just came back today.