User blog comment:Searat/Visit of the Vermin/@comment-5156759-20120605201044

Seems very interesting, excellent prologue! The only thing that's kind of iffy is the "to lull me to sleep so she can eat me" bit. Has he lived with his mother his whole life, and if so, wouldn't he have known she doesn't eat anyone? Or, if he hasn't does this need to mentioned? Other than that, fantastic; please keep me updated!