User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Raven's Feather/@comment-1427879-20170921173055

Well done, Astar! Brittle was a good choice as peacemaker, though I thought they might go with another species for true neutrality. The bit about Rodd definitely surprised me. It was a test, which makes sense with the ravens' moral code, but wow that was harsh. I'm glad he didn't die though! It was good to see how everything worked out with the epilogue. I liked the study abroad/exchange student idea. I wish we'd gotten to see more of Skylily, but otherwise, it was a nice wrap up. Nice job, Astar! LMK if you choose to write another story in this verse.