User blog comment:Cap'n Bloodheart/the land of the bunadein/@comment-5942879-20131019200855

Nice story, you need chapters though. You also need to fix some spelling, like when you said "It has to bee in here" its supposed to be "It has to be in here." You also need to make a space when the speaker changes. Like this.

"Move!" Said the Weasel.

"Aye, sir!" Said the stoat. Other than that, good story i'd say. I'll keep helping you along the way :) Also, I WANT AN UPDATE!