User blog comment:Abriella Laterose/Maid's Quest/@comment-10322010-20130706143142

Nope, no hard feelings :)  I appreciate constructive criticism and people pointing out where I can improve! I actually did have my paragraphs split up where it was easy to read on my Microsoft word but when I copied it over it didn't keep it that way so I guess I need to read back through and re- separate the paragraphs... but thanks for pointing that out!

A good part of this story does take place at Redwall and throughout Mossflower woods. It's actually supposed to be just after the time of the Taggerung. The main character is actually Deyna's daughter. I know it really only mentions wolves once in the Redwall series but I like wolves and thought it would be interesting to have a few in the story...