Thread:Riftgard Princess/@comment-1719793-20111030085642/@comment-1719793-20111030193326

hmm, maybe we could discuss the story by writting summaries of the chapter. Here's what I mean:

''chapter one, this chapter takes place in marshank, then to Clogg's ship. At Marshank, two vermin notice Aquastar laying on the wall tops where she could accidentally fall. They tell Badrang who tells her to get off. She does and comes across Tailwart. They notice a ship in the distance, but don't bother to tell Badrang about it.

then it takes place on Clogg's ship, where he's "overjoyed" to see Badrang. Lonny is below decks, away from the crew. She's working on her journal (assumingly she might've kept one). Then Crimsonpaw (Bluddnose's mate) tells Lonny that they're going to go land at shore. Lonny nods, and the searat leaves the young stoat to her doing. After finishing her writing, Lonny goes on deck and has a disscussion with her father about Badrang, in whom she had mild knowledge of. He tells her the story, and mentions about Vilu Dasker, whom was dead during this.''

I'm still planning it out, but I was wondering if you like where this is going so far?

but, I kinda need a ref of Juni first ^.^ do you think you can post one?

oh, I forgot about that one, my bad ^.^' I'll work on it ASAP