User blog comment:Peony Laminar/Peony Laminar/@comment-From the South/@comment-1428497-20100525220041

Chapter 26, first section, 7th paragraph- Song’s inquiring look, “Foremole wrote a chapter for Abbess Germaine on how he engineering the flood...  shouldn't it be engineered?

and in the 9th paragraph- Song followed her mother’s example and took a scones from the plate and after shaking off the excess sugar, bit into it. a scones? :) and a comma is missing after plate

I'm not sure if you meant it but every time Hawthorne does/says something it's always Hawthorne smile or Hawthorne laughed. It strikes me a funny. idk why. xD

Love it!!! I BE EXCITED!!! I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT DANN!!! YAY!!!! update soon mate! BTW, where's my gold sticker?!?!

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