User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/Four Warriors Cometh/@comment-25921040-20151022144727/@comment-7662967-20151022192229


 * Heeheehee* Yea, me too. Every time I reread this I laugh over the 'Bags of tails' *doubles over* Cludd is so beyond brilliant :D Still mad at Roderick? (well I'll admit he deserves it) :P Yes ... for now at least <_< but hey, it lasts awhile ;)

Wait. *checks date* Yes! It is FWC's first birthday!! Ohmygosh it is! :D *throw confetti and sings 'Happy birthday'* XD I agree, no matter how many I write, something about FWC makes me love it. It's not my best prose anymore, the scale of ideals is set up wrong, and the villain is 2D, but somehow ..... I can't help but still love the story :D Probably because it was the first book I wrote that really turned out well. ;3

Meh .. I think 'Accused' is better, in my own mind, because the mechanics are set up just about perfectly. The villain, Xzanthia, portrays deception, and the hero, Veil, portrays honesty (which is the perfect scale of ideals) Yea, don't get me talking about story mechanics, I'll just ramble and ramble. It has to do with the curriculum I'm it, OYAN (one year adventure novel) It's really super awesome, but it makes me very aware of clichés, cardboard villains, poorly set up themes and premises, perfect heroes, and many more things that can go wrong in a story lol.

Still, either way, I firmly believe if I'd known what I was doing better, FWC could have matched Accused neck to neck (I'm not gonna say one would be better cause I love them both way too much XP ) But TotO ... that one has a chance to outshine them both, if I just do it right ... (I think you will love that book, I just have the gut feeling. It's been four years in the making, and I'm getting super excited about it .... :P But no matter what I do, I can always enjoy rereading FWC .. just because it's FWC ... XD

As for my writing getting better, I'm gonna credit that to lots of practice, and OYAN ^^

Made up words = awesomeness. <<lol)) XD Nah, don't be sorry :D I missed talking with you, so it's great! *hugs* *gives oreos* (cause I love oreos) :P