User blog comment:Varkanax39/The Last Champion: A Novel of Redwall (fanfic)/@comment-1427879-20120618165839

As powerful and crafty Rivan is, try to make sure that you don't make him too powerful same as you would try not to make your heroes too powerful. It'll make Redwall's (assumed) defeat of him all the more interesting, but there has to be a limit. That said, I was right about the Riddle! I guess now that they're forced out of Redwall, they have more chances to go get help from Salamandastron. Good job to Naila indeed though that was a depressing scene with everybeast falling. KIU!