User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/The Veil is Torn/@comment-26879391-20151018193508

Ah! I finally Caught up with the "Accused" Train! I feel so accomplished ^^ I didn't comment on aSC or DmS, So this Comment will be...Rather long, so to say.

First off, Ships (Always important in my book~!). Frippedric (Fripple and Cedric) seems to be the main couple. Their Love/Hate relationship is very amusing to watch. Oh, Frip, lighten up! Vesther (Veil and Esther), is also very cute, more sweet, in all truth. Veil's obliviousness makes me want to scream at the screen (I'm not even kidding.) Vinatkin (Vinwyte and Catkin), is also cute, but I'd like to see a bit more of their character; a little more depth. However, for now, my main OPT has to be Aubyron (Aubrieta and Byron). Aubrieta is my favorite character so far; mainly because she looks and acts like me! I can relate to her and her quips. I can imagine her growing up to be the royal strategist of Mossflower, in my mind. Byron is just so soft-spoken, that he and Aubrieta are just a lovely match! (Oh Sayna...Pleeeeeze! I will see that the SS Aubyron will sail!)

Xzanthia is an interesting villain. In the beginning, I thought little to nothing of her at first, until she had her first meeting with Tyre. I must say, you did a good job developing her! She seems a much more believable villain, rather than Swartt or Shroud. She actually has goals! As for her relationship with Veil, I sort of predicted it. Ever since I learned both Esmunde and Xzanthia where both Wearets, I thought, "Both are Wearets...maybe their brother and sister! :O" However, I put it to the side of my head. The only question I have, is...WHO IS XZANTHIA'S MOTHER? (Bum bum BUM)

I like how you you made Southsward take an Arabic Approach. It's a breath of fresh air, in my mind. Lady Lilly is a very nice character, as are Zarya and Co. I'd like to see Southsward, maybe, in later years; see how she's coping.

The Catacombs where a great part! The treasure room was beautifully described; I could almost see it myself! I also liked Freyna and her Vampire bats; they seem like a nice bunch, a diffrent class then the usual Redwall Bats (Which I do love :3). I didn't really like Loki, which I guess was to be expected. I almost thought she died for a bit, before reading the end of Dream Seekers. Also, will Aisha make an appearance? She seems interesting.

Ah, things are about to get sticky! Martin is drifting away more and more, making him even more vulnerable. I was really tense, when reading his meeting with Sayna and T.B. And, like Reep said, Martin isn't going to like to see Veil's horde. It's funny; he's begining to be more pregidous to vermin, while he seems all well and fine toward Xzanthia. Oh, the Irony!


 * Sigh* Bluefen, Bluefen, Bluefen. You went ahead of yourself, lass! Bluefen's death was heart-wrenching, after reading about her suffering. I wish she could've had a happier ending, but, alas, it doesn't work that well. Swartt and Shroud deserved what they deserved. As for Kinta, Skadu, and Zenith, well, may Fate be kind...

Filip and Co. seem to be interesting. It's sad that He can't get his point across to Xzanthia. Hopefully, He'll get his point across in time. As for Martin's Sword, let's just say, that Filip isn't going to have it easy at Redwall Abbey...