User blog comment:Redmight/Knights of Redwall/@comment-1427879-20110614113457

Well, to start there were several grammar, spelling and puctuation errors as well as run-ons throughout. Besides that it was very good. You took time to do description. That was a long first chapter. Rusco was a very interesting beast. I wonder how the babies are going to grow up...probably a good rat here! I had a feeling that Rusco was protecting a baby rat. I think Raylond has some sort of battle rage that helps him...I'm not entirely sure though. Well, KIU!