User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/How to write good Redwall fanfiction, Part Two/@comment-5156759-20130417211707

Good job on the article (why the weird spacing?), is that all the tips you have though?

I have one or two more by the way, if you don't mind once again.

Word Choice: Very important, make sure you have a good variety of nouns and adjectives; don't use the same word too often, try to start every sentence in a paragraph with a different word, use synonyms as opposed to the same word twice... Little things like that really add up.