User blog comment:Ferretmaiden/Folgrims Past/@comment-1298206-20100501165829

I'm on chapter 1. So far, so good. Only problem: Just out of the blue (bad pun XD) Folgrim asks Martin if he ever fell in love? Don't see me as criticizing. You could build up unto that point. For instance, Folgrim wakes up, looks in the mirror and sees his disfigured face. He thinks about how he obtained the injuries and wonders if it was worth it. He starts talking to Martin and asks him if he has ever fallen in love.