User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/The Warriors Begining/@comment-1427879-20150925005324/@comment-7662967-20150925015158

Hi! Hey, thanks so much! Yea, I love your new update, and will comment as soon as I can :) Before I start replying, do let me tell you that this, being my first book, is also my worst and I'm a little ashamed of it ..:P

Umm ... well idk I write about every night, which in turn really starts to stack up .. I just love writing, and do believe me when I say this is old .. I've improved considerably ..

Aww thank you, yes, Groddil ^^ I loved him in the original (not sure why but yea) and I wanted to use him more. Well, I hope I started explaining myself a lot more as I've gone on, but reading this again I'm even confused sometimes ..


 * bows* You have indeed guessed correctly ;) But how I bring her back is the fun part >:)

Well, I fear that was the intention. I meant to sort of .. show he had imperfections. And as poorly as it written, I'm honestly surprised I conveyed any emotion at all ;P

Yes, oh yes. The Gruven thing is so poorly executed I'm almost unable to read it anymore :/ Well, I can say toward middle/end FWC there is a serious jump, and from then on I hope I've kept getting better :) I've had some say if I do get an original story written I may be able to publish it, but I'm not sure I feel I'm that good. Though that is one of my dreams in life, to be an author :)

Well ... I'll admit even I was unsure about headfur at first, but being an artist/fantasy designer as well, no headfur really started getting ... *sigh* boring, if you understand. I mean, I want to make each character look .. unique. Though I understand it is a very different feel. Well .. I'm not either, as I showed Sally (or should I say, Sayna (feels weird, calling her 'Sally') did not go for it. And Roderick, as poorly developed a character as he is, plays drastically important roles in future books >;)

Well, honestly, I like to talk. I like to talk about most anything, but if you start talking about something I've written .. I just get carried away. And I will blurt spoilers, my own thoughts and ideas, my reasons, and also what my cat did yesterday. I'm a random person XP

Thank you so much! ^^ You don't know how happy I am to see people can actually enjoy this book, at least to an extent, cause .. I can barely reread it anymore. I've thought of rewriting, but with several other fanfics not written, and an original project on the drawing board .. IDK. Besides I might die reading it, cause I can be pretty over critical of my own work :P I'm glad this was somewhat enjoyable and not a complete fail ;)

And I will be commenting on JoW tonight or tomorrow night, depending :3