User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/Four Warriors Cometh/@comment-25720178-20141231044648

I love Sayna's reaction to seeing Roderick! I can tell she doesn't consider him a as friend, I wonder why? (Sorry, typing sarcasm doesn't work) I find the different between Timbal's and Sayna's reactions... Interesting (In a good way.)

There's so much happening, it's interesting to see howeach piece of the puzzle fits perfectly, from Salmandastron, to the ships, from Kotir, to Brockhall, and Mossflower entirely. Well done!

I'm really starting to like Regina, she's an interesting character.

There are so many cliffhangers! And the suspense is excellent!

One if my favorite parts of this Fanfiction is the mental divisions involing the Lords, I can see you were influenced from other sources. I really like that factor! It adds a lot of depth and realism.

Never stop. Never. Keep writing!

As for me in my Fan fiction, I've added a new chapter, but I can't help but feel like I'm going in circles. Something's just... Off. I don't feel remotely skilled, and I'm loosing interest because I feel as though it may be semi-a lost cause. I'd appreciate advise if you have time.

I apologize for the amount of comments I leave, but there's so much to say!