User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/A little night music/@comment-24479943-20140318235613

Sorry I took so long to review. :P Anyway, I really loved this fan fic! It did have a few problems - for example, Leah sorta vanished, and when Drake and co. met Nitram for the first time, they went their separate ways but then met up somehow later on (it didn't explain how). But overall I really enjoyed reading it! It was just… epic! Vilaya has a really interesting backstory (how did you think it up?) and her death scene was really sad, even though she's the villain! And at first I thought Jangus was a bit annoying, but then he got a whole lot better. :D And I thought it was pretty funny when Gideon said "Let them eat cake", and the Hunger Games reference. :D

So why did you decide to write about Vilaya? And how did you think this up? :)