Thread:SalemtheCruel/@comment-4547544-20111026174217

The next two chapters are difficult for me. They describe the preparations and the Holdings of a great feast in redwall. But I'm not good at this so i want to ask if you could do some greater editing on them. There are only two parts i want to stay. 1. The fishing during the preparations and 2. the swimming race during the feast. On the rest you can do what you think is the best.

Ps: Thanks to the jolly good work you did on the former chapters,wot! 