User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/A Spell Cast/@comment-2142396-20150819173610

Ash, nooo!! …and Xzanthia really turned the use of Malimore’s power around. If Lotor was running around with metaphorical axe, Xzanthia picked up a scalpel. Her methods, though… Now I see why Swartt doesn’t let her on solo missions. The kid just ruined all her work by talking to herself! :D Also, I keep forgetting to mention it, but I’m quite suspicious about Xzanthia’s glove… especially since you actually described it as ‘bracer disguised as a glove’.

I love Glow, what’s interesting because I could never fully connect with Luna, but I do with Glow. I like how he gets to be a voice of reason to Bryony.

Sheep for the rescue! These guys provide great comic relief. :D And why I am not surprised that Mizzah’s relations with Cedric are far from happy? ;) I don’t know if you plan to explore the subject in ‘Dream Seekers’, but I’m really curious about Cedric’s parents. Why his mother had such bad relations with her brother? Why Cedric says she wasn’t all good? How did she die? And what about Cedric’s father? So many questions!

I like Lilly’s chapters, though I got to wonder while it took her so long to find out about the forged edicts. Shouldn’t she know what happens in her city, especially if the changes are as big as slavers quarters moving?

One minor thing that bothers me is how almost everyone who knows of prophecy keeps saying that Veil is the hero and they need him to save Redwall… So they rely on him instead of taking the responsibility and saving the day themselves. I’m actually half-expecting a twist revealing that the prophecy is really about Esmund or Xzanthia, though I know the chances are low.

On a side note, I like Romsca’s new look! I hadn’t thought her to look similar to Veil color-wise until you pointed it out… but that reddish-brown and chocolate look really good! I think I like her new hairstyle better than her old braid, too.