User blog:The Thorn/The Thorn/Nightfall

First Chapter

Surely no one would think that Erriz was a warlord. He was short, wore plain clothing, he was actually quite gentle-spoken. You might say that that is quite impossible. But note that looks do not reflect everything. On one misty autumn morn, 2 ermine were walking through their camp in Mossflower Wood. They both were wearing grey tunics and chainmail armor. Soldiers! "I don't think it makes a difference if we take more soldiers or go attack the Abbey, with how many troops we have" said one of the ermine, by the name of Talik. "On the other hand, his Lordship doesn't wish another failure." said the fatter one, Marlig. "You mean the debacle at the Badger's Mountian?" "Quite" Talik smirked,"I wasn't there but I heard that Erriz got a proper dismissile from the Badger Lord"

I've still got to work on it please don't shoot me