User blog comment:Nitram the Warrior/Phantome Chronicles: Embodiment/@comment-3462718-20110601152203

Finished reading it. Pretty good so far; a few minor errors but otherwisevery enjoyable. LMK if you want me to read more when you update. :)

P.S. if you want a suggestion, you may want to pay attention to tense in the future; there were quite a few spots where the story was written in present tense (they have instead of they had, etc.)