User blog comment:Jazz987/Barabell/@comment-26538658-20150702232059

Good job, I can see our Barabell might steal it, runs off with her newborn child, and soon she realizes what she did wrong, and goes to return them. However, she is too late, as our story's antagonist is already attacking the Abbey. She leaves her young one in the bushes, and after she comes back, the babe is gone. The antagonist has taken the young one, to be raised evil. She pleads for the Abbey-dwellers to help her get it back, but no one volunteers but Patrick and Agatha. The three get the young one back, and using the sword, she defeats the antagonist, and raises her young one as a Dibbun in the Abbey. (Unknowingly spoiled the entire story) Anyway, no matter how it ends, this is a great fanfic! :) And feel free to visit Salamandastron any time, you'll get a royal welcome! Regards, Snowstripe the Fierce