User blog comment:Peony Laminar/Peony Laminar/@comment-From the South/@comment-74.4.72.122-20100513180342

There were only 2 grammar typos, but I forgot where they are. I suppose someone else'll find 'em. Sorry.

Dann was a little harsh at the beginning. What ticked him off? BTW, i don't think he and Fleetpaw are gonna make it back. Am i right? Liked the part about Peony and Turnsol. They make a cute couple!

Can't wait for the next chapter! It be's gettin' dangerous! heehee!

-Again, Windy >.<