User blog comment:Layla Goldeneyes/Layla of Redwall/@comment-1399757-20090906022343

Other than that it's doing great!
 * True, it is very possible to be shot with an arrow and survive, it really depends on the arrowhead and the spin that it's given when going through the air. Fantastic storyline but there are some text errors: "She 'drunk' her 'full'." Should be, "She drank her fill."
 * "She 'toke' in her surroundings." Should be "She took in her surroundings."