User blog comment:Nitram the Warrior/Phantome Chronicles: Embodiment/@comment-1427879-20110219082553

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Besides that this is interesting! A Marlfox daughter that we didn't know about? Who's about to be captured? Why did she go back to the island? What has she been doing all these years? Maybe the dormouse will come to her rescue. Maybe she'll befriend them. This is pretty interesting. KIU!