User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Cripple/@comment-1427879-20150107230908

Oh my goodness, Astar! This looks like a really promising story. I can't even begin to tell you how honored I am to have this story dedicated to me! Thank you so much! I'm so flattered :). I'm not sure if I remember that particular comment, but I'm glad it inspired this story. It looks like a fun ride! Redtail gained my respect a little, in his on point comments about Razorclaw. I wonder if he'll show up again. The situation of Kyle's parents is quite sad...but I sense that they're moving on to new territory now. Definitely keep me updated!

Also, I noticed that you responded to my comment on For Freedom the other day that you were ashamed about your minor grammatical errors. You really shouldn't be! Small errors and mistakes are normal: often getting out the story is more important than minor details and it can be hard to catch them in a readover. Also, many of your mistakes are ones that native English speakers would make. Your use of the English language is better than a large number of native English speakers I know and and the skill with which you wield it astounds me every time I think about. It's really amazing to me what you're doing, writing stories in your non-native language, and I'm sure it plays a great deal into your mastery of English. I've seen quite a deal of improvement just in your time here at the Wiki and I'm sure you'll continue to get better, so keep up the great work! Don't be discouraged, cause you're doing amazing.