User blog comment:Vesper the Brisk/The Brisk's Breeze/@comment-1630956-20100427030728

Wow, I bet he has bad burns...ouch.

Brod at first thought it was more of the vermin, but cleared out the thought when he saw the fairly large badger hand him over to vixen.

It should be "hand him over to a vixen" or "the vixen".

Other than that it's good, if you take the time to look at the links and see that Kenina is good (if you don't it's a little confusing). KIC!