User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1859920-20120111214045

Wow! Looks great! I havn't finished reading it yet, but it looks great. I think I did see some spellIng mistakes, but most English speaking fanfictioners make the same mistakes. And one other thing, Toran was actuly Bragoon's OLDER brother, not younger brother. Keep me updated please and KIC!