User blog comment:Hollyfire53/Bluestripe the Warrior/@comment-1630956-20100514202128

Gee, there goes the notion that all hares can work together...Y'know, yore evil for ending an update like that...in the middle of a sentence. One problem:  One, a shiftly-looking fox, brandished his spear. "No Unauthorized Entry." Shiftly should be shifty The next chapter is a day after they enter the palace? So they spend an entire day in the palace? Weren't they taken straight to Night? Their ploy would be exposed as soon as they were taken to Night...unless Rorc actually is second in command to Night, which would be interesting...UPDATE PLEASE!