User blog comment:Hollyfire53/The Ultimate War Character Request/@comment-1784054-20100814185100

Hey Holly! I have a hare and a shrew here, if you want to use them. :)

Long Patrol Private


 * Name/nicknames: Adaerna sundew Seastar Gavvinsol Spearwort
 * Species: hare
 * Gender: female
 * Appearance: Adaerna is very pretty for a hare, with dark brown eyes, long ears, and sandy fur that pales to cream on the underbelly. She has a nick on her left ear, and an arrow graze on her back. (training accident- her brother missed the target and almost hit her instead) she wears the long patrol uniform mostly (red tunic, cream-colored shirt), but when off-duty wears simple kirtles or tunics.
 * Personality: Her personality tends to vary depending on who she's around. To her commanding officers, she's the calm and efficient subordinate, with friends, she shows her more cheeky, gluttonous side. she's good, all the way, and intensely loyal to Salamandastron and all it stands for.
 * Weapons: sabre, halberd or pike.
 * Brief History: Adaerna was born the youngest of fourteen, in Redwall Abbey. Her parents were the retired patrollers Sergeant Forlect and the paw soldier, Sandbreeze. When she was fourteen, she was recruited by Plocko, the young private, and her mentor, Captain Gorseye. Adaerna went with them, and arrived at the mountain when she was sixteen. She quickly wormed her way into the officers hearts, and made a name for herself as the quickest haremaid dueler, and is now seventeen seasons old.
 * Main character/background: Um.. What does this mean?
 * Where you want character to appear/preferable death: Salamandastron, wherever you need her. I'd really rahter she doesn't die, as she has a whole wide life before her, and dying would rather mess up her promotion plans.
 * What they are/rank: Private.
 * Anything else I should know: Um... Nup!

And now, for that female Guosim!


 * Name/nicknames: Renna (self-titled 'the rapier')
 * Species: shrew
 * Gender: female
 * Appearance: Renna is a typical shrew; short, gray, spiky-furred, black-eyed. She isn't pretty, but isn't ugly, either. She wears a blue-, green- and purple-striped kilt, with a light blue, sleeveless tunic, broad brown belt, and gold earrings. Her ears have a few rips in them, gained from fights. (that she started, mainly, :P). She has a rapier thrust into her belt, and a pouch for slingstones.
 * Personality: She's grumpy, irascible, and always ready for an argument. When in a good mood, she makes dry jokes, laughs, and is fairly flexible, but when in a bad mood, which is more frequent, she's been known to punch somebeast for looking at her the wrong way.
 * Brief History: She was born to Fingle and Cuppan, Guosim shrews. She grew up on the river Moss, and met some of her longest-lasting friends traveling it's waters. As a child, she always had to be the best at everything, and worked constantly until she was. Cuppan, her mother, died when Renna was eight seasons old. This influenced the shrew a lot, and afterwords, she became much more sarcastic and cynical. When she was sixteen, she decided to roam Mossflower without her tribe, and travelled to Salamandastron with her friend, Rosheen, an otter. After three seasons, they went back to Redwall, and Renna joined the Guosim as an adult. She is now 22.
 * Main character/background: Um.. What does this mean?
 * Where you want character to appear/preferable death: Where the rest of the Guosim are. A good death would be kicking out bad-guy butt, but, like Adaerna, I have a later life planned out for her which would be messed up by her dying.
 * What they are/rank: grumpy, badass shrew.
 * Anything else I should know: Renna is very averse to sexism, and any comments on her gender are taken badly. The commenter usually ends up with a black eye.

Um, yes... Please don't kill my characters!