User blog comment:Clockworthy/The Thunder Queen/@comment-1988904-20100529185851

Great update, Clockworthy! I got a bit confused at first, looking for the second chapter, so I just read the thing over again. The update flowed really nicely with the rest.

All of the characters are so engaging and aptly named. I can't wait to see what becomes of the rest of them. The little foxbabe is so cute!