User blog comment:Redfarl/A Necklace for Aunt Petunia/@comment-1738724-20100911080634

Okay...wow, that was one short story. It was good, but just too short. By the way, make a new paragraph each time a new person talks. That way its easier to read and there won't be these huge blocks of writing.

Grall is the same name as my otter character too! And its the name of a bird who served for Ublaz in Pearls of Lutra. Must be a popular name ;) But originally its BJ's. I'm guessin' you had no idea that it was the actually the name of a character in the books? Don't worry, I didn't know either.