User blog comment:Hollyfire53/The Ultimate War/@comment-1145722-20100806210802

hmmm...... you know, as much as I hate to admit it.... this is getting quite complicated. But the story is still intriguing.

As a fellow fan fic writer and a friend Holly, I must say that this is going to take a long time to wrap up.

But KIC, because I want to see how it all fits together. :)

@Shadow: Alright, it's one thing critiquing the story, but it's another to point out misspellings in people's user names. I know that you're just stating your opinion, but please keep it relevant.