User blog comment:Clockworthy/The Thunder Queen/@comment-1630956-20100526190401

Write on paper first! Ah, oh well, you can always write it again. It will be slightly different of course, but it can't be helped.

Hmm, so who's the main character? Sayice Lapwing, or the foxbabe? Possibly both... Who's the abbey warrior fellow? Is he talking about a current abbey warrior, or Martin influencing somebeast? I can see a hint of Holly in Sayice's personality, although i wouldn't call it half just yet. I haven't said it yet, but great beginning!

Two more things. A) Update me, although you probably know to do that already. B)  I like extremely large updates.