User blog comment:Segalia/Segalia Riverstorm's voyage/@comment-67.142.162.23-20110920214325

WOW... That was really amazing!! But sad, I was reading and it suddenly just came to an end, bad form to just end something like that, Segalia m'dear! Anywho, I forgot where I was at from the last time I read so I figured I'd just re-read it all over again :D

There's a bit of a need for revising in the early chapters (maybe a little more detail me thinks?) but it progressed steadily and the last few chapters were really great! I'm curious how Carma and Rori are going to get along and what their stories are :3 and also how everything's going to turn out with so many of the young'uns not wanting to fight! I get the feeling they're all going to meet up somehow and start their own little group and figure out a way to keep the war from progressing... Nice updates and KIC! :)