User blog comment:Brockkers/The Quest of Martin's Sword/@comment-1808183-20100130032738

Ok, I like critisim! I know that it's a little confusing, but I didn't want to say, 'said, she said, or said whoever'. Do you know how I could fix that? And I don't really understand what you're saying in that last sentence. Do you mean will there be other sort-of confusing parts? I wouldn't have ended in the place where I did, but I had to go. Maybe if I kept writing,the chapter would have sounded better- I'm not talking about the tree climbing part- I mean the whole thing. Thanks for the critism- I need it!