User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20140918145319

Ah so we find out what happened to the slaves finally! Before we get into that, my only comments would be that you're missing a few thes like 'the' remaining vermin and I'm not sure if braves himself as bold is correct. Believes might be better. Otherwise, your grasp on the English language is exemplary. I particularly enjoyed Bigger's interactions with Knifenut! I wonder what the repercussions of Seabird's kindness will be. It was a good fight scene, Astar, and good update altogether! KIU!