User blog comment:IllusionOfOblivion/A Twisted Reality/@comment-25921040-20150429203050

Oh dear...this next chapter sounds ominous. (Not just the chapter heading...I'm not usually superstitious, but Chapter 13 with a title like that?)

The squirrel...erm, both squirrels need to watch out...I know Riah's got a good reason to return, but I can't help feeling worried! The other squirrel has to find a hiding place soon - he can't run from them forever. (Please, other squirrel slave, don't feel guilty! Riah escaped in the end!)

Cerberus! Stop plotting! Threatening the main characters is not good for your health! (I'm even more worried about Lus and Zev now!)

Scarl and the other hedgehogs are really funny (well, their table manners anyway...) It was great to have Riah trying to be polite while the food was literally flying round the cavern XD and I'm glad she was able to have proper food (although it's also quite sad that this is her first decent meal in seasons). It's lucky they agreed to help her free the others - Lus and Zev in particular need to leave the island quickly, and the other slaves are probably just as eager to escape!

I loved this update (and actually managed to comment sooner than usual)! Keep writing :D