User blog comment:MajorPerigord09/Southsward!/@comment-1808183-20100312221710

Here are the grammatical things: There are a few scattered uncapitalized 'Kings' and Queens' here and there. Besides that, I think you're good. You might want to make your headings a little bit bigger though: I didn't realize that I was reading into chapter 2. This is how you do it: ==whatever word you want==. The more ='s, the smaller it gets. Great job, and keep me updated!