User blog comment:GulotheSavage/Gulo The Prince, Death is cold./@comment-1145722-20100104012807

Ohhh! Gulo before he came to Mossflower! Awesome!

And as for pointers.... maybe when describing the slaves, give the species before the name; it reads better.

And instead of 'the picture of terror' maybe put 'the picture of savagery'. It sounds as though Gulo is terrified.

But other then that, this is coming to an awesome start!!! :D KIU!!