User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Cripple/@comment-1427879-20150220060426

Oh my goodness, I have so much respect and yet horror for Viscum right now! I caught a few minor typos like out instead of our and moth instead of mouth but this was a very well-written update. I especially liked the phrase "sigh of shock". Man, I'm not entirely sure if Naita's dead because this does help Viscum control Naita, but everything else she's done is insane! Some of it is indeed a sweeter form of revenge but some of it is too far, too sick and twisted. I like the contrast in revenges presented in this chapter with Kyle disagreeing with her. The question now is how she's going to use him. Awesome update, Astar, KIU!