User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/Sisters, but they aren't/@comment-2104511-20110908203851

I have to admit I quite like the story. It has a good plot with pretty developed characters. I like the pacing of it most of all, it is neither too slow nor too fast. But the one thing I don't like is Onepaw's accent. I can barely understand what she is saying half the time, while this would be fine with a secondary character if she is to have that through the entire story I may need a little translation help.