User blog comment:Ziral Silvertail/Ziral Silvertail's Quest/@comment-32303-20090416235531

Whoa! This is GREAT so far! I have a grammar suggestion, if it would help. I'm not trying to tell you how to write, you know. But where you put "shined," I think "shone" is the right grammar. And I think, instead of "what ever" it should be "whatever." Just trying to help. :) TiaraW Talk! 23:55, 16 April 2009 (UTC)