User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20121104154654

Most of the errors this time were just misplaced words, so that was good! I really liked the beginning with the tree that had a real Redwall-y feel to it. Having Triss be taken out at the beginning of the battle isn't good though...especially when Deathtrap's plan seems to be working so well. Btw, are we going to move on to Book 2 at some point? Good, KIU!