User blog comment:Snowpaw the Wild/The Blade has Died, the Rose is Alive/@comment-1808183-20100407193219

Cool cool cool! This is interesting, but it just seems like your telling Mossflower execpt, where Martin was, Rose is. Maybe you need to change it a little bit more. When you did the whole "flashback" thing, it might have been better if you just started telling it, and then have us realize that it was a dream. Great job! :)