User blog comment:ScottyBlue/Little Flower: A Redwall Story/@comment-1427879-20120618163141

I did notice several spelling mistakes throughout with extra or misplaced letters in various words. Also the part where 10 seasons passed from the Destroyers to the Dormice was confusing. I thought the Dormouse babe would be around the same age as Vaccar, but it doesn't look like it. I kinda like Skrugg and her backstory. Vaccar's idea of raising the babe and tricking the tribe with scraps of fur or something is what I predicted, yay! The slaying of the females seems a bit logical, but also needlessly cruel. Couldn't they just get more males, but keep the females to create an even bigger tribe? I guess not...though I do like how many kids there are; it makes it a bit more realistic. Taodar's punishment seems unusually cruel for Noonvale, but at least they all regretted it. I liked the prologue... I'd be interested to see what happens next, KIU!