User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/The Coming of Badger Lady/@comment-1427879-20160119222819

Very nice so far, Astar! I like the idea of a remote badger/hare community and the backstory really helped embellish it (I like the Wing tradition especially. Do they have similar name changes for winners of other competitions?). It's also fun to see your fursona finally. The plot is also beginning to develop; I'm betting they're not going to get home before something happens that accelerates Cregga's warrior journey. I do wonder what happened to her brother though...Nicely done! I saw very few minor mistakes, such as missing "a"s etc. KIU!