User blog comment:Peony Laminar/Peony Laminar/@comment-From the South/@comment-1988904-20100423175438

Two chapters up this time. Only one more chapter in book 1 left before we move onto book 2. I was a little worried about chapter 16 where I introduced all the younger hares at once. Was it at all confusing? Do you have any advice about how it could have been more effective?