User blog comment:YatzSliversword/The Return of the Marlfoxes/@comment-1738724-20110117140447

It was really confusing when they just let the cats in. I think the Redwallers should have taken more precaution...

At the beginning, you said, One of the giants drew a sling from it's kilt.

Yes, the cats were giant, but they weren't actually giants. So maybe replace that bit with, One of them stepped forward and drew a sling from its kilt. Then it might make sense.

Pretty good for a first timer. KIC! (KIC means Keep It Coming and KIU means Keep It Up)