User blog comment:Vesper the Brisk/The Brisk's Breeze/@comment-1428497-20100404232614

awww, poor Talon! You've got a great story going, mate!!! I LOVE your descriptions at the beginning. It really grabs your attention. The only part is where Talon is slashed. Where was he slashed, how deep, and how does he react. That's the only part! KIC! And i want updates!