User blog comment:Redwall151/New Fanfiction! Chapters 1 + 2!/@comment-1738724-20101104114140

Make sure not to indent at the very start and in the middle, because it'll go into a box.

I'm in a box! AAAAHH!! Die box die!!!!!!

See what I mean? Yeah...

As to the formating, its like a big block. Remember to press 'Enter' twice when a new person talks, or a new paragraph. Whichever.

This is a good start. KIC! (KIC means Keep It Coming and KIU means Keep It Up).