User blog comment:The Dicer/Paws Of Steel/@comment-1427879-20121111193450

There were several errors, especially with semi-colons, in the first bit. Also, person and hands are not typically used in Redwall-related fics so you might want to change it. I liked the first part, the scientific analysis of the layers of the mind. The second part was very brutal and I'm wondering what will happen to Damian...KIU!