User blog comment:Akash.B/User blog:Akash.B/@comment-The Forbidden Tale/@comment-1808183-20100125033211

I am SOOOO sorry about the girl thing! Just not a name I hear very often. Anyway, great story! You do a really good job at writing the battle tactics and speeches. Just one thing I noticed that I've seen on another fan-fic: You said "...In you capable HANDS" Of course, animals don't have hands, they have paws. But GREAT JOB! When do you think the next chapter will be up?