User blog comment:Silva the Squirrelmaiden/The Black Rose of Redwall/@comment-1421927-20091104011843

1) LOVE THE UPDATE!! Cool that she's thinking if she's good or evil.

2) If there will be killing, Aren would be more dramatic than Rayso. Then, Rayso would be all lovey-dovey with Rose of the Black, but she doesn't really love him and could never go back to Redwall and they both spend their love sicks lives away from each other, Rayso at Redwall, changed forever, Rose on the sea, both mad at the other. The End. xD

3) You could TOTALLY make this into a book if you removed the Redwall/Gousim stuff. I'd buy your book xD Can I illustrate it? Kidding...kidding...