Thread:ScottyBlue/@comment-5156759-20120807184314/@comment-5156759-20120807230151

By the way, I'm reading your story Little Flower right now, and I think it's great! Really like how the son of a warlord is a pathetic little worm (I just finished the part where he "defeated" Gree). Only one thing I noticed though.

"I know, I saw him trying to steal some of my loot." (He put a good deal of emphasis on the word my) "

If you italicize the word my, the emphasis is already there, and you don't have to explain it in parentheses. Just throwing that out there. Other than that, great work! I'll keep on reading!