User blog comment:Bluefang the Ferret/Bluefang/@comment-1738724-20100426033556

Nice start mate! Remember not to indent, it makes EVIL BOXES!!!!! Like this:

I'm in an EVIL BOX!!!! AH!!!

So delete them spaces! Also, to make a new Chapter/Book, do this === Chapter One: Orphans === and for Book One == Book One: Bluefang ==. Lastly, press enter twice so yore on a new line when a new creature speaks. Makes it easier to read. So far, its pretty good! KIC! (KIC is keep it coming and KIU is keep it up!)