User blog comment:Peony Laminar/Peony Laminar/@comment-From the South/@comment-1988904-20100603142352

@Segalia. Thanks for your review and catching that typo. All of your thoughts are pretty accurate...

@Laria, the flashblack in the very first chapter describes the day Sinon comes to the abbey if you want to look back and see that again. Sinon will be telling his past as well in a little while.

I was confused when you both thought that Vermilion was the sister of the two brothersr. She's not related to them. But I can see how it could be construed that way, so I've added more clarification to Vermilion's story so it hopefully doesn't sound that way. She never mentions names in it, so I guess my use of pronouns was confusing. Sorry about that. As you guys probably guessed, Hawthorne and Regolith are brothers, but Vermilion is not their sister! She just sort of married both of them.

Let me know if anything else seems confusing because it's probably from a mistake I made. ;-)

What did you think of the raven?