User blog comment:Brockfang/On the Knife's Edge/@comment-1428497-20100317232842

in the 4th paragraph of the 1st chapter you say Ceteruler A LOT. maybe just changing it to 'he' in a couple places would sound better. just a suggestion. chapter two last section you say "In his belt he had a dirk stuck in it", a little repetitive. Like i said just suggestions, mate!