User blog comment:Coldstrype the Scythe/Story for Ejaxk/@comment-1927467-20100331144212

However, there are things that MUST be changed from my point of veiw. 1. When talking to Skelva, Ejaxk should be much more aggresive. He has just rowed a long time and has just seen people for the first time since the duck. He should be a little annoyed and frusrated. 2. In the crotch... are you serious. Right, so you thought you would put a little humor in it. Not to be rude but no. Bloody nose, even a quick slash of a blade I could handle. But we're talking about mature grownup creatures. I do not think that the crotch, as painful as that might be, is simply unappropriate and unnessessary to the story line. We're also talking decency. Skelva doesn't go around beating hopeless vermin in ways that would be considerd "low-blows". Yes, she is a very stern and is a take-no-crap kind of person but the way she acted is unrealistic. (Sorry, I was quite upset) 3. IronBuck was there, yes I've said it once and I'll say it again, Ejakx is only better than CopperJaw than a little bit. The fight with IronBuck was what made it even between them because Ejaxk was tired. Ironbuck had a dgemso style of fighting. The kind were he walks up to you and fights with hard, not-so-fast blows. Ejaxk is just the opposite. Dealing moderate damage but with crazy speed and agility. IronBuck cannot match that and is somehow stopped. This also gives enough time for Coldstrype to get to the scene without it seeming like he just popped out of a hole in the ground.