User blog comment:Hollyfire53/Outcast/@comment-1146641-20100619202305

SM- Well I think that your names are hard to pronounce *sticks tongue out :P* Read the second comment. The reaction was supposed to be flat. He wanted to cut all ties from the Holt, so I made it as emotionless as I could. He had thought that Myfyrth was dead and he was shocked when she told him that he had three more siblings than he had thought.

What do you mean, how does he know how to spell it? He's not writing it, he's saying it. Plus, just replace the Y's with I's and it makes the names good again XP

Rorc- Read above post

Lar- Myfyrth's home was on fire. Ocyryo didn't know that she was still alive. And when you read the next chapter you'll see that he really does want to rescue Krystlyr.

Snowy- M'kay.

Since everyone is complaining about the lack of emotion, I shall re-write that chapter.