User blog comment:IllusionOfOblivion/A Twisted Reality/@comment-2142396-20150108200600/@comment-2142396-20150109121546

I appreciate details, so it's fine! Fox squirrels look handsome, and I think it's a good idea to use them, since it's stated that that slave is not from Mossflower but from some other land.

"quain" part of the name seems to be traditional for Woodsorrel line, so I thought it's possible for the Major to be called Aquain Dustscut Woodsorrel or something.

If you're interested in fan fiction, I would really appreciate if you took a look at my stories, ‘For Freedom’ and its side story ‘Sharkslayer’. Besides, I've recently started an unconnected story called ‘Cripple’. I'll be really happy if you took a look at them!