User blog comment:Nightpaw Streamspliter/The Nights Future/@comment-1808183-20100513182730

When Shagg says, "Thats not my job milady" it should be "That's" and "Milady", Evra responds with "Did I ask you if that was your job shagg?" it should be "Shagg", "Wich captains?" should be "Which captians?" and where Craggle says "Uhh Uhh, Yes Milady" it should be "Uhh... uhh... yes Milady" Milday and the first "Uhh" are the only things that need to be capitalized. Here's another suggestion: you might not want to say "said" so much. Using different words in the place of "said" makes it flow smoother, and sound nicer. Thanks for listening, and thanks fo writing! :)