User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/A little night music/@comment-4197188-20111227004214

Decided to read seven chapters at a time, so I can properly comment on the story. So far, it's great! Awesome descriptions with great characters. Very interested in this Cassava; hope she'll come up again. A small thing, though; in the tavern, I don't understand why the ferret would give her a broadsword when she asked for a weapon, she's small, and surely doesn't have a strong appearance. And yet she actually managed to use it effectively! Jumping up with a broadsword and cracking a wolf's head requires a lot of strength, especially since she had spent the last 4-5 days recovering from her wound.

Also, the whole scene with Vilaya revealing her true identity. It seems very unlike her character to want to use/ get rid of a wildcat one second, and become friends the next, especially when he didn't really do anything for her yet. At first, I thought she was just using a ruse so she could get her knife back and not have to fight, but you said they left the camp as almost friends! Other than that, it's awesome so far! I'll comment more tomorrow.