User blog comment:The Dicer/The Shadow Jester/@comment-1427879-20130809170959

At one point you put would where I believe you meant wield, but besides that, no errors. I enjoyed this update! It was interesting to learn about Jurl's hard past (though the segregation of the genders...really?) and how Scar rose to power. I liked the bits of humor, too. Nice update, Dicer! KIU!