User blog comment:The Dicer/The Shadow Jester/@comment-1427879-20130416233628

Very few minor edits that I would suggest, mainly a missing comma, once where you should have entered and another where you wrote hand instead of paw. Who's the northerner again? It would have been useful if you put that it was he who was talking to Skipper sooner. That was sad...as well as Houdini's story. However, the Bloodwrath possibility seems like a bit of hope! If it didn't potentially require killing Maggio. Anyway, nice job, KIU!