User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Raven's Feather/@comment-1427879-20170613175453

Sorry I took so long to read this! This looks very intriguing so far. I thought it was interesting how you differented the fur colors based on origin as well as how you brought in Green Isle and the Maelstrom and other features from the books. When is this set according to the Redwall timeline? I had a feeling Skylily would be important. I look forward to learning more about our main characters and their enemies, as well as how Bekka is involved! The only errors I saw were missing articles such as the and a. KIU Astar and keep me updated!