User blog comment:Laria Wavedeep/Laria Wavedeep/@comment-1630956-20100814153918

Is the traitor in Redwall? He/she could be one of zergarath's slaves. By taking his time, i meant that he wasn't in any hurry to attack redwall, which will be the main source of any problems he has. You did a great job showing the changes, age and such, that came over Grall during the time Laria was growing up. I caught one error.

“Ye didn’t think I would do somethin’ like, did ye? You forgot to put "that" after the word "like"

Otherwise, great update, KIC!