User blog:Brockkers/The Quest of Martin's Sword

READER'S NOTE
This story is a complete original story written by me. This is my first fan-fic story, but not my first story. I love writing, but if you have an idea of how to improve something, please tell me. I want total honesty in your comments, and most of all, I hope you enjoy the story!

PROLOUGE
Imagine a place where you wake up every morning to the smells of wonderful things coming out of the kitchen, the happy song of meadowlarks,and the ringing of beautiful bells. Now imagine the name of this place:Redwall Abbey. On one such morning, Abbess Gloria woke to sunlight streaming through her window, and two little Dibbuns jumping on her bed. "Wake up Abbess Glori, 'tis time for breakfast!" A small hedgehog babe named Rosie giggled at her friend the small Quinn the Vole. "Oh yes, guite, it is time to get up isn't it? Well how about you two go downstairs, and I'll join you once I get there." "Yes mofer Abbess." The prickly Rosie replied, and they were soon racing each other down the dormitory steps. This morning, the Ferret mother of Redwall Abbey stayed later in bed than usual. She was trying to remember something, but seeing that she couldn't, she simpy proceeded down the dormitory steps. The sounds, sights, and smells of another wonderful day in Mossflower rang through the ears of the happy Abbey dwellers proceeding to breakfast. "Could someone pass a chap some of those straberries! Jolly good thing to start the morning with wot wot!" "Yes, of course, how silly of me to want to starve a hare. Espically you Collin." As we all know, it would be very difficult to starve a hare, espically when there is food about, and espically when it's Redwall Abbey food. "Ah, 'otroot soup for breakfast, that's the way it should be every morning eh mates!" "No, I really don't think you should have hotroot soup ever moring considering it was you against me, Skipper. An otter against a squirrel in a swimming contest, Ha! Why I ever aggreed to such a thing I'll never know. However,I still don't know how you managed to climb a tree faster than a squirrel. I think you cheated somehow. But, you still won, so who am I to argue?" Many cheerful conversations were going on when they all heard a knock at the gate. "Let me see who it is. You can all contine eating." Abbess Gloria was at the gate when she saw who it was. An unidentifiable creature, hodded in a simple cloak said to the Abbess, "Well, are you going to let me in? I know you received my message." The Abbess let the creature in. It had obviously had a very long journey. The creature came inside, and started eating breakfast without anothor word. Everone was silent. Many glances went from the Abbey Dwellers, to the Abbess, and many from the Abbey Dwellers to the un-known figure, and back to the Abbess. The very odd silence was broken by Abbes Gloria saying, "Well, breakfast is over, let's not stand about gawking. I'm sure it would be good for us to get on with our chores now." They did get on, but not after a flood of questions to the Abbess, and still many more glances being exchanged.

Note to the reader: I know that you're going to be thinking, "a ferret Abbess!!!!????" YES A FERRET ABBESS. This will make sense later, just don't freak. After all, you can't catagorize an individual creature by its species. CATAGORY: BLOG POSTS CATAGORY: FAN FICTION