User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/The Ocean's Echoes/@comment-26879391-20160204032554

Oh Man, "The Oceans Echos" already? It feels like you've just started "The Veil is Torn"! Man, does the time fly!

Chapter 14 had a rather calm start; in my opinion. I like how Romsca turned out, definetly a chill ferret. Xzaris is once again leading as the main male protaganist, and he always seems to bring a bit of everything to the table, if you know what I mean. Rasconza is still my favorite of the bunch, though~. He's the kind of guy I'd want to talk to and hang out with. Oh, Val and her quips! One of the most Adorable motifs you've added into 'Tears of the Ocean'...I don't know what I'd do if she was to die...(Happy thoughts...Happy thoughts...Puppies...Puppies...Think of Puppies...). As for the actual Feel of Sampetra, you've nailed it! The first part had this sort of murky atmosphere, yet not all that dark.

I must say that Redwall continues on having that cherished, warm feeling to it. It's like it's sunny everyday at the Abbey! Abbot Durral so far is pretty good, though I don't have much to say about him, personally. Grath is tranquil as always; I can see her mature through the books, which I gladly appreciate :). Martin is slowly becoming more and more appealing; I love how you incorperated his musical talents, though I doubt he'd burst into song like Clecky, singing the Icetor National Anthem....(I'd imagine it'd go something like this: "I am a haaaaaaaaare....One you cannot Compaaaaaaaare...I come from the Land of IIIIIIIIcccccce....It's not very niiiiiiiice..." ;)). Clecky is wonderful, as his character has been shown, and Hood has been very...mysterious, for lack of better words. I must say my favorite is Tansy~. I imagine her being kinda short and chubby, with this cute grin on her face and flowered apron. Also, nice introducing Arven and Craklyn!

As for the current situation, It's very tense! With the three pirates drifting from place to place, It's going to be quite a difficult journey for them, since the three are so knitted together; Their practically family! As for Sword Practice with Val Bloodpaws...I think that sentence should be rather self explanitory. (Mind = Blown). She's very fast, which is a bit of a contrast to Romsca: I've always imagined her being a bit slow, but with powerful attacks, while vice versa for Val. Their farewell was touching, like they where actual family. Hit right home. I will try and comment from time to time, though I need to catch up XD. Ughghgg, Why must you update so fast?! (I'm actually very envious of your updating skills...)

(I also saw your humanized TotO crew...Woah. More Characters, more madness...And more fun, as Val would say! Though to be honest she'd probably say something like "THIS IS GOING TO BE SO MUCH FUFUFUFUFUFUFFUFUNNNN!!!!" This fox maiden is on a serious sugar rush!)