User blog comment:The Dicer/Paws Of Steel/@comment-1427879-20121126015019

The last part of the flashback should also be in italics and don't forget to enter when a new beast speaks. Otherwise, it was good...it seems like a very harsh existence. I liked the sobbing and screaming becoming a terrified duet. And yes, I want to be updated as I'm interested in how this will intersect with your other story. KIU!