User blog comment:Snowstripe the Fierce/The Spearmaid/@comment-26879391-20150814191846

Very Interesting! Spearlady Gorse is such a shrouded character, and I think it's a fantastic idea that you decided to write about her!

I'm definitely exited for the Hares! Personally, I love Hares, and they're dialect just adds to their quaint manner! Patchpaw is, for me, kind of like a gender bent Dotti. But then again, that just adds to the charm!

So far, I'm rather interested in Spathar! So far, he seems a lot like Ungatt Trunn, which is in no means a bad thing! The Vermin Horde is also kind of interesting, like Trunn's Blue Horde. And I love how you added Ripfang to this Fanfic! It's always fun to point out Canon characters in Fanfics!

I'm also fascinated to see how Gorse will progress as a character. Will she Be like Brocktree? Cregga? Russano? Sunflash? A bit of Advice, is that If your ever going to kill off a character, make sure to use them extensively. I have no problem with Clea, though. She had a major role, so the shock value was pretty intense. However, for lesser characters, try to use them much more, give them twists and turns. Kind of like how BJ did it with Feldoh (RIP).

Definitely keep it going! Has the usual Redwall Charm!