User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/Stolen Tears/@comment-26879391-20151212231642

I finally got around to reading and commenting! (Now...If Only I could finish "The Veil is Torn...")

First off, nice prouloge! It really sets the mood for the story! Oh, Poor Romsca! We haven't seen her that much already, and she's already...dying? (No! Not so early! I'm still recovering from Bluefen!). Also, I'm really interested to see how much Chinese/Asian Influence you added into this Fanfic! I always thought how "The Unsung Heroes" and "Accused" had a lot of medeival influence, with Accused having a good dept of egypitian Influence as well. I'm kind of predicting that "Destiny" will have some Nordic, and Challenger will have...Celtic? I always thought that "Pearls of Lutra" had a sort of spanish tonality, But I'm exited to be reading your perspective on it!

Interesting to see little Romsca! Gah, she's so cute! It's so heartwarming, seeing Conva and Romsca's relations and interactions! Xzaris and Rasconza are adorbs as well, and Val is just....she's just too cute (reminds me of my own Character, Haze :)). Also, Grath and Holt Lutra are also really engaging! I liked seeing Grath's family, Aqua and Marine being my favorites so far! As for the montiors, well, their menacing as ever...

Wow! So Vinwyte and Catkin established Holt Lutra. Didn't see that comming! It's so nostalgic, seeing Sayna here. She's so elderly and wise, an....cranky? (Well, that Explains Fripple's grumpiness). Martin is also a cool character. To be frank, he's a bit of a Veil Character, kind of one dimensional. However, this is only the beginning, so there's a lot of time for development :).

Ublaz is menacing as ever. He has Lask, he has monitors, who wouldn't be indimidated? I'm worried for Holt Lutra, I mean, if your looking for pearls, the most obvious place to start looking is in...an otter holt! Also, I liked your callback to the green glass with Ublaz's 'crystal ball'!

All and all, I'm really exited for this swashbucking adventure! I'm exited to read this fanfiction, cry, laugh, and hope with the characters. Great job on Accused, by the way! I can't wait to relive the experience, and experience new ones :D.

(That is...If I can keep up...*cough cough* TViT *cough cough*)