User blog comment:Hollyfire53/The Ultimate War Characters/@comment-2112638-20100624152124

Name: Critic (at least that's what he calls himself) Species: Stoat Gender: Male Appearance: Light brown almost orange fur, average size, bluish-black eyes Personality: He's good and loyal, in battle he's calm and composed (unless the Bloodwrath takes him). Strengths: He's smart, kind, has the Bloodwrath, and is skilled in combat. Weaknesses: He has the Bloodwrath, and he is sometimes clumsy. Weapons: Two swords and a bow History: He comes from a place of scholar-warriors (he never reveals it's location or name) where he left a young sister he never names, but sometimes mentions. He's a descendant of Keenear (main character of a Fan Fiction I'm working on) and he has been wandering the world for several seasons. Background: What I just wrote for History Appearance/ Death: I don't care where he appears. I don't want him to die, but if he does I want him to go down fighting and defending his friends. Rank: Independent soldier fighting evil Other Information: He never uses vermin slang and refers to vermin as "Vershkin" and woodlanders as "Seraphlen".