User talk:Shieldmaiden

--LordTBT  Talk! 04:35, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

Amazing...
Im the first wiki user (LordTBT counts as an admin seeing as he made this wiki) Hello Shieldmadien!Wecome to Redwall Wikia ! I am very glad you decided to join us! If you have any questions, please see the FAQ section of the Communtiy home, er portal ... thingy...

if it does not answer your questions thuroughly, or at all, please contact me or another user (Don't worry, were all friendly!)

As for the Essay your writing, Why not move it to the FAn Fiction section? I don't exacally know how to do that, But I know some people who do (Ill have to learn too!) They are )

I think that just about covers it! If you have any other questions, I am always free to answer them. Once again, Welcome! May your travels on here be great and wondrous! Sambrook the otter  Talk! 04:51, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

P.S. Here are a few others you may consult if you have questions- Zaran Rhulain  Talk! 01:22, 25 October 2008 (UTC), Charie Swordmaid   Talk!, Some random redwall fan   Talk!, or Aida Otterock

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Do you want me to Format or get rid of those boxes? It makes it a wee bit hard to read. (Great beginning by the way) Sambrook the otter  Talk! 14:03, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

Oh, by the way..
With your story. Remember to keep in mind that Martin has completely forgotten all about the stuff that happened at Marshank and Noonvale.

You could use that to your advantage though. Like have it be part of your story. To have the party form Noonvale meet Martin and they know him but he doesn't know them or somethin. It would be pretty dramatic.

I dunno, it's just a thought. --C.S.maid  Talk! 02:56, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

HEHEHE
Don't worry- I've not forgotten. H'I'--Shieldmaiden 03:46, 1 December 2008 (UTC)ve an evil plan.

hey, Charie's right, that could be used for the story line and end up pretty Dramatic. Keep Writing, Very good!--Christain 03:47, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

uh whoops
Man im almost ashamed of myself, I should have psoted this long ago! well first, Hello! Im Sambrook and i am going to show you how to make your own signature in a step by step basis! Here is my signature

Sambrook the otter  Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC)


 * copy the formatting and then follow my instructions.


 * 1.)when copied, paste to word (or notepad, any form of typing application works as long as you can paste things to it)


 * 2.)Here's what to edit:
 * A.)Replace my name with yours
 * B.)change the color (if desired)
 * C.)and replace the picture name with your own picture JPG name. (Right now im asuming you know how to copy, paste, and make files JPGs (Er, I think they can be bitmaps, im not exactly sure)
 * 3.) IMPORTANT! Don't change ANY of the technical stuff unless you know what your doing. everything has to be EXACTLY right to work


 * Here's a list of colors I have found work-
 * Red
 * blue
 * crimson
 * saffron
 * green
 * teal
 * orange
 * purple
 * yellow
 * black
 * silver


 * 4.) cut (or copy if you wish to fiddle with it in the future) the signature.
 * 5.) Go to the big MORE box at the top. Scroll down it until you come to My Preferences
 * 6.) scroll down on the page that opens when you click My Preferences.
 * 7.) Paste the signature in the signature box
 * 9.) be sure to check the Raw Signature bow before saving changes.

I hope this helps! If you need any more explanations or if you have any other questions, I am always willing to answer them! Be seeing you around! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk!

Thanks
Thanks, man. I owe you one.

Hello again
Here's a suggestion for your riddle (you dont have to use it). This really isn't a poem. Its a rhyme, or a riddle if you prefere. Riddles rhyme, as you can see. That's an important factor.


 * In Mossflower Wood, which grows thick and deep.
 * Where is the Warrior who'll answer thy call?
 * A loss to that Evil, demands a cost steep.
 * You shall find him at the Abbey, Redwall


 * To seek the Warrior, who shall proceed?
 * Which five travel forth through danger indeed?
 * You, first of the five and first to be shown.
 * Healer of Wounds, thy skills they have known.
 * Next, Otter the swimmer and slinger of stone.
 * Your constant companion when ye laugh or moan.
 * Singer too, though she be filled with fright.
 * The singer of song, and dancer of light.
 * Then the thrower of javelins, my words ye shall heed.
 * Escaped slave from Marshank, and the essence of speed.
 * Lastly, the strong, loyal digger of rows,
 * A great friend to Rose. In his heart, she still grows.
 * Do not tarry, but go on your way.''
 * When one has fallen in the land without rain,''
 * Beware the little folk, flee away,''
 * Trust ye not their sweet refrain.''
 * One more be lost at the River Moss,''
 * To thee, a grave loss. But to Stormfin, a gain''

<font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 06:02, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

Wow
I'm editing now! I would heve been here yesternight, but I couldn't get online, and I had school today.--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 01:50, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

=D
Hahahaha. No dont worry, i'm not Brian in disguise. I'm just a normal fourteen year old gal. I actually will probably be deleting this story. I just dont have any more ideas for it. =(

<font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 04:09, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

Well, all stories have to end sometime.
Yours is a beautiful story. Really, I thinks its ended. About the only thing left to do is maybe have the spirit of Martin see Matthias years later and remember the time when hee bossed him around (After all, betweenRedwall andMattimeo, Martin bosses Matthias around alot.) ;). Shieldmaiden signing out!--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 13:58, 3 December 2008 (UTC) By the way DO NOT DELETE!!!!!!!!!!!!

i disagee I tink theres lots more to this story I like it lot --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 07:50, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Technical help
First of all, I finally got around to reading Martin the Warrior II- Return to Noonvale. I wish I had done so sooner. I was missing out =(. Wow!!  You're one heck of a writer!  nice job!

Secondly, can i make a suggestion? It doesn't have to do with the story itself, it has to do with a technical problem.

I noticed how you had done *** to separate some paragraphs. But, you had done it by using === *** ===

Now that'll work, but there's an easier way to do that. See, if you do it like that....Alright, you know how there is a box near the top of some pages (like your story) that has the contents? You know, how it's divided into sections. Here, it looks a bit like this:

1 Book One - Zounzdican the Evil 1.1 Prologue- Enter the Players 1.2 Chapter One- The Puzzling Puzzle (or, Ripeye's Promotion) 1.2.1 *** 1.2.2 *** 1.3 Chapter Two- Which Five Travel Forth Through Danger at Need? (or, Felldoh's Arrival) 1.3.1 *** 1.3.2 *** 1.4 Chapter Three- The Art of War (or, Keyla and Urran Make a Resolution) 1.4.1 *** 1.5 Chapter Four-

Notice how it's divided into ridiculously small sections like 1.2.1 and all that is next to it is *** ? That means you divided the chapters into their own section. You probably don't want that.

There is an easier way to get *** in the center of the page and bolded. Alright, type out the following when you edit the page:

***

That will end up looking like this once the page is saved.

***

Yes, it's a bit longer to type, but the good thing about it is that it won't show up in the Contents as 1.2.1 ***

Just a suggestion. --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 05:18, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Added
I added your story to my template

<font color="Green">Zaran Rhulain  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 23:44, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

What's a template?
I;m sort of new to this. Random Redwall Fan, thanks for the tip!--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 04:11, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

Timezone
Mountain time. It's 1:16 where I live right now. For me, it's 3:17 pm. --<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 20:18, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

Huh?
Wait a minute, I don't understand your comment. I didn't write, fix, or add anything to your story. I just read it, enjoyed it, complimented it, and left that technical suggestion on your userpage.

Yes, I understand I'm not the author, but I don't want to start editing your story without permission, so I left that suggestion so it would come to your attention and you, as the author, could fix it. Just trying to be helpful and non-intrusive. --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 00:33, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

Yes, and it's worth a thank-you.
The "I'm new to this" was meant for Zaran, the time was for Charie (we were asking each outher what time it was). Random Redwall Fan, any help given is appreciated. Any- comments, editing spelling or grammer, a kind word- any and all help is appreciated. Again, thanks for the help.

re:title
the ede bit was becuse you fished on a egde but you changed that the story is The missing eight seasons and its up now --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 02:00, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

BTW
Just wanted to say kudos, you doing a great job on your story! keep it up! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">My User Talk! 15:35, 8 December 2008 (UTC)

Substory
If you go to The Last Stand of Redwall Abbey, there is a substory I created because I had writer's block for last stand, please read and tell me what you think of it.

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 02:39, 10 December 2008 (UTC)

Signature
Hi, your signature image is too large. Could you reduce it? Thanks. --<font color="Green">LordTBT  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 05:48, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

Your Awesomest Story
Yo, SM- I have to say you are a REALLY good writer. I've read your Latest, and 8O!WOW, Really good. Just Curious, Because This is set after MTW, is that your Faveorite book?<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 20:01, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

They are all my favorite
This story has been blossoming in my heart for at least a year. When I saw the fanfic section, I set to work. And my imagination has yet to fail me. Long live Noonvale. Fur and Freedoooooooooooom!--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 20:12, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

Story
Your story is coming along nicely, but when will Martin meet Brome and the others again? I want to see their reactions xD.

I still laugh at the stupid stoat who jumped out of the bushes and Chugger hit his nose with the stick

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 21:03, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

I don't really know how I think of it. It was just floating around my head when I was typing up The Last Stand, then when it became too much, I just started typing. A lot of this is based on my experiences. I just have a lot of imagination when it comes to, weapons, sci fi stuff like the A.R.T, describing the settings, and dialogue. The P90 for example is pretty light compared to other guns and its recoil and sound is pretty good too, I fired one at a shooting range before. And camping experiences really help a lot when typing up the story.

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 23:43, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

Hmm.. your right, I'm also going for Jeod finding the mystery person. How about Jeod finding the mystery person, then both of them fall through the ground, which got weakened, which goes into the Kotir flood tunnels and comes out at Redwall?

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 23:46, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

Er...
Shieldmaiden- I hope this doesnt offend you, but you seem to either be in a cranky mood or something- First, your yelling at Some Random Redwall Fan, then Zaran- ( or so it seems) Sorry if I am wrong and saw it wrong, but you might want to ease down a tad...<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 20:45, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

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By swear you mean ass? It's kinda hard to replace it with a better term without it sounding weird, as for everything else, its all part of the plot, I did say reader's discretion

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 20:59, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

well, you could said Donkey. ::). Ok, lame Joke, Sorry.<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 21:02, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

600
What on Earth makes you think I 'wanted to delete that? I ran into a few technical problems and some of the content needed to be fixed. After I finish this message, I'm going to re-post all of wahat I had And the first battle=) --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan   <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 22:00, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

PS: By the way, I would hate it if you deleted your story. Don't get any ideas.

You don't need to apologize, it was just a misunderstanding. Nothing more, nothing less. --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 23:47, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm seeing if me sig is working.-- 23:54, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

My Story
My story is called Soren's Quest. But I am having technical difficulties so it might not be as good yet but i'm trying to fix it. Anyway you can read and tell me what you think.-- Soren Rudderdale  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk! 16:25, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

My Story
Sorry chapter four is still in production I want the best story so it takes awhile to think about it but it will have chapter four soon. (P.S. chapter four will be featuring Redwall.)-- Soren Rudderdale  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk! 20:56, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

Ha ha ha.
Well as soon as you said you wanted more I started writing the fourth chapter and now it's done read it by all means!-- Soren Rudderdale  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk! 21:51, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

That would be great!
I would love it if you did that for me. It is kinda hard to read lol!-- Soren Rudderdale  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk! 21:56, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

My Story
That would be great, I'd love that because that is my problem right now. please do that, But don't change the story-- Soren Rudderdale  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk! 22:27, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

Fanfics
I was gonna ask you the same thing! :) It's incredible as it is. One thing though. You might not want to have all the (-) in there.

<font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 22:45, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

Dashes
The little dashes in your story.

<font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 22:45, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

Yeesh!
DUDE!!! You just did one in ur comment on my talk page!!!

<font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 22:29, 15 December 2008 (UTC)