User blog comment:ScottyBlue/Gingiverian: Chapter 1/@comment-1630956-20110609202026

Ok, scratch the not commenting on every chapter, I can't help it on this one. You, Ma'am, are brilliant. I loved your dialogue, found it very engaging. The plot is captivating, and I didn't catch any errors.

When I read that Martin's sword got stuck in the floor, I immediately thought "King Arthur", and i'll admit I was relieved when that wasn't the case.

Now, to read on....