User blog comment:Kalm Treeblade/A Tale of a Squirrel Scout/@comment-2207385-20110812050032

ohhhhhh!! a first person point of view!!! you rarely get to see stories like that NICE!!! good work at describing the feelings of an injured beast and his will of going on, also the fighting scenes were nice, heres a bit of a tip try to get the scenery more detailed, it makes the world come more alive and helps with visualizing the story, Good Job!! keep it up!!