User blog comment:Segalia/Segalia Riverstorm's voyage/@comment-2142396-20140315154001/@comment-1427879-20140401040058

Thank you so much for this detailed review of my fanfic! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm also glad that the fox twins grew on you (yay character development!) because, I have to admit, they're some of my favorites.

I was obsessed with making my fanfic different which is why the warlord is nicer, but I'd still be interested in exploring that thread of villainy. Though, I have to say, Slashclaw is a whole lot of fun to write.

I could probably have afforded more details in many parts of the story, but essentially the machine was a trebuchet. I love details to past Redwall books, too! (On that note, I saw something recently about Freedom in Redwall-canon and immediately thought of your character instead because she's well-developed. Nice job!) I'm really glad that you felt the power of the Abbess Fern scene because I really wanted it to be emotional and shine some light on the Skipper/Abbess relationship (whatever it was). But yes, Paldra is now Abbess. I should have probably made it clearer...though I did want to make it unclear.

Thank you so much for your review! I would really love it if you picked up the sequel, which reminds me, I need to update. It's...a bit different, but hopefully you still see the aspects you enjoyed in this one. Thanks so much again!