User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20140807000744

I'm sorry it took me so long to read this update; I really enjoyed it! I especially liked the description at the beginning and how you fleshed out Foxglove's character and her relationship with Kars. I only noticed a few grammar errors such as when you put department instead of departure and a few tenses. Otherwise, very nicely done, Astar! KIU!