User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Cripple/@comment-1427879-20150327034839

There were a few grammar errors, particularly towards the beginning, but not excluding misspelling analogy. Not too bad! Haha, Kyle, Kyle. Rumba is right, as faulty as her analogy was. Things could get be a lot worse and if he keeps rebelling like this, they're likely to get a lot worse as Viscum implied. I do like Rumba and Farl; they're indeed interesting creatures. I think this will give Kyle a chance to start working on his wits because clearly neither breaking Connie out or allying with Razorclaw are going to work. This is very intriguing; I'm interested to see what will happen next! Great update, Astar! KIU!