User blog comment:Segalia/Segalia Riverstorm's voyage/@comment-2207385-20110313215137/@comment-1427879-20110317182243

Thank you so much for such a kind compound expansive critique-y comment! It warms my heart (so do the others but not as much). And it has longed for critique! Thank you!

Yes, I guess there are a lot of females, but as I myself am a girl and BJ doesn't have quite enough, I figured it would work. I'm glad I managed to pull off some unique things and all those other things that you mentioned. I'll try and fix the fast parts. I find it funny when you guys point out things about the story that I hadn't quite thought about. Thank you so much again!