User blog comment:Tess the Golden/Eyes of Emerald/@comment-7662967-20150621142955


 * meep* ok, here I am, finally ;P

Well to start off, as a whole, this is very good! I like your characters, they've got a lot of personality and I can sympathize with them, which makes me care about them ;) (one of the most essential things in a story .. the reader has to care about what happens to the characters) so good job on that :) I can see Jacki and Tess working together is going to be difficult .. ;P I also wonder what's special about Jacki's turban (side note, I know. But I think it could be important) XD

I like Riguel too, he's going to be an interesting character :) Maybe he can even help Jacki and Tess and the horses, if Tess accepts him. btw, I love the fact you put the horses in. reading about them in a story outside my own is really cool XD

And Zanog's on his way to Redwall .. uh oh. I like his weapon however, unusual weapons are neat :) Miggu got what he deserved, in a way. I bet the other slaves are far from understanding of him .. ;P But after all he's done, he needed that ...

Seatail and Firetail should be good characters XD The evil squirrel! and I'm guessing, not evil brother. Nice! I want to read more :D KIU!