User blog comment:Segalia/Journey of Warriors: A Sequel to SRV/@comment-1427879-20171211022803

Here is another update as we finally catch up with the badgers, and they catch up with the messenger. Is everything finally coming together?

I started working on this update during a Sept/Oct 30 day flash fiction challenge and really wanted to finish it before NaNoWriMo, but was unable to. At any rate, it's finally here so that's exciting.

Astar: Thank you! Yes, that's discussed here. Since the revolution freed Paldra, it messed with Malital's original plan, and I guess I assumed they also freed the family. I should probably clarify that. But Malital's going to twist it anyway. Well, I guess here's your answer! I wouldn't say Paldra's dose was smaller, but she received a succession of doses based more on hallucenogenics and Malital then switched the recipe to try and get more mind control.

I'm excited to explore it for you readers too! So many possibilities indeed :)

Haha, yep! To be fair, I don't think he's sailed much, but at least he's on dry land now. That is my hope to be entering the final stretch now. I'll be recovering from surgery in the next few weeks so maybe I'll get another update done, who knows!

Oo, the narrowness of Mossflower is a very good point. Maybe it's only an inlet? Who knows, maybe when I finish the whole thing, I can go back and make some of these edits. Thank you for your consistent and thorough comments! I super appreciate them, especially your attention to detail!