User blog comment:Vesper the Brisk/The Brisk's Breeze/@comment-1630956-20100502220404

Sometime I wonder why I became a war-lady. should be sometimes

Everyone went completely silent after. ''After what? "after that" or "after that statement" would sound better''

Talon's distrustful...which is probably to be expected, considering... That's not goin' to help Kenina's ponderings about what she would've been.