User blog:GulotheSavage/Gulo The Prince, Death is cold.

Gulo The Savage -- Fan Fiction
Chapter 1 -- The Frosty Breath.

The Land of Ice and Snow lay in the clutch of early winter. The sky turning grey with the coming of night. Gulo’s huge paws crushed the snow as he walked along in a hurry, his two score guard trundling on in his wake. Gulo shouted out his orders ‘ If you don’t find them slaves it will be you, who will serve me!’. The guards stumbled though the snow stopping at the edge of a snow draped forest. The guards looked into it with hesitation. The ermine captain called to Gulo ‘Prince Gulo!, They have gone into the Forest of Death, shall we follow?’. Gulo’s claws ripped the tree bark with anger. He swung for the ermine captain hitting him hard into a tree trunk, killing him instantly. ‘No feel free to stay here, anyone else?’. There was no hesitation the two score fought each other to not be the last one in.

The three slaves named Brojun, who was an otter. Tillet (Pronounced Tilly) who was a mouse and Tregal who was a fox, where all running though the forest. They stopped at a large pine tree, Tregal said though breathlessness ‘we cant run hide from them our tracks are too obvious!’. Brojun who was a leader looking type leant against a tree replying ‘Where not far from the White river, we can lose them there’. Tillet and Tregal looked at him with open mouthed shock.

The small red light of dawn passed over the horizon, the light reflected into Gulos eyes making him look a picture of terror. He stood up slowly treading softly towards a single sleeping ermine. Gulos tapped his shoulder, the ermine turned slowly and jolted back ‘Lord Gulo? May I be of assistance?’. Gulo crouched there staring at the sun rising. He let out a little sigh ‘Pick up the slaves trail they wont be far now’. The ermine nodded slowly, Gulo Pushed a bow and arrow into his hands. The ermine stood slightly confused ‘Lord?’. Gulo stood while replying ‘Kill them idiot’. The ermine replied with hesitation ‘but your farther said to keep them aliv……’ He voice lowered into a faint murmur as Gulo stood staring at him. Gulo snarled ‘Don’t fail me, or you will not live to see the next dawn!’.

(This my first time writing, please give me any pointers, and i will include peoples charactars into the story (If possible), Thanks)