User blog comment:Akash.B/User blog:Akash.B/@comment-The Forbidden Tale/@comment-1808183-20100301035233

I thought that that scene was *VERY* sad. Even though it was sad, it was really really well written. The whole thing with his brother not believing, or not wanting to believe that Vauz was dead is extremly realistic. You have great descriptions too. (just to let you know, that is one of my favorite things that I look for in anything I read) Wow, a weremole? Hmm... that's good. Yes, that does explain his obsession with logic. ( I also am all into logic, that's why I like the moles) Great cliffhanger! As a writer, I personally like keeping people on edge. KIC KIC KIC PLEASE PLEASE!!!