User blog comment:Simu Cooper/Cluny the Scourge (Chapter 6)/@comment-1988904-20100928213359

Great chapter. Looks like Whiptail enjoys causing trouble.

Please, please, please put these in the same blog post. It it the very essence of inconvenience for your readers to have to navigate back three to four pages in your blog to find the chapter you reader is on.

I think that might be one of the main reasons you haven't had many readers so far. You've been posting your chapters in a way we're not accustomed to see them and you've been updating too fast. That's what I for one am far behind. It's difficult to read seventeen chapters in a day with all the other things on our schedules.

Please think about reformatting this. You can look at my story as a template.