User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/The Coming of Badger Lady/@comment-1427879-20160225005841

Oo, very interesting! The situation with the vermin overlords is definitely something we haven't seen in Redwall before, though it's common enough in real life. I thought it interesting how Cregga figured it out while you made the situation more and more complex. I also like how Cregga has a very instinctive protective/lust for justice instinct, but it's tempered by Astar's more strategic and planning mind. I look forward to seeing how they handle the vermin!

I'm also really torn about the dreams and their meaning! The badgermum's comment about claiming the mountain does make me think that this is the far far past and we're seeing the first badger rulers of Salamandastron. (Admittedly the small hare contingent does make me think of Lord Brocktree or Mossflower, but idk). I'm still not sure how this relates to Cregga though, or even how they're going to survive...very intriguing!

I did notice a few grammatical errors such as missing words. You also used the word donning when talking about Cregga fixing her spear. Technically, donning is only used when a person is putting something on themselves, not something/one else. Attaching etc. might be a better choice.

Overall, it's definitely getting interesting. KIU Astar!