User blog comment:CaptainNightfur/Feral the Friendly Ferret/@comment-3462718-20110805023655

I like the way this starts; it seems off to a good beginning. Keep it up! :)

P.S. If you want a suggestion, just hit "enter" two times when you want to start a new paragraph; it automatically indents it for you, puts a small line between paragraphs. and it makes it a bit easier to read.