User blog comment:Danthemanb/Elmtails tail/@comment-67.142.162.22-20090609012939

Neildown---Hi, I'm enjoying your story. I give it a 4 star [I only read to 4th chapter so far and will be reading more tomorrow]. The plot seems completely different in a way that I like. It could use a bit more detail though. keep up the good work! P.S. I like your avatar!