User blog comment:Varkanax39/The Last Champion: A Novel of Redwall (fanfic)/@comment-8728029-20120613051914

Wow! I really like this. The prologue was really well done, one of my favorites I've read so far. I like the villain, he's crafty and smart and calculating and takes inspiration from nature and can hypnotize and knows what he's doing. Even if I never root for the villains. I like the names; one of them is actually my real name, though I'm not saying which, so it's really odd to read sometimes, but whatever. It's not good that Rivan has the Riddle, oh no, because then he'll try to get Raya on his side, though how he'd manage that, nobeast knows. By the way, did you mean Arken's name to be like the Arkenstone from The Hobbit? I'm sort of obsessed with Tolkien, so of course I notice that. Update me please!

By the way, will you check out and comment on my fanfics Noonvale and Holt of Pearls, please? Thanks!