User blog comment:Wolf985/A Tale of Two Rogues Chapter 8/@comment-1427879-20110608161605

Hm, to get it over with there were many errors throughout. Luckily they decreased more towards this chapter. There's a lot of more mature content which is...interesting. It still moves pretty fast though. You haven't mentioned any enemies except for the slavers so it makes me wonder if the hares are supposed to be the enemies. Is the title based off of Clarice and Scarum or Nathaniel? I noticed that you reused a lot of Redwall names. I wonder what's up with her stepfather...Well, KIU!