User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/The Blademaster's Tale/@comment-4094509-20120103204735

After reading all of this, I am quite intrigued. I believe I've said a couple times or more that you are good at descriptions in a BJesque way. I liked the characters also because they had flaws and made mistakes yet they still had their heroic awesome sides. That means the characters are well fleshed out. One constructive criticism I'll say is that Rorzan appears to turn into a warrior too quick. Maybe it's because he didn't appear a lot in the story itself sort of being a side character. Maybe he did get a whole bunch of training and understanding of life but it wasn't in the story. I don't quite know. But Rorzan was interesting nonetheless. And oh my oh my!!!! How I love certain characters!!! Even though Gabe was a side character, he was so fun to read about and I was sad when he flippin' died! And out of the villains, Bones and Ephraim were so well plotted out! They are like the perfect villain brothers that I have ever read about! But I loved Armuk the best. He was cold, calculating, and devious. He was like Zwilt from The Sable Quean but a more older and better version of him. And I like how you showed us the part where Feryn saved Brang's life. That was mentioned briefly in the Sable Quean and I got to see it now. There were also big twists and turns in this story that kept the reader on its toes! I loved it! I'll be expecting more great stories from you. KIU