User blog comment:Nitram the Warrior/Phantome Chronicles: Embodiment/@comment-1427879-20110615202024/@comment-1427879-20110616071820

Ok, here are some errors: In the first sentence of Chapter VI, it should either be a colossal watermeadow or colossal watermeadows. There should be some sort of punctuation in between basin and the. shrews after the break-down of Guosim seems a bit repetitive. He stopped midway retreated, having gone midway into his boat. seems repetitive and in need of some punctuation. You should put skimming instead of skinning.  t’was getting’ bore o’ doin’ nothin’. That should be I was getting bored of doing nothing (with the accent of course) or  T'was getting boring doing nothing. Cached I assume is supposed to be an accented version of caught but it would be better to put catched. Wobbled should probably be wobbly. t’is silly mout’s are feed T'is is a form of it is, so I'm guessing that's not what you intended to say, mout's probably should be mouths, feed should be fed. then should be them. Then, there's a misplaced quotation mark. um doesn't need an apostrophe in front of it. Mayon report should be Mayon's report. amongs should be amongst. Marfox should be Marlfox and always capitalized. They are no more works but in the context, it should probably be there are no more. 8 should be eight. botton should be either button or bottom. his say works but you may want to put what he wanted to say. It should be describe to us not describe us. All the rest of it is pretty good...