User blog comment:Brockkers/The Quest of Martin's Sword/@comment-1808183-20100308013347

Thank you so much! I will change those things. To your first question, she was expecting him to come, so she might have heard it better than other creatures. Yes, I should capitalize sister and brother, thank you. Sorry, I did put lake instead of pond, thank you for finding that mistake, and I meant to say Bladestripe instead of Rawnblade.