User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20140401032610

I'm terribly sorry about how long it took me to comment on this update. I really enjoyed it, though! There were a few grammatical I spotted, but I would mainly point out that in most points you would want to use past tense you'd or you had, not you've.

This is quite an intelligent villain. I can't wait to see how it all plays out and I love that you thought of the obvious problem with a siege: Redwall is internally supported. I do think that his daughter will be more of a problem than he anticipates, but we shall see. Great job, Astar! KIU!