User blog comment:Skalarana/Skalarana/@comment-1085812-20100321132650

"A very pretty snow white young rat named Skalarana waits as a form stalked into their camp.She got up and was going to see who was going into camp so late in the night"

You've got the present (waits) and the past (got up). It should be one or the other. (Waited/got up) or (waits/gets up)

Beyond that, and the grammar/spelling, it's good!