User blog comment:Brockkers/The Quest of Martin's Sword/@comment-1763658-20100130031214

I could go on about how this is a great fan fic story...or I could give you some constructive criticism. The scene of the tree climbing was funny, but it got a little bit confusing to follow. A few steps could make it a lot more manageable. As for the plot, do you have a few other threads that will spindle out of control than just this one?