User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-7662967-20150615213735

Oh dear .. I think someone is in real trouble now ..

Nice update! Very clever of Ovla, getting ahold of Nabon. And speaking of Nabon, he seems to be succumbing more and more to evil .. and recklessness. But it was a good thing he did, he sort of unwittingly saved his own enemies ;P

Nooo Olva, be ok! She's braver then I thought at first, and has a high level of pain tolerance too. I hope she doesn't die .. although right now it doesn't look promising. But Simon won't forgive himself if she dies, and he's already going to be in enough trouble .. I can just imagine the lecture he's about to get ..

And now I'm worried about Martin's sword! It may have just gotten buried .. but what if somebeast found it? And what if Zorra get's any ideas once she wakes up? .. after all, she did hear them talking ...

Also, I had this crazy thought. What if Freedom is going to find the sword? (probably wrong, but I just had to make that wild guess) ;D

I wonder if the Redwallers will but two and two together and guess Hopse was in on this escapade .. and I wonder what Triss will say too ..

Great job on this .. and now you need to write the next piece! (joking there, of course) ;) But I do want to know what happens cause now we have another cliffy! KIU! :D