User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/A little night music/@comment-1719793-20111120071121

I'm at book two and here's what I have to say:

I really like the layout and storyline. It's well written with hardly any typos and spelling errors. The characters are well designed, and the relationship with Vilaya and Jangus have me wondering on how they end up. I especially like that 'Rango' ref you added in the scene when Vilaya was with Sal's gang (who are epicly awesome and well designed) Your magnificent way of describing the characters and use of wording truly amaze me. And what makes me wonder how Vilaya managed to survive the venom from her knife (and imagine her being found in that twisted position, lol) and I like how Amby and Drake connect and the way you make them interact like old friends. And with the unique creatures added (more wildcats, a few wolves, and a dog) add more spark to it =D

the only thing that I have to point out, is that it seems too modern and not the typical Redwall time line; which is during the middle ages. Other than that, I really look forward into reading more.

keep up the good work, Salem ;D