User blog comment:Peony Laminar/Peony Laminar/@comment-From the South/@comment-1427879-20100624153716

The next chapter looks interesting. I don't like Jekker, and Oswego is...suspicious.

I think at the beginning of the 2nd section, as in the first*~C thing, you meant nothing rather than noting. I also think that mead doesn't have an e at the end. And at some points you should have put a ? as in  "Why don't you get us some drinks? " 

The name similarities don't bother me at all, I just wanted to be sure you were aware of it so you weren't accused of plagarism.

The conversation which was supposed to be whispered but everybeast heard, was REALLY funny! Poor Peony...KIU