User blog comment:Bluestripe the Wild/Bluestripe,A Name Remembered/@comment-1298206-20100902020532

@SM: Prologue: Yeah, I need to work on that... :P

Chapter One: She used "wretch" jokingly.

Chapter Three: Yeah, when I was reading this a while back, I thought the snake scene was a little random as well. At the time, I think I intended the snake to be hunting the shrews or something.