User blog comment:Laria Wavedeep/Laria Wavedeep/@comment-1738724-20100521020437

Yeah, Grall heard the vermin cheers, though very faintly. I was thinking of changing that part, Hollyfire, I thought it was a bit awkward. Keep going with the critique. Doesn't anyone like the lullaby? Yes, I'll update you Coral. Am I building up suspense?