User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Cripple/@comment-26141072-20150628024919

This was a great update! I loved the ending of your chapter where Svetlana told Kyle to call her the nickname her friends called her. That was so sweet! And Farl is getting interesting, especially when Svetlana even asked if he was a cold-blooded murderer. I really like his character.

And Viscum is getting more scary. She seems a bit happy for some reason. And Razorclaw? Showed concern over someone? Wooow.

Nighteye. . . I hope it's Naita, because that would be great if mother and son could be reunited! I especially love the sparra, they were always fun to read about even if their speech was confusing. "Worm-food mouse-worm etc." :D

Either ways, I am excited for the next bit and this has been getting great! Keep it up Astar!