User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Raven's Feather/@comment-1427879-20170805045737

(Did I miss an update or did you put Parts 3 and 4 up today? Sorry!) Hm, the way the story is going makes me wonder...how long have you planned for this story to be? I love how you always put such thought into your characters' names, the ravens' etymology is no different. I also thought their code of justice was interesting if Hammurabic. Brittle was great in the negotiation! I understand why she got so exhausted...Windbreaker was exhausting me especially and my loved ones' lives weren't on the line. It's unfortunate that Rodd died...particularly since I for some reason didn't grasp that his injuries were that bad when he first received them. Let's hope Brittle gets there in time! I did note her receival of THE Raven Feather so that's exciting :) Nicely woven, Astar. KIU!