User blog comment:Skipper Rorc/The Rise of Freedom/@comment-1738724-20110710030147

Saw a couple of typos in there, see if I can find 'em...

"It's the most common coin, then of them will buy you a small fish." I think you meant one of them.

"A lare fist or a well made knife will cost you one of these." I think lare is meant to be large?

Torrin's jaw tightened, "You specifically game him to me." I think that was meant to be gave.

...realized that the ferret was afraid of loosing him. Losing?

After a few minutes this the king deemed him ready. After a few minutes of this?

It's been only a month? Wow, I thought it was longer. Fytch certainly offered Torrin a lot of money for Colan. I think the three targets might be the king, queen and Torrin...And Runtha and Alspur are planning to kill them. They might be plotting against Torrin to sell Colan to Fytch? Maybe? Anyways, great update! KIC!