User blog comment:Wolf985/Rogue Tide/@comment-5156759-20131201201935

Very intriguing start, the society they're is certainly very unique and gives off a more modern (rather than medieval) feeling. Can't really comment on the plot because you've revealed very little so far, but it again seems interesting.

A few quick questions, why do you leave so many spaces between the lines? I feel one between dialogue and paragraphs to be sufficient. Also (if you didn't know) you can bold/underline chapter titles with the B and I buttons at the top, there are other formatting options up there as well. And in the first sentence of Chapter Three, what do you mean by "hack"?

Please do update me when you continue the story, I'm interested to see where this goes.