User blog comment:Peony Laminar/Peony Laminar/@comment-From the South/@comment-1988904-20100430183918

@Snowy, I'm glad you think Thalweg is interesting.

@Rorc, Thanks for noticing those mistakes, I've changed them up above. Good idea about the bracelet. I think I might work that into the story now...

@Windy, This chapter did have a much more subdued done than the last one, but it is one of my favorite chapters. I do feel like we get to see another side of the characters. The same thing will be true in the next Long Patrol chapter as well.

I think I'll put up the next chapter or even the next two chapters today