User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-7662967-20141224003004

Wow, this story is amazing! (note that this may be a long comment)

I like that you use Freedom because she always interested me .. I wonder if she'll ever get reunited with her 'parents'. I started out kind of liking Nabon and then decided I liked his sister better ...

The whole Salamandastron thing was really good, with the traitor hare and Captain Longstep (I liked his involvement with One-ear *sniff* and Greywhisker) And although you killed Sagaxus, I like the thought of Grawn leading the long Patrol.

I like the idea of Triss as a mentor, and Simon fighting his bloodwrath. I have the feeling, he's going to sneak out and try to retrieve the sword of Martin .. but maybe that's just me.

The Rolt is a really good addition, and that whole fight with the eagle was amazing. It was very vivid, and well written. Somehow, I wonder if Knivenut will survive ..

wow, you're making me love Kars and Foxglove .. even if she's sworn to kill Redwallers. I hope she decides not to .. although considering the circumstances I'm guessing she won't.


 * Bring Kars back .. he did not die ok .. it just looked like it!* (ok, that was random, but you are making me like the character so much!)

Anyway, yea. I love this story! I did see a few typos and such, but I have those too. I'm not judgmental about such things. The only thing I really noticed, was up at the very top, you say 'For Freedom' contains spoilers for 'Triss' and 'Mariel of Redwall'. But I didn't really see any for Mariel .. did you mean 'Loamhedge'?

Other then that, this is awesome! Update me! :D