User blog comment:Laria Wavedeep/Redwall's Taggerung/@comment-1366789-20100206210007

one thing you need to know, is that you don't give the full description of your character all at once. you need to randonly bring in their description. example:

''he twirled his matching daggers idly in one paw. his friend watched trying to make out the pattern even though they where a blur''

or

''he placed his black foot paw gingerly on the marshy ground, then the white one"

this makes life a whole lot easier on yourself.