User blog comment:Snowpaw the Wild/The Past is Gone/@comment-1884658-20100721203317

Rorc: Rotbreath is just some random fox. He was related to Bane in the original typescript, but I cut that out. There is a lot of past mixup in this fanfic. I'm surprised everyone hasn't figured out the deal with Fol and David. I did not go to any great pains to conceal it.

Snowy: It was only a few hours, from the middle of the night through to morning. And he had passed the peak of his flight, so there wasn't much force behind it.

And, fair warning, this fanfic discounts the accuracy of The Legend of Luke in several places.