User blog comment:Segalia/Segalia Riverstorm's voyage/@comment-1427879-20120122014927

End of Chapter 14! I don't have much to say about this update...it's probes at things I hinted at in earlier updates, like requested, but I think you, the reader, have room for thought and questions. Also, if you didn't notice before, there's a new poll that I would appreciate if you answered. So, questions, comments, critiques are all very welcome!

@Starpetal: Thanks! I'm glad I fleshed the character out well enough. Yes, prior experience helped with that...Thanks for commenting!

@Armel: Thanks! :( Yeah, it was kinda sad to have him die but I'd been planning it for a while so...Yes, Grovelum is a very interesting creature...Yes a machine :) Thanks :D