User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Cripple/@comment-7662967-20150204213035


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Razorclaw's back??! What's he going to do to Kyle now? *gulp* This isn't sounding exactly promising .... Also Connie .. I have the feeling he may be in trouble. Maybe the shrews should show up about now ..? This gets better and better! XD

Viscum, too, has apparently returned! I wonder if she'll be on Razorclaw's side in this .. or maybe Kyle's. Is Naita there too? :3

I only saw one mistake, when Kyle and Connie were leaving the shrews. Connie thanked them for their hostility, but I think you meant hospitality? Anyhow, this was really good, and I'm excited for the next update!

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