User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20151028054857

I found it very interesting how the other beasts react to and mainly tolerate Surt's anger outbursts. I also liked the reference to Green Isle and the Shellhound otters. The double cousins are a cool concept, pretty realistic if you ask me. Surt's plan is quite smart. Thornbush's outburst at Mlika's death surprised me, but it looks like they now have another foe to worry about. I would definitely guess that Surt previously being a slave has a lot to do with his current issues. I do like Logi. I also enjoyed the mystery element as they tried to track down the source of the Bonecruncher, but this will be a big issue that they have to face. I'm interested to see how it will affect both them and their enemies. Anyway, interesting update and twist, Astar. There were a few minor grammar issues I noticed, mostly wrong tenses and missing punctuation. Nicely done. KIU!