User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/The Coming of Badger Lady/@comment-26879391-20160204011947

As for Cregga, I already really enjoy her character! She seems like a strong, simple minded badgermaid with a strong sense of loyalty. I must admit I enjoyed hearing about Her family, especially about Tejon and Sandor. Her surname, Rosehip, was such a charming choice; rather simplistic and alluding to her future. Though I do like Astar, I must admit that her character is a bit reminiscent to other Hare companions, such as Pikkle and Dotti, though you really nailed the hare aspect of Astar! As for her family, let's just say I wished we could've seen a bit more of them. They where so heartwarming and familial with a strong sense of loyalty and attachment, which I don't really remember much of in the Redwall Saga :).

The First Chapter was overall a very satisfying introduction to the story. It definitely charmed me, especially Carrina's attachment towards her Daughter, which I can understand. The Rosehip family definitely contrasts to the Goldenpaw family, seeing their size and attitudes. I must say that the Cave scene really did make me start to see the close bond of Astar and Cregga. I look forward to seeing the two interact later in the future; Astar perhaps being a source of comfort towards Cregga.

The Second Chapter was a big wakeup call. The first chapter had a bit of a dreamy, soothing feel, reminding me of a summer dusk. The second chapter was more of "Hey. This isn't all fun and Games." And it definitely portrays it. The start of battle ripped me from the lull of Cregga's homeland, really exposing what was happening. I enjoyed seeing Korjis, though he is set to be a villain. Maybe because he's a seafox...and seafoxes are usually some of the most interesting characters I have read about in the Redwall series. The Male Badger's death was sad; especially when the female badger came running up to him. Her flowery apron was the hooker, though, how you described how out of place she was. It really was a heartbreak!

The Death of Carinna was a shock. I didn't expect to see that coming, especially so early! I must admit it did feel a bit rushed, though I do agree with what your doing. Her goodbye was sudden, though my heart did go out to the Badgermaid; She's the last of her family! Her saying farewell was also heartwrenching. I barely knew the Goldenpaws, yet I fell sorry for them, and hope for the best. Your description of the spear was also eloquent; it's strength yet grace matching Cregga's demeanor, in a way. And of course, Astar's return was to be expected. For every Badger must have their companion, right? (It's often done, and Even I'm guilty of doing so...).

As for know, It's a very gripping story! Korjis's Title as 'The Butcher' does raise some alarm for me, as well as the fall of the Male Badger in the Beginning of Chapter 2. Though I may not comment as often as I would like, I will be trying my hardest to keep up with the Story :D.