User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Raven's Feather/@comment-31874168-20170531235103


 * GRINNING* Hi, Astar Goldenwing!  I'm new to the Redwall wiki, but a long time fan and addicted reader/writer.  This is beautiful!  Not sure how else to say it, but I really love the warm, family-storytime feel of the prologue.  And, I only wish I could describe action scenes like this.  My stories have a lot of dialogue.  Your story is really intriguing so far, and although there are a lot of new characters to try and remember, I think I'm going to enjoy them all.  I'm re-reading The Bellmaker right now, so Southsward is nice and fresh in my mind.  This is great stuff!  Looking forward to reading more :D