User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/The Warriors Begining/@comment-2142396-20141219133124/@comment-7662967-20141220004503

Awww thanks so much! I love every comment I get, especially really long in depth ones! (the honest truth is, I got this idea when I was a lot younger, and back then I didn't think I was clever enough to write a story of my own, so I rewrote one. *I learned rewriting can be harder then writing from scratch* Once I got started rewriting, it got addictive ..) Yes, I put the horses in .. cause I love horses! :P

Oh the Daskar/Greeneyes plot .. yes, it's not over til it's over ;) Groddil is one of my favorites .. I know he didn't have a big enough roll here, he gets better in the sequel (yea, spoilers) Ahh Rupert .. well we aren't done with him yet. Erwin was my crazy twist .. I'll admit I probably let her convince Badrang to easily ..

And yes, you are right, there is a heavy Aslan influence to Lord Ignasa. If you wonder why there wasn't more of him earlier, it was simply because I couldn't think of a good name.

Yes Sally .. err Sayna (me) was a bit to important at first .. I had to learn to share there .. I promise it's better in the sequel (and if you thought Martin and Rose had good personalities of their own in this book, just wait til you read 'Four Warriors Cometh' ;)

Deepfin was kinda shoved in there I'll admit .. its chief roll was to kill Vilu Daskar and then I wasn't sure what to do with it .. And Badrang's death .. yep, that was another of my crazy twists ;D

And as a side note, I wrote this book simply for a foundation to my next one, which is the one I really was inspired to do in the first place. So this ones plot isn't as strong or connected .. but it was also the first book I ever wrote. And I'm glad you mentioned that about my writing, it's good to know I got better throughout the book.

(I can't wait to see what you think of the next one .. if you thought this one had some serious twists .. well .. I'll let you find out. Be forewarned it may start out a little weird and creepy .. but it will quickly explain itself.) Thankies about my art work .. I didn't get enough done for this one .. but oh well.

And yes, I will read your fanfics! There's not that many stories still active around here, so absolutely! (I've read a bit of 'For Freedom' and really liked it, I need to comment!)

You're welcome .. Thanks for reading!

(so this is long .. oh well)