User blog comment:Peony Laminar/Peony Laminar/@comment-From the South/@comment-1884658-20100501214604

I loved it! awful cliffhanger though, please update again soon!

Here are some typo's I noticed:

''It was be quite easy to construct." Don't think you need the "be."

Cypress, Cregga and Hawthorne were thick as thieves as usual, chating amongst themsleves about something or other. It's spelled "chatting."

It had been much too long since she has allowed herself to climb. You should say "had."

''"Oh dear!" hollared Sister Bianca.'' Spelled "hollered."

And you prob'ly know what I would conclude this with, so... yeah.