User blog comment:Ailavyn Siniyash/Noonvale/@comment-1427879-20120123221113

There were a few small grammatical errors, but besides that it seemed to be clear of mistakes. It was interesting to have a fanfic set in Noonvale again! The stripe on Dexna's head reminds me of Sunflash and she seems a bit moody. Starpetal is interesting and I like the hare trio. Their mission reminds me of Eulalia. Kataryna is interesting as well. I wonder who else besides the trio and someone from the actor's ensemble are going to leave Noonvale for the quest. I enjoyed the scene of Rose and Martin arguing in the Dark Forest. I also like the ermine's hiearchy. I wonder if Redwall's going to enter into the picture at all or how the squirrel family fits in. Nice job, Starpetal. KIU and update me!