User blog comment:Skipper Rorc/The Runaway/@comment-1669318-20100515020457

Hmm, converting Koitir into a shelter...clever idea. Good update. There are a couple of typos though.

Deyna pointed to a group of squirrels. “The squirrels over there are making arrow,...I think it should be arrows.

When you get back to camp, gibe General Halfear this...You probably meant to put give