User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/A Slave's Revenge/@comment-1427879-20150821234050

Astar! The prologue and the introduction of the Heartless were so very classic Redwall that it made me very happy. Well done! You also bring your own voice to the story which is enjoyable. This is definitely looking darker, but it's definitely interesting. I really liked Grimclaw and Moot for their short time in the story. I wonder what their plan is and how the Tallrocks will feature into them. I only spotted a few spelling/grammar issues. This is looking great so far! KIU, Astar, and keep me updated!