User blog comment:Clockworthy/Redwall's Hero/@comment-1630956-20100414001838

er...a few mistakes.

1)At one point, she nodded off and found she way lying on the wooden medallion. Should be was

2)After a few minutes, she was spotted, but by the wrong person. There aren't people, so it should be somthing like "beast" or "vermin" or somthing to that affect.

Not much else to say other than FINISH!!!!