User blog comment:Akash.B/User blog:Akash.B/@comment-The Forbidden Tale/@comment-1808183-20100225050445

These are just the tiny grammatical mistakes I noticed: First paragraph in chapter 6 last sentence in that paragraph: cut of it should be cut off, 2nd paragraph, same chapter (all of these are for chapter 6) first sentence, abbey should be capitalized as 'Abbey'. 2nd paragraph, 3rd sentence: I think it might make more sense to say, 'miscomunication' instead of 'communication'. Sentence 8, same paragraph: I don't know about this, but you might have spelled 'rondevous' wrong, but I don't know-- I would look in the dictionary if I were you. (It's a hard word though, and I probably spelled it wrong. :) I don't see any more right now. The story itself is REALLY good, I just wanted to help you a little bit on the spelling. And if you have any suggestions for my story, just tell me.