User blog comment:Akash.B/User blog:Akash.B/@comment-The Forbidden Tale/@comment-1808183-20100405020108

That was great Akash! *gasp!* Did I just hear a hare call food "measly old grub" I am in shock! There were a few typos which I'll point out later, but besides that, you know how to keep a plot, and tell a good story. :) Wonderful job.