User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/A War from Inside/@comment-25720178-20150403231515

Poor Lilly *hugs protectively*

When Fragorl mentions 'the one' and 'rabbit' my mind instantly flies to Thalia, but who is it? Please don't let Thalia become evil... Wait a second *looks confused* Thalia was normal in her first appearance in TPF... But...

So is it Lilly or Thalia? (XD Don't tell me, if I'm going to be writing for Thalia it's best I don't know.)

One more thing, *sits as ordinary reader* Do both Fragorl and Kinta have blue markings? It that a connection or just a crazy coincidence?

Lastly, when the ferret stated 'My name is Fragorl, yours is Lilly' truthfully I fought back a laugh, just the ironic simplicity of it...

Amazing! I'll just wait and try to learn as much as I can about the Shadow Fighters before it's my turn. Do you have any tips or suggestions that could help make my writing better? Sometimes I feel like my style is boring/too mental instead of what is actually going on. I seem to focus's on the character whose point of view I am writing in too much.

Thanks for updating :)