User blog comment:Wolf985/A Tale of Two rogues chapter 4/@comment-2207385-20110510014624

WHOA!!.........wait WHAT!!.....I have to say I wasn't expecting that hahaha, this chapter really shook things up!, I'm glad Nathaniel turned out different than I thought so I take back what I said about him, and I'm glad you changed how you write the story it flows great now. Excellent work!!

May your blade always strike true and Happystorytelling!!