User blog comment:Segalia/Segalia Riverstorm's voyage/@comment-4727992-20120621200707

Fine, fine, next time I'll keep it cleaner, working with cadets tends to get your mind in the gutter. Anyway, nice update and HURRAH FOR LIBRARY WI-FI!

Now, on topic: NIce update, I like the emotion you're able to write into the characters, though I feel kinda sadistic when I say I enjoyed Fern dying. Good writing and keep up th eamazing work Seg.