User blog comment:Wolf985/the tale of two rogues chapter 2/@comment-2207385-20110504034917/@comment-3974102-20110507022107

thank you for the advice. i wrote this fairly quickly and didn't realize all of the mistakes. i'll have to go back through my chapters and edit them when i get time. i have no idea where i got the idea for the names of my characters ,they just popped into my head. if you have any suggestions about what should happen later in the story feel free to suggest anything. (p.s. be sure to read chapter 3!!!!)