User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/The Prophecy Fulfilled/@comment-26073479-20150321155727


 * machine voice and flashing lights* ALERT, ALERT BIG UPDATE, INFO OVERLOAD. ALERT. ALERT ;P

Tehehehe, dibbuns in a tea trolley hitched to a horse by a jumprope, they're certainly determined. That Gonflett is bold. He went and stole a gold chain right off a corsair! XD If I were Wippback and Bootbrain, I'd be especially careful with that bag, Roseanna's a dangerous beast to handle (when you're not her parents, that is XP)

Ahhh, Sunflash. No, I don't think he could survive that long in slavery either. But not if he escaped.....

Arvid and Starbuck know each other? Hmn. I sure hope they choose to stay with the squirrels. Maybe they'll run into the "wraithlike creature" along the way? ;)

Every time you write a Bluefen and Veil scene, it succeeds in building more and more sympathy for them. Poor Veil, he doesn't really deserve that name in your rewrites. Though to be honest, I didn't get the name riddle until I reread the book a few months ago (you know, the letters of "Veil" rearranged makes the word "Evil"?)

Sayna's remembering! Keep remembering, Sayna! I wonder who the white mouse was?

Oh, yeah. That one horses name was Lightningflash! I didn't realize that XP. I wonder if I came up with it independently, or if it stuck in the back of my head from TWB? Oh well.

I wonder what will happen next :)

P.S. Are you still coding the siggy? If you don't want to, I think I know enough to do it myself now.