User blog comment:Deyna the Mighty/StarBlade/@comment-1031934-20091015172847

Dude, don't be sorry! Everyone makes mistakes in writing- if it was easy, there would be millions of people getting rich off it it every day.

Now-

Question- Martin is a mouse, and a Taggerung? :S It is a interesting plot, though, because one wouldn't think of a Tagg. Being a mouse, exactly. But I think you also mentioned his role model was a Taggerung as well... I don't think 2 taggerungs would be the friendliest together. :-/

It's a bit confusing, a little, esspecaily the family tree. But I'm gonna continue reading it, Very interested how it will turn out. ;D Keep writing. :)