Talk:Sitruunasooda's Story

complament, suggestion
I love the story. hmm.. one thing i do find is an over use of the word agile in chapter 3, mayhap, you could use in one of the places the agile squirrel.... use nimble instade of agile. thanks and again, I love the story! Sambrook the otter 03:02, 17 September 2008 (UTC)