Talk:Riffle Swiftback

grammar question?
Isn't the grammar here a little confusing to those who haven't read the book yet: "He worked with Major Perigord Habile Sinistra and was the brother of Algador and even saved his life"? The reader could be unsure at first glance whether Riffle saved his brother or Major Perigord. I suggest "The brother of Algador, he worked with Major Perigord Habile Sinistra and even saved his life"? --Tiria Wildlough  Owl Reception 13:46, August 7, 2016 (UTC)