User blog comment:Nitram the Warrior/Tales of Mattimeo: Slagar's Legacy/@comment-2207385-20110609160258

I feel a lot of things really improved! for starters the flow of the story improved to the point that I was able to easily breeze through the story and enjoy it even more, scenery was added more and that really helped in visualization, also I noticed that they were fewer typos now, great revision can't wait for what's next in the story!

May your blade always strike true and happystorytelling!!!