User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Cripple/@comment-7662967-20150110233937

Wow .. this story is just amazing (like all your stories) :) Poor Kyle .. I'm glad he found a friend in Connie (who interests my cause he's a rabbit, there weren't enough in the original books) But his father ... Is AWFUL! I'm really worried about Naita, and what Razorclaw could have told her .. And this Redtail is an interesting character, I wonder if he and his son will be important :D


 * chases Razorclaw with a broadsword*

jk jk XD anyway, this is off to a really promising start I can't wait for the next update! (update me) >':'<