User blog comment:Skipper Rorc/The Rise of Freedom/@comment-1738724-20110501010323

A few mistakes here and there, but I can't seem to find them...

''Colan chucked. "Yes, Master." I think you meant chuckled''.

I like Lord Zayin. He seems to be like Torrin. I'm glad Colan got found :) I was worried that Zayin was cruel, but he's nice. Mm, raspberry cheesecake...

Runtha and Alspur are sneaky...very. I wonder why. Runtha is going to become a traitor to his family, I think. Anyways, KIU! Nice update!