User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/The Prophecy Fulfilled/@comment-25720178-20150403134700

Here's my comment! Since I haven't commented in a while... This is going to be a long one.

Poor Yar, it looks as though she's in trouble now, poor thing :( I hope Roseanna becomes a sort-of friend to her, at least I hopes she doesn't bite her... And I certainly hope Yar doesn't die! She's quickly becoming one of my favorite characters with her bravery!

As for Xemx... How did I know that was going to happen... Then I couldn't really see Roderick getting married and living happily ever after. And the fact that she would crawl to Bluefen for help? She must be really desperate. Poor Bluefen, she's trying to hold smoke in her paws...

Here's my major question. 'Cause I'm sort of confused. Who does Arvid need to get the message to again? I know it brings hope but... I'm confused.

I loved Thalia, she was perfect! I like how you make her paranoid and wary of what is around her, probably thanks to her situations and personality, and the image you painted of her with adjectives. *Hugs* It makes me miss Lilly's sister in real life... Poor little thing... (Technically she was a young doe, nursing two kits, Lilly had to foster them along with her five. I felt so sorry for my sister... But at least she kept one of the kits. If I ever get another mini Rex like her, perhaps I'll name her after Thalia.)

I love seeing the drawings you do! Veil and Kinta seem like perfect friend! *smiles*

I sure hope Veil and Bluefen will be okay, they seemed to be getting in slightly better shape, before Xemx came along... Yikes...

By the way, will Redfarl meet Arvid? I've been meaning to ask that but didn't until now. XD It's kind of funny how they're both royalty ranking squirrels with tribes.

Also, just a side note. I feel bad for the Guosim, they haven't made an appearance here or in my fanfic. I've been trying to include hedgehogs and moles... But I always seem to leave them out in a way.

And the marks once again make an appearance! Yay :D Sayna! Though I fear their situation is grim as well.

As always, this is going absolutely amazing! I marvel at how few mistakes you make with grammar and spelling, really for many around here. *Looks guilty* I think I make the most mistakes XD.

Do you think you could work on AWFI? Not that there's a rush, I just want to work on it after you XD.

Because I'm not gonna add this elsewhere, I'd thought I'd mention that I have separate short FanFiction ideas that I was to try as side stories, but I never seem to get anywhere. Plus I need to finish ATR.. What would you suggest?

As always, I love how reading ypur stories makes it seem like another little world to me... Sometimes I wish I could be a part of it, and that's a good thing. I really love the addition of the horses and Lord Ignasa, even if the originals didn't have them... It just feels right to have them in there somewhere.

There's sure a lot going on! With the adorable kids, dangerous enemies and many excellent characters tension is definitely rising!

KIU! I'll be reading even if I don't comment at first.