User blog comment:Skipper Rorc/The Runaway part 2/@comment-1988904-20110316015714

A wonderful end to a wonderful story!

I finally got a chance to read the last couple of chapters.

The battle between Zartho and Deyna and then Rorc was really exciting. I wasn't sure how it would play out, but it was really neat how Martin's sword was knocked out of Deyna's hands to flip through the air.

Also, I liked how you had Rorc keep his Juska tattoos. It's interesting especially because he father had his Juska tattoos removed. It's as though Deyna tried to erase that part of his life and Rorc wants it to remain because it really helped define who he is.

And I see that there is going to be a sequel....awesome!