User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Cripple/@comment-25921040-20150415195944

It's great to see that Kyle has some potential allies among the crew! Farl is currently my favorite character (but that will probably change in a few hours XD ). Their practice fights are hilarious, and so are Farl's mentions of how his family treated him! The part where he told Kyle about the bet was good too ;D I really like the way his friendship with Kyle developed, especially since they started of as semi-enemies. (I wish I could write character development like that!) I get the feeling that Farl would be more reluctant to tell Viscum about escape plans now than he was a few chapters ago...at least, I hope he wouldn't tell Viscum...

I'm glad Rumba sees Kyle as a valuable assistant (and maybe a friend?). If it wasn't for her, Kyle might be missing a paw or two now! Viscum is evil, but she's not as insane as Razorclaw. *considers* Actually, she is - I hope poor Connie doesn't end up pawless, either.

Kyle actually did really well defending himself, too. That was quick thinking when he pretended to have a vision, and during the practice with Farl at the end. Even though Farl tried to fetch Viscum, Kyle still managed to win that skirmish with his own wit.

I also like the double meaning in the chapter title. After the whole 'fish analogy' with Rumba, it could mean escaping or a plan, but it could also mean Kyle's new friends. Great updates - I'm looking forward to the next one!