User blog comment:IllusionOfOblivion/A Twisted Reality/@comment-7662967-20141128035731/@comment-25720178-20141128041050

Aww thanks so much! :) (I believe you, I have written quite a lot before, just never Redwall based, and thanks!)

As for paragraphs, I forgot entirely about that! I've pretty much always shad a habit of that, and thank you for reminding me. I actually do start new paragraghs, but don't make the break visible enough, plus I'm writing on a tablet. Thanks, your comment was very useful! (You can already tell I'm going to say "thanks" a lot to you XD.)

I'm really glad to hear that! At this point, I haven't thought about the plotline nearly enough, and keep coming up with new ideas, so I'm greatful to hear it doesn't drag on. I try to have unique characters, but not so many unique characters that it seems like a zoo.

I love to switch Points of view, it makes it really fun to right, plus it gives me a chance to think about what will happen next. Yep, Cliffhangers are one of my favorite things to do! :)

(I was planning that for sure! Though she is the main character, I have a few others in mind. Such as the main antagonist or other characters. That is a useful tip, I'll try it!) I never thought about that idea, and its a good one. (I'll try! She's an odd character so I'm not exactly sure myself!)

Yep! I can tell! And I'm very pleased you are! It motivates me to keep writing!