User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/Four Warriors Cometh/@comment-25720178-20141229011331


 * Sighs in relief* Good, I knew you wouldn't let Grodil be killed... Yet. Great job! This is an awesome story, keep writing!

Also, I see no mistakes, again good job! (Unlike me XD.)

I love to see the character development in this, it's really good as well.