User blog comment:IllusionOfOblivion/A Twisted Reality/@comment-2142396-20150321123719/@comment-25720178-20150321154330

Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it! I do feel a bit guilty, not commenting on your FanFicions often enough and all...

Anyhow, that's great! I was trying to make it so but I wasn't sure if I had pulled it off.

I'm glad you think so, Riah would be glad to hear that, and I hope the other squirrel lives to tell the tale. Now she has to find a way for Zevquain to escape! I have a feeling Riah may visit the slaves who work on the fortress once or twice.

Also, I was thinking, should there be a group/civilization that lives on the island who can be an ally to them or not? I've been mulling ove that for Chapter 12.

Yep! It landed on Mossflower, and that was pretty expected. Thankfully I sort of intented readers to know that, otherwise it would have been an epic failure.

Once again thanks!