User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/A little night music/@comment-1860112-20120319031753

This is an absolutely crazy story, though it was fun to read. Vilaya did seem a bit overpowered, however-- since when did she have Bloodwrath, or that much charisma? There are tiny cows, chickens, an otter becoming leader of a group of bloodthirsty vermin in around five seconds, a quickly strung together romance, limbs falling off in battle like they're made of playdoh, an albino squirrel archer who completely disappears after a few chapters along with her jerk boyfriend.... along with some genuinely good description and ideas, the Warmblood Games being one of them, and most of the abandoned Skelton homes being described with a drape of Gothic influence. I enjoyed the insane hedgehog servant, for one, and Francis was great for the time he was around. The story most definitely had a lot of flaws, but there were lots of good things within it, as well. Practice makes perfect. :)