User blog comment:Ronnie Macleaf/The Black Robes/@comment-3403118-20110402023631

Hai, this is quite an interesting fan fiction you've got here, but you still seem to be developing your grammar yet I do not wish to write a massive critique (that I can) based on this story. It seems that your writing skills are still improving for I notice some styles in writing that I have once applied in my childhood. You still have done well and do you also know where a 'poultice' could go in this story. You know... Also, I am working on a report based on an ancient cult I have created in my mind involving robed beings that started a cult. Eventually some time when the Church of HamensHalt began depleting the system, other sects of the system sailed to Patreignia (presumed continent in which Mossflower Country exists in) and begin spreading their influence, finally ending by the early 1800s. Good work Ronnie!