User blog comment:Laria Wavedeep/Redwall's Taggerung/@comment-1427879-20110228200324

Some parts near the beginning are slightly choppy. I like the way Dayl became Taggerung (why is it always otters?), why didn't the Skipper get up and rescue Dayl? Were there too many? Poor Skip...It's unfortunate (but lucky for them) that he has amnesia. I have something like that in my book but he regains his memory after a sleep. Good Hunto! Funny Hunto and poor Hunto. Where is this in the timeline? Wow, Dayl sure is good fast. I finished 4 I'll continue later. KIU! (Besides the fact you finished it already)