User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/The Prophecy Fulfilled/@comment-25720178-20150403134700/@comment-7662967-20150404004515

That's ok .. I understand, you've been on a trip and all (actually you still are on a trip ;P)

Yea .. she's got no end of troubles it seems, the poor bird *pets Yar* It's ok .. I know what I'm doing (hopefully) :/ Yes .. Roseanna should make friends with her, after what she risked (and sacrificed) to rescue her .. Can birds feathers grow back, I wonder?

Yea, coupled with my spoilers and the obviousness of the situation ... I have given away a great plot twist. *sigh* Oh well .. I have more .. >:D Yes .. she's pretty desperate .. and you'll see why when you get the next Velox update. He doesn't plan on letting it be ..

Bluefen .. you really need to kick her out (it's only for the sake of her poor children .. but oh .. I won't spoil it.) suffice it to say you guys may really hate me XD jk jk (sort of)

Oh, I'm sorry, I probably didn't make that clear enough :/ Since Argulor was wounded and cannot tell the marks of Salamandastron's situation, Arvid's trying to find someone to tell them the news. (so they can be prepared.) He decides upon Starbuck, but cannot reach him. So he sends Thalia. XD

Speaking of which, I'm glad I portrayed her well XD (I will be using Lilly too, but as fate has seemed to will it, she fits better into the 'Accused' plot (in fact she's just what I needed) so because I couldn't find a very suitable place to put her in 'TPF' and had no real way to replace her in 'Accused' I used Thalia here instead :D

Awwwwww :'( *sniff* that's so sad :( my brother had a really fun Dutch buck once, but he died for no apparent reason (he was too young, really. Just one day my brother found he'd died overnight. who knows? It really made no sense, not like he was sick) but yea .. I know how you feel about that. Even if it's not your rabbit that died, it's still really sad :(

Thank you! *smiles* I'm working on Reep's request still, but it should turn out cool (the background and objects in the picture are what's taking so long *facedesk*)

Yea .. they have ... a hard road to hoe. Let's say that ... :/ (I'll spoil it otherwise)


 * bows to your amazing knack for guessing all my ships* LOL yes, you got me. They will most certainly meet XD

I know! I know, I know, I know DX WHY is it I cannot seem to include them! But I don't need them (not really) *facedesk* and now I'm not sure how to explain their long and most obvious absence :( I suppose Verdauga could have forced them to flee Mossflower and they might have gone south and ........ Oooohhhhhh wait a minute! In a way you have given me an idea .. XD

Yea .. The marks/questers don't seem to be getting much time .. They need to get to Salamandastron! That's the problem .. they just need to get there! then they'll have more screen time. (A bit like Tsarmina in FWC, isn't it ... :/

Umm ... *is guilty* *is so totally guilty* I .. really do make a lot of mistakes, just my mother .. likes my story and .. reads it. She points them all out to me ... *hides under rock* I feel like it's cheating somehow ..

Yea, I saw that and was like *facedesk* You know, I'm just going to do some now XD Hopefully I'll determine my stopping place and finish up in the next day or two. What have I been working on chapter 4 for .. a month? A whole month? What kind of a collab member am I?? (a bad one) Ok .. this has got to stop. I swear I'm finishing my chapter this week! >:3

Hmm .. well as you see, we collabed my side story .. I've never written one on my own .. ;P But I'm not sure. We didn't start AWFI til I was done with TWB and semi done with FWC (I think) But I'd say I would develop the ideas, brainstorm of and on while writing until you get to the point you can write them (don't know where that is though) And about how to finish a story, here's my tips: (they may not be valid. what works for me may not work for someone else, just saying) XP but I write a time line, brainstorm epic scenes, listen to motivational music (when my 5GB data plan allows for it :/) draw, draw, draw (yea .. drawing is a lot. even if most of those are sketches no one sees) and promise myself, ''ok. ok just write until you get to a certain point. when you get there it'll be easy! when I get there, I set a new aiming point XD (and of course .. I seem to be addicted to writing these things. I've really fallen in love with the characters and sometimes I wonder if I could'' stop) but then, don't worry, it's taken me near three years to get this way :3 If you keep at it, slow but steady, you'll get there. Just don't focus on what you can't do. Focus on what you can do, and one day you'll look back and say .. "Wow .. I did that thing I never thought I'd ever do!" (don't ask me how that works .. I have no idea. I'm still dazed I completed FWC, and sometimes hardly realize how scarily far I've gotten on TPF.)

However, I ramble. I need to stop. About side stories, sometime spoiling and confusing people is totally ok (depending) Like say, what I plan to do after 'Accused'. I'm going to skip strait to 'Tears of the Ocean' (TotO) and write that. It'll be somewhat confusing, due to that fact I skip a complete trilogy XP But it will explain itself, and then I hope to back track and write the trilogy I skipped XD (yea. big dreams. we'll see) ;P

Awwwwww ;D Thanks! It really has developed into something, hasn't it? It honestly frightens me a bit. What would have happened if I hade given up on chapter 5 of TWB? I don't know ..... (don't really want to find out either) XD

Yea .. and this was supposed to be a shorter book. Like I could keep anything short and simple :P

Ok! That's fine, I have problems commenting myself ...