User blog comment:Peony Laminar/Peony Laminar/@comment-From the South/@comment-1988904-20100416213340

Hey Skipper, I'm glad you liked the battle! I was hoping it was exciting. I tried to slip some emotion into the battle to keep things interesting and I hope I succeeded. Zigor might be the most evil of the villains here. He's a complete sociopath, his only interest is in making as much collateral damage as possible.

And thanks for noticing that passage. It is worded a bit awkwardly so I've fixed it up with a little more detail.

Thanks so much for helping me make the story better!