User talk:Zaran Rhulain/Archive1

This is Zaran Rhulain's Talk page from Oct to mid- Dec

Beginning
Please do not vandalize news pages. --LordTBT  Talk! 04:18, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

Talk
I take it you've read doomwyte (some how)?

Zaran Rhulain 00:19, 5 October 2008 (UTC) Yea, i pre-ordered it and it came out in the UK earlier,i got the book on friday 10/3/08 sorta finished the book within a few hours

awesome! Sambrook the otter  Talk! 00:22, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Here
I got this from Some random redwall fan

Don't ask about the technical stuff, I dunno. here is a sample one:

Some random redwall fan  Talk!

Just copy and paste this to word. change the user name to yours (exactly), cange the color (if you want) and in the images, just insert its file name (example: Martin002.jpg)this is how you make the sig. to auctally put it up onto the wiki, go to my prefrances (in the MORE bar in the upper right hand corner, next to your name) once clicked on there should be a series of tabs. the one it is set on; scroll down a little and there should be a bow that says Signature (or something like that) just copy and past from word into the box, and viola! You have this:

Sambrook the otter  Talk! 00:54, 5 October 2008 (UTC).

(I can give you the long detailed thing Some random redwall fan put on mine if you want me to)

Hope I could help,

Sambrook the otter  Talk! 00:54, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Doomwyte
I think it's great you managed to get your copy of Doomwyte early, however I'm concerned a lot of places have not yet received the book, and do not want to be spoiling things too early for readers. If you would refrain from posting spoilers until I unprotect the article, I would appreciate it. --LordTBT  Talk! 05:58, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

I fixed something
Look back up at Sambrook the otter's comment. It should make a bit more sense now.

Also, I have helped a few users with their signatures, and feel free to post any questions you may have on my talk page.

By the way, The Last Stand of Redwall Abbey is awesome! Wow! I'm saying that and the battle hasn't even started yet. Keep it up, I'm hooked!

--Some random redwall fan  Talk! 19:29, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Story
hey, I am in awe of your story. I went through and corrected all the grammar and formatting necessary. keep it up! Sambrook the otter  Talk! 20:47, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Story
sorry, When I read it, it was hard to read and full of choppy sentences. <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 20:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Ok
its your story, you can keep it how you want to.

<font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 20:54, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

signature
Sweet! great signature! <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 21:09, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

your welcome
Your very welcome! Im glad you got it down. If you need any further help with anything, please feel free to contact me ;D oh, p.s. Keep up the story! great work so far! <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 21:13, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

Out of place.
You mean how the setting is barely described, how the characters seem way too innocent, and how peace, love, and joy seem to be the main theme even though I keep promising a bloody, action-packed battle? I know. BUT I'M WORKING ON IT!! By the way, I think I have a good idea of what's going to happen to the horde of innocents in The Last Stand of Redwall Abbey. Just a hunch though.

Also, one of the reasons I haven't really gotten anywhere with Red Tide (II) is because I'm having a hard time getting past the slow, no-action parts without rushing through them and making them sound stupid. Anyhow, expect something bloody within the next week. Hopefully.

Anyhow, keep writing The Last Stand of Redwall Abbey. To heck if people say "I don't like the idea of Redwall being taken over completely. (I know I myself said this, but I take it back.)

--<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 01:39, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

Artwork
We will need explicit artist permission before any of the artwork you uploaded can be hosted here. -- <font color="Green">LordTBT  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 04:39, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

thanks ;)
im glad your excited for it. hmm, heres something else I haven't (and won't) add to the public spoiler,

''Tallborath and Alba spluttered together in their defense, "But how...? You...? We...? Paws...?" They both looked down and saw they were still holding paws... The five travelers waved tearfully good bye to the figure of Britta, who stood alone in the dusty red arches of Redwall waving a resolute farewell...''

hope you enjoyed those. Thanks again ;) <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 21:31, 10 October 2008 (UTC)

Story
Love how the story is coming. I wasn't sure at first if I would like it, but now I'm hooked. By the way. What are the pictures for your signature. They're pretty cool.

<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 00:50, 11 October 2008 (UTC)

Crazy
Yep. Its always driven me crazy how Martin had placed the riddles for Matthias. Thats why I wrote the story. <font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 01:30, 11 October 2008 (UTC)

BTW
i didnt mention this earlier because i was distracted but i love the pics in you signature i actually had the one of the Taggerung as the picture on my desktop for awhile, love it!--Aida Otterock 01:34, 11 October 2008 (UTC)

Question
How do you format cybercatmia's pics? <font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 02:42, 11 October 2008 (UTC)

Signature Image
You're going to need to drastically decrease the size of the image you are using for a signature. For a good ballpark size, my signature and that of Cornflower are the best examples. Signatures should not be taking up large amounts of space on a page. --<font color="Green">LordTBT  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 03:15, 11 October 2008 (UTC)

signature art work.
your totally right! I was looking at all of cybercatmia's art work, and she is AMAZING!!! Im glad its gone to good use ^_^ <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 19:09, 11 October 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
But i have already decided to keep him back at redwall. He didn't really fit into the story I have planned. But thank you so much for offering! <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 23:03, 12 October 2008 (UTC)

(oh, p.s. I can't wait for more of your story! Great spoiler!)

Looks like...
Looks like doomwyte hit like almost a week earlier than it was supposed too, one of my friend sow it in a book store yesterday. Just wondering about this, and how is the book, and should it be classified as horror? thanks, <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 23:10, 12 October 2008 (UTC)

>:}
Gruesome. I like it! <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 19:09, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

Hmm how about this?
What do you thin about this?

''Placing his paw onto the top of Yerget's quivering head, he began to grip ferociously. He began to twist the shrieking rats head backwards. Sella shut her eyes and winced as she heard a loud snap. When she opened her eyes she saw the rats head was twisted around at least twice and was not looking behind its dead body through sightless eyes...''

<font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 21:46, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

XD
Toally <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 23:18, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

sorry
When I said "She's catching on..." I was talking about adia, sorry for that confusion mate. <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 13:04, 14 October 2008 (UTC)

Style
Before you get too carried away, I would urge you to review the Manual of Style and other character articles. --<font color="Green">LordTBT  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 17:10, 16 October 2008 (UTC)

Inheritance cycle
Ummm. Dude. Whats the inheritance cycle? :D

<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 23:05, 21 October 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
Sweet. Thanks for clearing that up. :D

<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 21:58, 22 October 2008 (UTC)

=)
al I know is im pre ordering it ASAP =D <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 21:16, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

Hey if youve been reading...
My fan fic story then you know how Zifan is going to meet a foxlord up north (her and Kulool absentmindedly pass Redwall without noticing it) so yeah i need a name for the foxlord and none of my friends can think of any... so yeah i need a name and you seem pretty good at coming up with 'em--Aida Otterock 00:34, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

badgerlord
How 'bout something like Ragion... idk im not all that great with badger names all i know is that the full word is ragionevole means wise in Italian--Aida Otterock 02:12, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

I would love to help!
oh, don't worry, it still says you've got new messages at the top. Hmm... this is sorta off of the top of my head, But... What if the traveling group meets up with a band of the Long Patrol, Skipper reunites with an old friend, they tell them there need and whats going on at the abbey and why they have come. The Long Patrol takes them to the mountain. The hare(s) describe the Redwall's predicament to the badger ruler. The badger ruler gathers an army of hares and sends them to Redwall to help fight. As I said, off of the top of my head, so I may have another solution if I think a wee bit harder. Tell me what you think! <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 15:05, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

hmm...
You could always have it kind of supprising like there just walking and then there suddenly surrounded of something. <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 22:33, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

Oh, Thanks!
Thanks for formatting my story! <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 22:35, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

About After Pearls of Lutra
I think it's a very interesting story, but one thing. If it's one generation after Pearls of Lutra, wouldn't it be happening at the same time as The Long Patrol (book)?

Advice Please
Since I'm supposed to be an otter carrying the sword of Martin, should I have an image of Deyna? He is the only otter in the real books that I can think of which carried the sword of Martin. If you think I shoould take something else, OK.

--Ivanovsson 20:26, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

Lenora
I'm REALLY bad at doing that kind of writing. Would you help me? Gracias. <font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 21:28, 3 November 2008 (UTC)

Help w/fanfic
Sweeeeet! Thanx a bunch. =D Just ask if you have any questions. Oh, dont feel rushed. Take your time.

<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 23:00, 3 November 2008 (UTC)

Awesome
Sweet! Thanx, I Love it. =D That was the part I've been stuck with.

<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 23:41, 3 November 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, Im right there with you on the template thing
We should come up with a template together that is kind of a group thing that could be signed by every body that we can always use. What d'ya think? <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 22:25, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

Nice poems. <font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 21:12, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

=D
Sweet. That'll be so cool! What about?

<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 21:21, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

Thnx...
I hadnt read your comment left on my fanfic until now thnx im not so good at formatting stuff xP--<font color="Orange">Aida Otterock  <font color="Orange" size="2">Talk! 01:57, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Lol...
I love your poems... cellar ballads(pish)love it hehehe lol--<font color="Orange">Aida Otterock  <font color="Orange" size="2">Talk! 02:05, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Welcoming
Can I make one suggestion towards your welcome template? <font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! had asked me earlier if he could be included in our 'references' if you know what I mean. He seemed really anxious about it. Could add him to the list of users in your template?

Thanks.

--<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 04:46, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

alright, your story
What I was saying was the Idea of Redwall being destroyed is an idea a lot of people  have. I was using you story because it already has the "Redwall almost being destroyed" plot.
 * But, In all that, Your story Is highly unique and has another aspect to the ending. Redwall is not destoryed, it is just abandoned... or something like that)

sorry for the misunderstanding ^_^ <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="yellow" size="2">Talk! 18:10, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

ha ha (Bout the sig color)
No! Don't deleat it! its amazing, And I want more! Just cause you don't update it often doesn't mean you have to destroy it. (Im hoping me saying it (The story line) was a bit cleche hasn't made you want to get rid of it!) well, anyways, keep it! <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="yellow" size="2">Talk! 02:05, 11 November 2008 (UTC)

oh, whoops.
I know what you mean with the writers block and not having enough time.

Hmmm... I don't know. Abandoned would be cool. (Er for what happens) <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="yellow" size="2">Talk! 02:58, 11 November 2008 (UTC)

Welcoming
When welcoming new users, your signature really needs to appear at the end. --<font color="Green">LordTBT  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 04:15, 11 November 2008 (UTC)

Wot...
I like repeating myself... it annoys people xD--<font color="Teal">Aida Otterock  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 04:43, 13 November 2008 (UTC)

My story
[[Media:Example.ogg]]

Thanks alot for editing my story. You really helped me i was conflicting about wheter to format it or not any way i am horrible at spelling and formatting thanks again. Deyna the Mighty 03:58, 14 November 2008 (UTC)

PICTURES
how to add a picture i still have no idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!--Deyna the Mighty 04:48, 14 November 2008 (UTC)

Haha!
Hahahar i'm givin' up tryin' to beat ya to the new users, Im gonna stat takin' up my new position of posting "how to make a signature" on new user pages ;) congratz mate, you won! Sambrook the otter   <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 22:46, 15 November 2008 (UTC)

OK...
I wont delete it... yet, for now it will stay i just dont like having more than three... projects i guess is the word i should use going at a time--<font color="Teal">Aida Otterock  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 01:02, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

Lol
Haha! Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 21:16, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

Well. I'm also a, usually-has-no-idea-what-the-heck-anyone's-talking-about-most-of-the-time-but-goes-along-with-it-anyways, kind of gal. So, your good. =D

<font color="Orange">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Yellow" size="2">Talk! 00:02, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

Your...
Good with names right? Ok dumb question but still i have a whole plot idea for a fanfic but i cant come up with anything to name it, it's about what happened before Verdauga Greeneyes came to Mossflower and shortly after Ungatt Trunn attacked Salamandastron you know in that place i cant remember with hisfather Lord Mortspear yeah anyway i cant think of what to call it--<font color="Teal">Aida Otterock  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 00:05, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

I'm...
Not one who likes unecessary killing. Reality is fine, and this is fan fiction. So...yeah =) Oh, BTW. Could you read Lenora Longtail and tell me what you think of chapter 9? Thanks.

<font color="Orange">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Yellow" size="2">Talk! 02:15, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

Last Stand
I just read your latest part. It's really good. I love it. =D With Sapwood's death. Yeah it was kinda early. But I needed to get rid of him, so...yeah. But if you look at Some's comment on my talk page, you'll kinda get an idea of what's comin up.

<font color="Orange">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Yellow" size="2">Talk! 03:07, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

Neh Uh!
No way! Don't call me a teenage genius. I go to a private school, but that doesn't mean I'm smart. Besides, I have to qualify to graduate from my school and that means I have to write a 4,000 fact thesus from memory. It's basically a history timeline. My teacher just told my parents that I should do some Independant Study courses from BYU while I finishing up my school year. So, that's why I'm doin it. =)

<font color="Orange">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Yellow" size="2">Talk! 03:33, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

The only prob is, I need to be 18 to actually go to BYU. So I still have to wait. >P <font color="Orange">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Yellow" size="2">Talk! 03:39, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

Idk. Probably get hired y my Dad to be his secretary =D. He's an attorney. But I don't have any other plans. So, yeah.

Red Tide (II)
So someone DID read that. Good to hear.

Yeah, I'm going to get a little more detailed into what happens to the slaver. Don't expect it to be pretty...

By the way, the only reason I haven't added anything lately is because I'm in the middle of 3 stories right now.


 * One for school
 * One I'm going to post a lot later (to make up for chains)
 * Red Tide

I'll have some more up this weekend hopefully. --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 03:46, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

PS: Keep going with last stand! It's freakin' awesome!

They're paying for my classes. But, we're doin them one at a time =/ which i dont like too much. But, I get to pay for my dog. She's a little snot! =D So, it's sixes.

Thnx...
For the name and idea suggestions i found one i like maybe two, yeah... kinda bored kinda sick read your message again for the bored thing on SRRF talk page... a 21 century U.S. army squad being sent to the time of Brocktree and the Blue Hordes... nice if you do actually write it this should be interesting i can just imagine it, "Oh! No! I think I just stepped on some kinda squirrel!" Just kidding,xD, im pretty sure it wont be like that... lol--<font color="Teal">Aida Otterock  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 01:48, 24 November 2008 (UTC)

Naira
I can change her name if you'd like? <font color="Orange">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Yellow" size="2">Talk! 22:20, 24 November 2008 (UTC)

of course
What gender are the ottersand how do you want them posing? I don't pixelate my name so no one can say they drew them. Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 03:56, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

Gladly
That ain't sappy, and don't pay, This ones on the 'ouse ;) Drawing is more of a pass time for me! so do you almost want it how I have the Merry Christmas pic? or do you want their foreheads laid against each other like in ch 7? Both of them held that embrace for a good while then released each other. With foreheads touching, he murmured...? Sambrook the otter   <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 04:15, 27 November 2008 (UTC)

Hey matey
You really oughta update the template on yore user page. Most of the sigs have changed. <font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 17:21, 27 November 2008 (UTC)

hi, and uh, sorry
I won't have the pictures to you untill at the very least monday. See... Im in Ohio on vacation so, I won't be near a printer until monday.... =( sorry, <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 17:07, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

:D
Thanks :) I do need some details though.
 * What are they wearing?
 * how ligh/dark is their fur? how big are they?
 * are there any remarkable things about them, like any scars or stuff like that?

Ive got a very very rough sketch done, and I would hate them to end up looking thew same as Shaila and Sambrook. Once again, thank you! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 19:08, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

Thank you!
and I hope you don't mind (unless you want me to, ) won't be coloring them. That helps a Ton, cause the sketch is completely wrong then. Ok, so theirforeheads are touching, hugging? or holding hands? I will skethc the hands, cause, well, thats just a bit easyer. <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 20:35, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

alright,
I am finishing their heads as of tonight, and their foreheads are touching.(May I say, a bit difficult todraw, but hey, I like a good challenge!) I will either have them still hugging or holding hands... depending on what looks better... any ways, I will not let you down!.... I hope! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 23:13, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

thanks ;) and its done
I finished your picture, but as I said, I have not scanner to put it on the computer with. It supprisingly looks pretty good. The reason I never get any of my story finished is because I CAN find the time, but never do it in that time. Its more of dicipline that I need to learn. I will be writing more as soon as im home :) <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 16:12, 29 November 2008 (UTC) (p.s. do you want any scenery?)

well.
here it is. now let me comment, This is a "pretty good" picture on my scale, however, if you can tell I just started in finding out how to do cloth fold. I do apologize if its not what you wanted. I can always make another! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 03:00, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

:D
wow! Im really glad you like it! The funny thing is, most of the stuff you like ('cept shading" ) were all mistakes. I guess I was right when I told my cousin, "Mistakes usually make a picture, not break it." Once again, thank you, and if you ever need me to draw anything else, im just a message away. <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 04:18, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

Any time
you need another, Ill be available. Don't worry about my school schedule, I only go to school two days a week. Just now I am about to start practicing how to draw folds in clothing, so I cannot wait for another assignment! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 04:38, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

makes sense
so its from zan's point of view. I will admit, im not to familiar with vermin, but Ill try my best. shouldn't be too hard. It may be a little while though. what should the background be? fringing forest

<font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 00:25, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

:D
I love it :D <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 01:06, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

Fan Fiction.net
Nice new sig. I still think your first one was the best though.

I'm not sure if you are aware, but there has been a fiasco with Fan fiction. LordTBT recieved a complaint that Death Knight was too graphic. since then, Black hawk removed several scenes from his story. The graphic ones. Namely, the stuff that was, in a sick, messed-up way, the best part to read.

But, since then, I talked with LordTBT and I came up with an idea. Any stories with offensive content would be edited to make it more family-friendly. At the same time though, there would be an external link leading to a different site. And the gory, not-edited version would be posted there. Dannflow recommended a site, and I just went to check it out.

Okay, did you post The Last Stand of Redwall Abbey on FanFiction.net? Was that you or a rip-off artist? And if that was you, would you mid telling me how to post a story on that site? I can't figure it out, even after I made an account.

Thanks--<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 22:11, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Re:fanfiction.net
Okay, thanks for that. That helped quite a bit. Anyhow, I'm with you on the Death Knight thing. Black does have a...dark imagination. Take it from me, he's a buddy of mine.

Jadeleaf or whatever his/her name was sounded a bit like a stuck-up know-it-all =(. Yeah, I read the reviews on fanfic.net.  There's really nothing wrong with Last Stand.  It's awesome all-around.  --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan   <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 22:55, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Compleated but defeated.
I have the picture finished, but the scanner is not set up =( sipprisingly, It turned out really well, so when it is up I will let you know! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 18:11, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

:D
Thank you! I will try to have it up by tomorrow. There is one gruesome detail, but Ill let you wait to see it. <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 02:05, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

Update on Return to Noonvale
Been writing like mad. Still am, but needed a break.--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 13:13, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

lamo :D
I couldn't help but chuckle when I saw you added my nickname to the Template. <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 21:45, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

alright!
Its up, and ready for you! But, as Lord TBT wishes I am not post it on your talk page, so it will be on ym page. Oh, another thing, in reality its a lot darker than it looks, but anyways, Heres a link to my page! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 03:33, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

Muhaha
I added onto my sig (lol I hope this isn't goin to my 'ead.) <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">My Usertalk Page!. 04:08, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

sweet
I don't know any other way to say this, but Thank you! that means a ton. ah bout the weasel. I was a bit pissed when I drew that (as you can tell) but, hey As long as you like it! Till my next asignment I will be doing some random stuff (like the pic of springo I put up... good lordy it looks so much better in person!) But until then, Ill be waiting! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">My User Talk! 04:22, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

Now yer makin me blush!
I gotta say, thank you, but drawin is something I absolutely love doing! (When I can I will be getting a tablet laptop so I can to digital artwork, kinda like cybercatmia! (Boy do I admire her work!)) but thats besides the point. The point is, im really glad you appreciate my work!
 * D

<font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">My User Talk! 04:36, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

sweet!
ah, a challenge! Thats nice to hear. Naw, you don't need to pay me, there just low res. drawings. Experience is all the payment I require. I have been wanting to do a war scene for a long time now, I just had no charictars to use, but now that I do.... I will do my best! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">My User Talk! 04:54, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

Testing 1 2 3
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<font color="Green">Zaran Rhulain  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk!

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me!

Help
That's your sig in progress, right? I think I know what the problem is. You know how when you go to My Preferences and you type your signature code into that box? Underneath that box is another smaller box that says raw signature. Make sure that is checked before you save. It should work then. --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 05:07, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

two things
Thanks :D (Oh, the drawing is comming along well!) <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">My User Talk! 03:47, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
 * THeres some grammar I can't decypher in chapter 8
 * what type of animal is brother Phis?

Signature
We're having signature problems again. Way too big. --<font color="Green">LordTBT  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 01:53, 9 December 2008 (UTC)

Delta meets Redwall
What the-. How did-. She was- Only just-. Now-. Huh?

You WERE being serious about that idea. It's not Redwall, but WHO FREAKIN' CARES?!! THAT'S AWESOM!! Slightly strange and messed-up, but AWESOME!! That needs it's own page!

Brother Liam is starting to admire a human in a otter's body. That's a little creepy =P --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 02:57, 10 December 2008 (UTC)

PS: Does this mean you're going to stop Last Stand? Damn. =(

That was awesome! You hadn't mentioned the idea in a while, so I thought you were joking or had forgotten about it. I agree with SRRF, that definitely needs its own page! All hail the power of the assault rifle! I can't wait to read about that weapon's inevitable action! -<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="red" size="2">Talk! 03:43, 10 December 2008 (UTC)

its good
I was a bit confueuds in the proluge he hehe "is this cthe famuss redwall abby from brain jacquse books" he he he he he keep going ps I have witten a short story i am in chapter one ( its been wittren)and the proluge is up, mate I cant get over is this and the air riffle not spelled right u see I live in nz so I just caal them air guns

--<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 06:48, 10 December 2008 (UTC)

re: ???????
im trying to say its good keep wittren --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 21:54, 10 December 2008 (UTC)

Last Stand
I saw your story on fanfiction.net, after looking at 600 Strong, along with reading some of the reviews. I have one thing to say to Jade whats-her-face: "That's because arrows don't sound like banjos, moron. Bowstrings, however..." Seriously, I don't know how someone mixes that up. -<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="red" size="2">Talk! 23:54, 10 December 2008 (UTC)

Very true. "I am the grammarian of whom your mother warned you." I love it when people think good grammar and good writing are the same thing. It reminds me that no matter how high the standards seem, someone, somewhere, is making the omnipresent creators of the standards think that maybe the standards should be lowered, thus making it easier for the rest of us. =D -<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="red" size="2">Talk! 00:21, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

I dunno
Read Chapter Two. Awesome. I guess the title is sufficient, but I'll think 'o something. It's hard, though, I'm not entirely sure what you have planned. I mean, 'Death Knight' made hardly any sense until the end of part one. Okay, well, I was trying to come up with serious names, but then I hit Mr.Rat I couldn't control myself. I don't expect you to use any of these, in fact I'd be surprised if you did. Keep writing it, it looks great. Sorry for my lack of naming ability. -<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="red" size="2">Talk! 01:25, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Delta Squad Comes To/Meets Redwall
 * Alternate Reality
 * A.R.T.
 * Portal To Another Reality
 * Mr.Rat, Meet Mr.Assault Rifle
 * I Did Not Sign Up To Become A Talking Otter
 * If Redwall Was Science Fiction
 * Rambo: Redwall Style
 * Redwall Special Forces: When Things Get Furry
 * Redwall: Reloaded

like the new bit
<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 03:50, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

WOW
Awesome Alternate Reality Chapter! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 04:25, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

hey
Hi, I am a new member on redwall wiki but have been a rewall fan for a long time. Just wanting to say hi.

Update
I am well into Chapter Nine of Martin the Warrior II- Return to Noonvale. A heads up!--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 18:52, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

It won't be much longer.
How long did it take for Martin to find Boar? It wn't be that long, but there are several chapters to go. I've got the main story written in my head, but I need Zounz. and Redeye's death- y'know, the way they die. That's practically the only thing I've not planned.<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 21:23, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

Alright, here goes
Mystery Person (Not telling name) is swept down a river- either goes through old Kotir flood tunnels and comes out at Redwal, or is found by Jeod (I'm leaning towards the latter mainly, but it would be cool to go through the tunnels.--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 23:41, 12 December 2008 (UTC))

Good Idea, but then . ..
A) How am I going to keep Martin from meeting the MP? B) I'm considering putting the MP on the Dark Wave--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 00:05, 13 December 2008 (UTC)

Thank God!
Whew, I thought you were done with Last Stand! But Otter Delta is probably an idea that's hard to get rid of.

It's the same thing with Red Tide and 600. 600 Strong is taking up most of my imagination right now, but if I do ever continue Red Tide, it probably won't be for quite a while. I'm stuck again. :(

Glad to hear the cream of wheat line went over well. I must admit though, it's a lot better in the un-edited version. --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 01:30, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

PS: I saw Otter Delta on fanfic. I'm probably going to respond to it, in case I already haven't. By the way, on fanfic my username is Inkstain234.

I guess the picture of the mouse on the talk page gave it away.

On the un-edited version, it's something along the lines of, "looked like cream of wheat, smelled like cream of wheat, felt like cream of wheat, tasted like crap." Yeah, they swear a lot more in the un-edited version.

Shadow of a Warrior
Ok so you may of may not remember but i told you i was planning of writing a fanfic based off of what happened before mossflower and slightly before and at the same time as lord brocktree yeah well i have part of it up now if you were wondering the title of this is the name of it--<font color="Teal">Aida Otterock  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 05:21, 14 December 2008 (UTC) btw substory thing Delta is awesome

===me 2=== Hey, I writting a fanfic/essay like that too. I tells what happened at loamhedge before they had to abandon it. You can look under essays and you will see "loamhedge the final days", but it's not done yet. What exactly is yours going to be about. What characters?--Tree Climber 15:48, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

Whoa, pardner
Ease up a bit, will ya? I don't mind violence, but tone down swearing and, well, er, 'Other stuff'. OK? --<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 19:38, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

huh
Are you talking to me? What did I do?--Tree Climber 20:02, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

600
What on Earth makes you think that I would just delete my story randomly and never post it again? Of course it's not permanent. Actually, after I finish this message, I'm going to repost all of what I had AND the first battle =) I just ran into a technical error and some of the contents needed fixing anyway.  --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan   <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 21:58, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

In Otter Delta . ..
It was mainly that 'indirect reference' that got me. "If he was really in a cruel mood, he'd take on of . . ." you know. Your story is good. Don't stop writing- you're better than I am! I'm sorry. --<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 23:05, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

Wuh
Kinda confused, I don't who everybody is talking to but I you are talking to me let me know.--Tree Climber 23:05, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

heeheehee
That line came out of the blue- glad I thought of it, gives me a new stroy line.--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 22:39, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

Just the end of the section
Fooled YA! HEHEHEHe Don't tell anybeast.(How should I kill Redeye?)--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 02:58, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

Good, but . ..
Remember in Triss how Sagax pointed out that Kurda still deserved a chance, even if she was a coward and it was her fault that Shogg died? I think it'd be better if he died like Badrang- Directly killed, for revenge and to blot out his stain. Hmm, what if he strangles him? That's very painful- I nearly had it done to me once- OWCH! Very long, VERY Painful, dirct end. Fits the bill, right? But I'll keep yours in mind. And BTW, its a SON, not a daughter. (I guess Violet confused that, huh?)<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 04:39, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

I think the strangling idea fits best!--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 15:01, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

Oh, man Its good to e back!
Im really sorry I have been gone for so long! Ok, I have some things to say Firstly, Its really great to be back, and yes, I will get those pictures to you. Second, Thank you for those colors, I will give you credit in the template. third, any other chapters you want me to illustrate ? <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">My User Talk! 21:12, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

thanks and you answer
I was grounded because of that thing form the devil they call homework. I was getting a 37 in algebra and a 57 in science (Ironicly they are taught by the same person) so, I had to finish all the homework I hadn't turned in (And let me tell you, 5 lessons of algebra in one day is a living hell) <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">My User Talk! 21:27, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

oh, its not that I don't understad, its just that I never turned in any of the homework :( <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">My User Talk! 21:37, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

your picutres...
are on my user page. <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">My User Talk! 22:27, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

erm,
Is there anything wrong with the pics? If so please tell me <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">My User Talk! 03:51, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

I plan on it. Its the first time I have drawn a toad- er auctually.... other than in first grade or so I think this is the first time I have drawn a reptile, (I auctually think the toad in the front is Kermit...)

;)
Its always a pleasure :D P.s. I really love otter delta! P.P.s. that would be great!

On your template for new users can i take out Jude Ethulia--<font color="Teal">Aida Otterock  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 04:17, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Ah yes that will come hehehe i dont think i will like my Ungatt in the end }:)--<font color="Teal">Aida Otterock  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 04:23, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

For right now, I am going to draw something for Soren, But After that I will be open to either illustrate the new version of my story, or anything that any one else wants. It will be a while before the new version comes out, So I will have a bit of time to twiddle my paws(Practice folds (P.s. on that-Thanks, I really hadn't practiced it much until I drew Brother Phis) SO, If you want to ever draw you anything (I might re-do to one o the two otters)I am always available! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 04:26, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm not THAT heartless
Well, not yet anyways. *Winks.* <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 12:46, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Uh-oh
Zaran, you're going to kill me. *Puts on armor* Update- chapter 14. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 14:32, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
Thanks :) To be honest, my own story is beginning to remind me of 'Outcast of Redwall', strangely enough. I can't wait to write part two so I can stop thinking that xD

--- -<font color="Goldenrod ">Clockworthy  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 01:21, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Brains, Bigfang!!!
If you let Bloodback win, not only will I DIE but so will Charie, SRRF, Samb., etc. Just wanted to say. . . <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 03:53, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

NOTE
I made my doors (and windows) Taggurung/ badger in bloodwrath proof. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 13:07, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

I got your message
Added to what you'e already reaad- marsh toads and the lot. BTW, what hapened to Tullgrew kulling fatgutt? <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 14:59, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

*Wink*
Mossflower!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 18:19, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Fan Fiction: Loamhedge, the final days is fianlly done. Be watching for my new fan fic, a greeneyes christmas.--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 18:28, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

He he he...
Yes but we have plenty of good warriors on the ship with us. Me, my mate, my daughter, Sambrook and his mate. All warriors by blood and to the core!--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 20:33, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

lol
Dell is screwed. <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 20:53, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

The first part to my new fan fic A Greeneyes Christmas has been posted!--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 23:15, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

pleas please please please be online!!
Chap. 16 updtae. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 04:59, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Started Chap 17
Heeheeheeheeheeheehee! It's nice to know something yo don't! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 19:46, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Holidays
<font color="#green">M <font color="#red">e <font color="#green">r <font color="#red">r <font color="#green">y <font color="#green">C <font color="#red">h <font color="#green">r <font color="#red">i <font color="#green">s <font color="#green">t <font color="#red">m <font color="#green">a <font color="#green">s <font color="#red">!

--<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 20:39, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Pictures
May I ask where you get those amazing picture, I love them! <font color="Lime">Rakkety Tam  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 22:33, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

An I quote:
"The dpear hit him in the midsection". Basically, Fatgutt hit him with the butt (blunt) end of the spear, bruising his ribs and knocking him off the mountain. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 23:54, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Wow
Good thing I told that Keyla was alive before- I'll shut up now. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 00:15, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

UPDATE!
There has been a new section added to A Greeneyes Christmas--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 00:28, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Any suggs?
I'm a bit stuck. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 00:34, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANKYOU!!!
I'm back in buisness!!! Expect updates! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 01:17, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

yeah I know
That and to read the new message you have to scroll down like 5 times just to click the link to where the new message is. <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 02:44, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

k,
Besure to tell me what he says!