User blog comment:Mariel of Redwall/Mariel and Dandin: Never Again/@comment-1146641-20090308130217

This is very good, Mariel. Though why Dandin doesn't git his useless tail off the ground and slay some from the BACK!?!?!??!?! Doesn't he care about MARIEL?!?!?!?!?!?!?! This is good, sorry for my outburst. Oh, and Mariel Of Redwall? You might want to label the "parts" as chapters, the pinecone part being the "Prologue", and the next part being "Chapter One". I'm only saying this as a "heads up, yo, um... at Chapter Thirty, it'll look like it goes on forever if it's labeled, "Part 30". But, you know you don't have to do this! Did that make any since at all?

Hollyfire the Warrior Eulaliaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!  13:02, 8 March 2009 (UTC)