User blog comment:Layla Goldeneyes/Layla of Redwall/@comment-1298206-20100522181016

Alas, Layla is no longer a user here. I feel bad about starting this after she left.

Anyway, I just finished Chapter One and I'll give my review of it. OK, sounds good, but I noticed a few minor grammar errors. Another thing, why did Jenna and Adrian let Niana Blacktail join them if Jenna didn't trust her? How did the arrow go through Layla's chestplate? I'll continue to read on!