Thread:IllusionOfOblivion/@comment-7662967-20150301060608

On questioning? Hmm .. well, at this point, I think all Adkar is going to want to know is stuff about the marked ones (from Groddil) He'll ask things like who all the marks are, where they all are .. ect.

Or he can just take Lilly off to try and start her training as Malimore's seer .. cause he wouldn't do that with Groddil there .. that'd be kind of silly of him lol

(And ATR isn't boring! I really like it, it's just getting good! XD You said something about gladiator fights! And besides, I want to know what happens with all the characters! X3 On your writing, it's actually improving! (I think so) probably you're just a bit stuck (as I became once or twice on 'TWB') that stinks, it really does. Writer's block .. ugg. However, I found a way to help myself avoid it (somewhat) Here's my advice ;)

What I did was write out a timeline in one of my notebooks. I mean, I knew the basic plot structure you know ;D So first I made a list of important things I really wanted to have happen. Then I made a sketchy time line of events. It's a lot easier to write when you have a game plan XD

(I need to do that for TPF, cause at this moment .. I know where I want to get but it feels like I'm going in circles *sigh* so you're not alone ;) But don't give up! Try that if you think it might help, cause it really helped me with FWC XD

I'd comment on ATR, but it won't let me :( Maybe you should ask Lord TBT if he can fix that XD 