User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Sharkslayer: A Side Story to ‘For Freedom’/@comment-1427879-20140612224330

This was really good, Astar! I did notice a few grammatical errors such as a lack of thes and misplaced words, but overall, it wasn't too bad. I apologize for taking so long to read this.

I did really enjoy this story. I liked how close the community was. I loved all the little details you put in that really embellished the story, but didn't drown it. I liked the fights with the shark and how they had to face off against it multiple times. Overall, I really enjoyed it. This can't be the end, though. Is there more? If so, keep me updated! If not, smashing job!