User blog comment:Redmight/Knights of Redwall/@comment-3124101-20110829172628

This chapter actually made me shed tears, Literally, That's how much I liked it.

Now to Critique: There are some words missing, and yer punctuation has not improve (Sorry, I really can't find a way for that not to sound insulting.) But there is one mistake that threw some of the chapter of, Red-san. Skard has been referred to as a "she" at least thrice.