User blog comment:Peony Laminar/Peony Laminar/@comment-From the South/@comment-1988904-20100526185757

And a gold star to: Gandr, Winy, and Rhea for finding typos!

@Gandr, I'm glad you liked the conversation. I tried to add a bit of lighthearted humor and I thought it be nice to see a bit of the friendship between the two characters.

@Windy, Interesting noting that about Hawthorne. Maybe he's just a happy-go-lucky sort of chap....or maybe something else.... And the next chapters gives a big clue about Dann's past

@Snowy, psychotic? Did I misspell it somwehere?

@Rhae, yep Mortys is the raven that we saw in the beginning. In the upcoming chapters we actually get to meet him/hear him speak. I'm actually growing fond of the raven. I've already finished two of his chapters. You guys will like him.

@Laria, Thalweg is my favorite captain too and then probably Bloodnose. Lousewort from the Long Patrol? I hadn't even thought of that. I wonder how old it would make him though. It's an interesting thought though, maybe I'll add that in.

Thanks so much, everyone, for reading!