User blog comment:Redmight/Knights of Redwall/@comment-1427879-20110429072913

There were several typos and at one point I believe you switched tenses. The sentence at the beginning is on the verge on confusing... From the song, I would have guessed it was a hare. But no, it's a mouse. A craftsmouse who is much needed for his services. Why? How did his friends die? And the inevitable question...What's going on at Redwall? KIU!