User blog comment:Asria Wildlough/Asria Wildlough/@comment-1630956-20100416000446

Huh, good beginning. A few changes could make it better. first, make books and chapters like this.

==Book 1==

===Chapter 1===

===Chapter 2===

and so on....

also, make a new paragraph (press enter twice) every time a new character speaks.

Other than that KIC matey!