User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/A little night music/@comment-1738724-20110319002929

I agree with Segalia. At first I thought that the song was just another paragraph. You also might want to start a new paragraph when a new creature speaks. That way, its must easier to read and you won't get lost in the paragraph.

I hope Nitram's a good rat. He did seem like it...KIC!