User blog comment:Martin2/Waves of Darkness/@comment-1298206-20100522182846

Not bad, mate. Well worded for the most part. In Chapter One, you wrote "Bader Mother" instead of "Badger Mother". The second mistake in the first chapter is near the end. “Come back ere’ you blaggard! Give that back!” should be: “Come back ere’, you blaggard! Give that back!” I just completed Chapter 2 and shall read more later.