User blog comment:Skipper Rorc/The Runaway part 2/@comment-1427879-20101209144206

OH my goodness. I'll point out a few typos before I go berserk: Sind the Dibbuns away. Should be Send, tree-season old son should be three. And there was one more I can't find. Now...

Zartho's in a bad mood, that can't be good. Very moody.

Why did he delay it so long?! Why'd he want him to fight him?! That was so suspenseful, and SO GOOD! Good fight etc. good reunion or start of one.

Two very contrasting father-son moments in there, though there were fights and blades on necks in both. Rorc fought the whole thing in a cloak? Good for him. Now Rubah and Rorc need to get back together, but they probably won't until they defeat Zartho. Good Rorc, KIU