User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Cripple/@comment-25720178-20150129221549

It's great!

I like the plot idea, and the characters of course! I really need to pay more attention to detail though...

Because I always have liked so called "vermin" who are actually good, I really like it!

I really like the fact that Connie's a rabbit, instead of a hare or som other creature, and how he doesn't act completely frightened of everything around him as sometimes rabbits seem to be. (At least when they appeared in the series anyway.)

The shrews are well done, having the typical Guosim attitude that makes them so unique.

Kyle is just a great character, with admirable attributes rarely found in his kind. His parents almost remind me of Bluefen and Swart(but better in dynanics) I'm curious to see what happens next!

I have nothing to suggest, carry on please! :)

Great job! (XD better than my writing, I ramble too much.) Keep writing!