User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20140612232957

Oh, the suspense! I noticed a few grammatical errors, but they were primarily missing words. It was good to catch up with the runaways again and the eagle was a good addition. It was a bit harder to tell how big he was compared to them, though. And them being caught again is not good! I think I've noticed how there are far fewer mistakes when the action gets going and I'm not sure if it's because I'm distracted or something else. Either way, good job, Astar! KIU!