User blog comment:Snowstripe the Fierce/Darkhelm - A Tale of Redwall/@comment-26879391-20160707000020

Piffin' Pumpernickle (Try saying that ten times fast!). I remember almost a year ago that you've began writing "The Spearsmaid", you've come so far :). I'm a bit sad that you've disbanded your earlier fanfics, though I do think it's for the better. That way, you can focus more on this fanfic. Oh, did I mention what an epic title "Darkhelm" is? It's reminiscent of an old, medieval darkness castle...which is literally what Darkhelm is in actuality.

Ah, once more a prolouge from the recorder! It's interesting to see how much it varies from the first chapter. It's a nice, slow paced, nothing-out-of-the-ordinary setting, which is so familiar to a redwall fan from the original novels. Also, I see your signature badger character is in her as well!

I must say, I really enjoyed the first part of the first chapter! It reminded me of the beginning of high rhulain, when we meet Rigu Fellis for the first time. Predictign what will happen, I assume that Marrin won't be the main antagonist, but rather his heirs, each fighting for the control and power of Darkhelm. Kind of like Marlfox. Ah, another weasel character! I like the inclusion, considering how little weasel villains Jacques included in the main series. He seems like a Malkariss-esque character, where he's never seen, but not really worshipped as a god (Marrin, I mean). Question; do his staff (servents, heirs, wives) know of his age and his appearance? He seems to rule behind a closed door.

Know that I will be reading, and good luck!