User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/A Slave's Revenge/@comment-1427879-20150821234050/@comment-2142396-20150824090452

Thanks! I'm glad I succeeded in making the story enjoyable. Grimclaw and Moot were my favourites, too, but I decided against developing them further in favour for moving the story forward. It's meant to be a short story, so there will be one more chapter and epilogue. The resolution is near! ;)