User blog comment:Brockkers/The Quest of Martin's Sword/@comment-1632724-20100308012332

Hope you don't mind a bit of criticism. Might help the story a little.

Question: how do you hear a knock on the gate from Cavern Hole where i assume they eat breakfast. Seems like there should be a gatekeeper that comes to tell the abbess.

Also, when you name a character you should capitalize the word "Sister" or "Brother"

Another thing, it's a pond at Redwall not a lake.

In chapter 3 when the hare comes in it should be "except" instead of "accept"

Is there a reason Lord Bladestripe is called Rawnblade at the beginning of chapter 6?

These are the mistakes I found but other than that I only think it could use more dialogue. I like the plot and have changed my mind on the position of a ferret abbess. Keep it up matey.