User talk:Shieldmaiden/Archive1

--LordTBT  Talk! 04:35, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

Amazing...
Im the first wiki user (LordTBT counts as an admin seeing as he made this wiki) Hello Shieldmadien!Wecome to Redwall Wikia ! I am very glad you decided to join us! If you have any questions, please see the FAQ section of the Communtiy home, er portal ... thingy...

if it does not answer your questions thuroughly, or at all, please contact me or another user (Don't worry, were all friendly!)

As for the Essay your writing, Why not move it to the FAn Fiction section? I don't exacally know how to do that, But I know some people who do (Ill have to learn too!) They are )

I think that just about covers it! If you have any other questions, I am always free to answer them. Once again, Welcome! May your travels on here be great and wondrous! Sambrook the otter  Talk! 04:51, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

P.S. Here are a few others you may consult if you have questions- Zaran Rhulain  Talk! 01:22, 25 October 2008 (UTC), Charie Swordmaid   Talk!, Some random redwall fan   Talk!, or Aida Otterock

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Do you want me to Format or get rid of those boxes? It makes it a wee bit hard to read. (Great beginning by the way) Sambrook the otter  Talk! 14:03, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

Oh, by the way..
With your story. Remember to keep in mind that Martin has completely forgotten all about the stuff that happened at Marshank and Noonvale.

You could use that to your advantage though. Like have it be part of your story. To have the party form Noonvale meet Martin and they know him but he doesn't know them or somethin. It would be pretty dramatic.

I dunno, it's just a thought. --C.S.maid  Talk! 02:56, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

HEHEHE
Don't worry- I've not forgotten. H'I'--Shieldmaiden 03:46, 1 December 2008 (UTC)ve an evil plan.

hey, Charie's right, that could be used for the story line and end up pretty Dramatic. Keep Writing, Very good!--Christain 03:47, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

uh whoops
Man im almost ashamed of myself, I should have psoted this long ago! well first, Hello! Im Sambrook and i am going to show you how to make your own signature in a step by step basis! Here is my signature

Sambrook the otter  Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC)


 * copy the formatting and then follow my instructions.


 * 1.)when copied, paste to word (or notepad, any form of typing application works as long as you can paste things to it)


 * 2.)Here's what to edit:
 * A.)Replace my name with yours
 * B.)change the color (if desired)
 * C.)and replace the picture name with your own picture JPG name. (Right now im asuming you know how to copy, paste, and make files JPGs (Er, I think they can be bitmaps, im not exactly sure)
 * 3.) IMPORTANT! Don't change ANY of the technical stuff unless you know what your doing. everything has to be EXACTLY right to work


 * Here's a list of colors I have found work-
 * Red
 * blue
 * crimson
 * saffron
 * green
 * teal
 * orange
 * purple
 * yellow
 * black
 * silver


 * 4.) cut (or copy if you wish to fiddle with it in the future) the signature.
 * 5.) Go to the big MORE box at the top. Scroll down it until you come to My Preferences
 * 6.) scroll down on the page that opens when you click My Preferences.
 * 7.) Paste the signature in the signature box
 * 9.) be sure to check the Raw Signature bow before saving changes.

I hope this helps! If you need any more explanations or if you have any other questions, I am always willing to answer them! Be seeing you around! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk!

Thanks
Thanks, man. I owe you one.

Hello again
Here's a suggestion for your riddle (you dont have to use it). This really isn't a poem. Its a rhyme, or a riddle if you prefere. Riddles rhyme, as you can see. That's an important factor.


 * In Mossflower Wood, which grows thick and deep.
 * Where is the Warrior who'll answer thy call?
 * A loss to that Evil, demands a cost steep.
 * You shall find him at the Abbey, Redwall


 * To seek the Warrior, who shall proceed?
 * Which five travel forth through danger indeed?
 * You, first of the five and first to be shown.
 * Healer of Wounds, thy skills they have known.
 * Next, Otter the swimmer and slinger of stone.
 * Your constant companion when ye laugh or moan.
 * Singer too, though she be filled with fright.
 * The singer of song, and dancer of light.
 * Then the thrower of javelins, my words ye shall heed.
 * Escaped slave from Marshank, and the essence of speed.
 * Lastly, the strong, loyal digger of rows,
 * A great friend to Rose. In his heart, she still grows.
 * Do not tarry, but go on your way.''
 * When one has fallen in the land without rain,''
 * Beware the little folk, flee away,''
 * Trust ye not their sweet refrain.''
 * One more be lost at the River Moss,''
 * To thee, a grave loss. But to Stormfin, a gain''

<font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 06:02, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

Wow
I'm editing now! I would heve been here yesternight, but I couldn't get online, and I had school today.--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 01:50, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

=D
Hahahaha. No dont worry, i'm not Brian in disguise. I'm just a normal fourteen year old gal. I actually will probably be deleting this story. I just dont have any more ideas for it. =(

<font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 04:09, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

Well, all stories have to end sometime.
Yours is a beautiful story. Really, I thinks its ended. About the only thing left to do is maybe have the spirit of Martin see Matthias years later and remember the time when hee bossed him around (After all, betweenRedwall andMattimeo, Martin bosses Matthias around alot.) ;). Shieldmaiden signing out!--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 13:58, 3 December 2008 (UTC) By the way DO NOT DELETE!!!!!!!!!!!!

i disagee I tink theres lots more to this story I like it lot --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 07:50, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Technical help
First of all, I finally got around to reading Martin the Warrior II- Return to Noonvale. I wish I had done so sooner. I was missing out =(. Wow!!  You're one heck of a writer!  nice job!

Secondly, can i make a suggestion? It doesn't have to do with the story itself, it has to do with a technical problem.

I noticed how you had done *** to separate some paragraphs. But, you had done it by using === *** ===

Now that'll work, but there's an easier way to do that. See, if you do it like that....Alright, you know how there is a box near the top of some pages (like your story) that has the contents? You know, how it's divided into sections. Here, it looks a bit like this:

1 Book One - Zounzdican the Evil 1.1 Prologue- Enter the Players 1.2 Chapter One- The Puzzling Puzzle (or, Ripeye's Promotion) 1.2.1 *** 1.2.2 *** 1.3 Chapter Two- Which Five Travel Forth Through Danger at Need? (or, Felldoh's Arrival) 1.3.1 *** 1.3.2 *** 1.4 Chapter Three- The Art of War (or, Keyla and Urran Make a Resolution) 1.4.1 *** 1.5 Chapter Four-

Notice how it's divided into ridiculously small sections like 1.2.1 and all that is next to it is *** ? That means you divided the chapters into their own section. You probably don't want that.

There is an easier way to get *** in the center of the page and bolded. Alright, type out the following when you edit the page:

***

That will end up looking like this once the page is saved.

***

Yes, it's a bit longer to type, but the good thing about it is that it won't show up in the Contents as 1.2.1 ***

Just a suggestion. --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 05:18, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Added
I added your story to my template

<font color="Green">Zaran Rhulain  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 23:44, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

What's a template?
I;m sort of new to this. Random Redwall Fan, thanks for the tip!--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 04:11, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

Timezone
Mountain time. It's 1:16 where I live right now. For me, it's 3:17 pm. --<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 20:18, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

Huh?
Wait a minute, I don't understand your comment. I didn't write, fix, or add anything to your story. I just read it, enjoyed it, complimented it, and left that technical suggestion on your userpage.

Yes, I understand I'm not the author, but I don't want to start editing your story without permission, so I left that suggestion so it would come to your attention and you, as the author, could fix it. Just trying to be helpful and non-intrusive. --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 00:33, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

Yes, and it's worth a thank-you.
The "I'm new to this" was meant for Zaran, the time was for Charie (we were asking each outher what time it was). Random Redwall Fan, any help given is appreciated. Any- comments, editing spelling or grammer, a kind word- any and all help is appreciated. Again, thanks for the help.

re:title
the ede bit was becuse you fished on a egde but you changed that the story is The missing eight seasons and its up now --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 02:00, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

BTW
Just wanted to say kudos, you doing a great job on your story! keep it up! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">My User Talk! 15:35, 8 December 2008 (UTC)

Substory
If you go to The Last Stand of Redwall Abbey, there is a substory I created because I had writer's block for last stand, please read and tell me what you think of it.

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 02:39, 10 December 2008 (UTC)

Signature
Hi, your signature image is too large. Could you reduce it? Thanks. --<font color="Green">LordTBT  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 05:48, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

Your Awesomest Story
Yo, SM- I have to say you are a REALLY good writer. I've read your Latest, and 8O!WOW, Really good. Just Curious, Because This is set after MTW, is that your Faveorite book?<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 20:01, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

They are all my favorite
This story has been blossoming in my heart for at least a year. When I saw the fanfic section, I set to work. And my imagination has yet to fail me. Long live Noonvale. Fur and Freedoooooooooooom!--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 20:12, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

Story
Your story is coming along nicely, but when will Martin meet Brome and the others again? I want to see their reactions xD.

I still laugh at the stupid stoat who jumped out of the bushes and Chugger hit his nose with the stick

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 21:03, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

I don't really know how I think of it. It was just floating around my head when I was typing up The Last Stand, then when it became too much, I just started typing. A lot of this is based on my experiences. I just have a lot of imagination when it comes to, weapons, sci fi stuff like the A.R.T, describing the settings, and dialogue. The P90 for example is pretty light compared to other guns and its recoil and sound is pretty good too, I fired one at a shooting range before. And camping experiences really help a lot when typing up the story.

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 23:43, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

Hmm.. your right, I'm also going for Jeod finding the mystery person. How about Jeod finding the mystery person, then both of them fall through the ground, which got weakened, which goes into the Kotir flood tunnels and comes out at Redwall?

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 23:46, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

Er...
Shieldmaiden- I hope this doesnt offend you, but you seem to either be in a cranky mood or something- First, your yelling at Some Random Redwall Fan, then Zaran- ( or so it seems) Sorry if I am wrong and saw it wrong, but you might want to ease down a tad...<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 20:45, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

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By swear you mean ass? It's kinda hard to replace it with a better term without it sounding weird, as for everything else, its all part of the plot, I did say reader's discretion

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 20:59, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

well, you could said Donkey. ::). Ok, lame Joke, Sorry.<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 21:02, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

600
What on Earth makes you think I 'wanted to delete that? I ran into a few technical problems and some of the content needed to be fixed. After I finish this message, I'm going to re-post all of wahat I had And the first battle=) --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan   <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 22:00, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

PS: By the way, I would hate it if you deleted your story. Don't get any ideas.

You don't need to apologize, it was just a misunderstanding. Nothing more, nothing less. --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 23:47, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm seeing if me sig is working.-- 23:54, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

My Story
My story is called Soren's Quest. But I am having technical difficulties so it might not be as good yet but i'm trying to fix it. Anyway you can read and tell me what you think.-- Soren Rudderdale  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk! 16:25, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

My Story
Sorry chapter four is still in production I want the best story so it takes awhile to think about it but it will have chapter four soon. (P.S. chapter four will be featuring Redwall.)-- Soren Rudderdale  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk! 20:56, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

Ha ha ha.
Well as soon as you said you wanted more I started writing the fourth chapter and now it's done read it by all means!-- Soren Rudderdale  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk! 21:51, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

That would be great!
I would love it if you did that for me. It is kinda hard to read lol!-- Soren Rudderdale  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk! 21:56, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

My Story
That would be great, I'd love that because that is my problem right now. please do that, But don't change the story-- Soren Rudderdale  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk! 22:27, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

Fanfics
I was gonna ask you the same thing! :) It's incredible as it is. One thing though. You might not want to have all the (-) in there.

<font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 22:45, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

Dashes
The little dashes in your story.

<font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 22:45, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

Yeesh!
DUDE!!! You just did one in ur comment on my talk page!!!

<font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 22:29, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

YES YOU ARE.......
no comment the title say all --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 02:56, 16 December 2008 (UTC) I mean ur evil tricking me like that btw ur new bits AWESOME --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 20:19, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

Death
Lol, I knew that... You should have Grammage kill Redeye and here is my suggestion of his slow death (graphic):
 * When Grammage fights Redeye, Redeye swings his balde at Grammage who catches it breaks the blade and throws it at Redeye's leg, crippling him. Then Grammage walks over and kicks Redeye in the ribs, repeatedly while whispering how he was going to make him suffer like he did to his daughter. Then while Redeye is moaning in pain, Grammage walks to the back of Redeye and takes one of his arms and forcibly breaks it, with the bone piercing the skin. As Redeye is screaming in pain, Grammage takes a whip and begins to whip him like a slave while giving him a speech of how its like to be a slave. Afterwards, have Grammage take a daggar and revenge his daughter by goring Redeye through the heart and Redeye expires with a horrified pain look on his face. PHEW

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 04:07, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

gave it away
So it isnt the end? you werent giving up on your story thingy? LLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLL! good joke, Methink!04:48, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

Who wrote the above?
Please speak up.<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 04:51, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

Hmph, You joker. *rolls eyes*

Speak up or type Larger?<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 04:54, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

Humph Humph Wot Wot
the title says it all. ... Humph. Whatever. *grin* Sorry if I offended you? (somehow?) <font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 04:55, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

oh Joys, Sorry! you told Zaran not to tell, sorry it Never happend. *rolls eyes* My Bad. <font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 04:57, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

Would a Im sorry do???? What Did I do???? Sorry....<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 05:01, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhh!
I GET IT!

ok, sorry, SM- I get it. ( I sealed my own fate). I wrote the above above, and I thought I posted my name, But I guess it didnt. and I'm glad your not mad. ::).

Going to bed, You are posting it at the crack of dawn, right? ::)<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 05:04, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

Til then, Night all, wot wot ::)<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 05:13, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

grEAT sECOUnd sTORy
It seem that the secound part of your story is better than your first. (no offence to the first part.) Cant wait to read more.--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 20:43, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

600
You seem to be interested in 600 Strong, so can I have your opinion on something? I have part 5 ready, but I'm not sure I should post it. I mean, if I do post it, nothing else will posted for awhile, or I could post it later alsongside part 6. Post it now or later? --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 00:18, 17 December 2008 (UTC)

re:
hi there the five spit up mean when were brome etc.. scperated in wich chapter? --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 04:54, 19 December 2008 (UTC) ps were you rely droped on your haed at birth?

well....
I was........ no joke thats why I have a stroke...... --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 05:01, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

nah
is ok I dont hate anyone--<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 07:11, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks ^^
Thanks for helping me with my signature, I can't wait to read the rest of 'Return to Noonvale.'

--<font color="Goldenrod ">Clockworthy  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 13:46, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

yeah
I totally understand, Im guessing the same with starbuck and breeze? Alright, I was just a bit curious :D Amazing story, KIU. <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 18:07, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Im auctually...
looking forward to drawing that picture ( I like drawing that kinda stuff, ye know?)(however-im always excited to draw a picture other than beasts just standing.... looking bored. I like drawing motion and action) I just finished reading your story.One word-(since Im not at the point of writing it down,) Dang. Your story is absolutely stunning- Please keep going! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 18:26, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

man Im such a jerk to myself.
I watched the Martin the warrior cartoon ending- Dear lord, It sucks that Rose had to die. Thats the only thing I would have wanted to change, but alas it had to happen. (on another note) I do really like the hard cover artwork for eulalia. <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 18:58, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Ye liddle jerk ;)
That was beautiful, sad... and all those other things! I auctually want to thank you, that was great :D <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 19:11, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

He he he...
Actually I'm eager to see how he draws it my self.--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 19:34, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

xD
That was such a funny scene, 'Oh, dear, what are you going to do now, Mister Stickabee?' 'One more crack like that and I'll introduce you to mister Axhead!'

<font color="Goldenrod ">Clockworthy  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 20:34, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Chapter five
Chapter Five is now written!--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 22:58, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Chapter five
Chapter Five is now written!--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 22:59, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Hmmm...
Sorry but Soren can't kill him till the last (or next to last) chapter.--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 16:13, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

hehe
I guess That was just a little heads up. I will be posting chapter one soon, followed by the others as they come. Ill try to button me lip as best I can ;) <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 03:28, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

OOPs...
Oops.. sorry about that got a little carried away with meself dontcha know! (P.S. What woodlander are you???)--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 03:47, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Otters are the coolest
Very good... Now for a few questions if ya don't mind matey! First: Who is you favorite otter hero? Does you character have a mate? Do you have any Dibbuns of your own? I guess that is all... Oh! I almost forgot! What Holt are you from?--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 03:56, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

For more information about my character,
see my user page. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 04:34, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Forgot one more proof
You forgot to OTTER WITH P90- PROOF YOUR DOORS AND WINDOWS MUAHAHAHA XD <font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 14:41, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

PS seriously, good story, but Grumm now? ehhh.... don't mind too much. Your story is suspenseful, I love it alot

i was disappointed but, Fatgutt dies in the end that's what counts xD

The first part to my new fan fic A Greeneyes Christmas has been posted!--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 23:13, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
Thanks, matey ^^. I'm on the second part now, which is going to be a lot more exciting.

--- -<font color="Goldenrod ">Clockworthy  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 20:11, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Right.
Actually, Treil's a squirrel.

This'll all be a whole lot saner in the end, no worries :P

--- -<font color="Goldenrod ">Clockworthy  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 20:11, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Favorite 1 and 2
I like Maudie Better. But the picture of her running with Yik isn't on site (Or is it?), when my scanner works I'll scan it and upload it.

but this is just a cool picture of Deyna :D

--- -<font color="Goldenrod ">Clockworthy  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 20:14, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Holidays
<font color="#green">M <font color="#red">e <font color="#green">r <font color="#red">r <font color="#green">y <font color="#green">C <font color="#red">h <font color="#green">r <font color="#red">i <font color="#green">s <font color="#green">t <font color="#red">m <font color="#green">a <font color="#green">s <font color="#red">!

--<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 20:41, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

It's nothing bad, just a secret kept from the other woodlanders. You will have to wait to find out more. : ) --<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 21:00, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

hey
Do you mind formatting my story? I have a new version of it, and im hopeless when it comes to formatting :( Much appreciated if you can :D <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 21:41, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks Tons my friend ;D <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 21:46, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Yes! Please do! I am terrible at it, so I really do need help (P.s. Thanks again!) <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 22:31, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

hi!
Hi! Thanks for helping me change the accents of Tam and Doogy. I'm terrible at accents. Can you suggest, maybe 5 good vermin names that haven't been used yet? 'cause i cant think of any. Thanks agian ~ladyamber88

Maybe there could be a celebration of some sort.--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 00:37, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

So...
if you're gonna use those names in the future, can i use some similar names to those? --Ladyamber88 00:48, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Ideas
how about going back to Redwall where Martin is trying to make out even more of his memories and decides to go on a quest to find Brome's group and co.?. sry I can't do better mate, its rlly hard to add ideas to a story as good as this

<font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 00:54, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Maybe the birth or finding of a secret child. --<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 00:54, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

heh heh heh!
RIght then, IM kinda making this on the fly, but Who knows.. ''... from the corners of her clouding eyes, she saw a darkness, A drakness that she could feel. It emanated heat that seemed to chill he soul. She could hear a dull murmer as tough some one was shouting underwater. She could feel the icy claws of death lifting her away...'' So now you know whats happening to Britta- that's all your getting! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 01:44, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

You use btw alot, what does that stand for, I know it it knida stupid I don't know.--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 01:46, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

ah, thats what I like
more than one assignment! If I get bored with one I will go to the other, then back again. Oh, lol about the printer, We can't figure it out. It just doesn't copy that much detail, how ever I think I may start coloring my pictures- I think they look better that way (If done right) And I will never hear of a drawing to be skipped! Oh, I absolutely love your story, keep going! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 01:48, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

thanks
alright, thanks! --Ladyamber88 01:49, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Ah, okay.
Okay, I got it. I was thinking in terms of how the book was published and now how it was originally made. Thanks!

And the cool thing is, I was reading on the HP wiki, and it says

You have an owl on the Redwall Wiki.

Neat! --- -<font color="Goldenrod ">Clockworthy  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 02:00, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

maybe
Ill do multiple pictures in one.... hmm that will be something new... <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 02:23, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Cont.
HP is Harry Potter. Or Hewlett Packard, but I was on the Harry Potter wiki. --- -<font color="Goldenrod ">Clockworthy  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 02:28, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Lol, I wish I could draw too... after seeing the art on Deviantart... im very low in comparison. All It takes is being able to put your imagination on paper. But, thank you! I'm glad God has given me such a gift, and I am flattered and inspired by your complement:) <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 02:42, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

:D
Thank you very much. That means a lot to me. I do have to say, your writing is astronomically better, and I could only wish to compare. I just found out you have to follow one rule of thumb, and I quote, "You have to learn on thing and one thing only, and that is how to paint pictures with words..."Brian Jaques that's what made me do the entire rewrite.

I am blessed to have a friend such as you, and I believe God will use you in ways unknown to yourself. May your life be filled with his light, the wind always be at your back, and may and hardship in your life be struck down. <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 03:03, 23 December 2008 (UTC) (P.s. If you write a book I can illustrate... that is If you want me to.)

I am friend to those who call me by it. I will grant you, you are far from a nobody on here. You are a friend to everybody and you are very affable- I am proud to call you friend <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 03:15, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Im glad to have been of assistance :D I am of a like mind; Anything you reqire qill be done to the best of my ability! --<font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 03:28, 23 December 2008 (UTC) (P.s. no matter how much of a nobody you thing you are, remember this: For I know the plans I have for you," declares the LORD, "plans to prosper you and not to harm you, plans to give you hope and a future. jer. 29:11)

(sniff)
Yes!!! I am a very happy otter! Now I know you understand me! What church do you go to?? I go to Calvary Bible Church. (Sniff) I am soooo happy!--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 03:47, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

I will
I will pray for him as I pray for all like him. Now my church is quite small it is a God fearing Bible believing church. The Pastor is named Danial Kirk, he is a true Christian stedfast in the faith through any circumstance.--70.247.125.100 04:02, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

atheist forever xD, though buddha works too occasionally <font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 04:20, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

PS I'm a friend too =D

NEW SECTION
New section added to A Greeneyes Christmas!--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 17:15, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Sorry, i'm not bugging you am i?
Sorry, if i'm bugging you, than tell me. i need an opinion from you. in my fan fic (Tam's Revenge) if you have read the stuff that i added, how many vermin do you think 50 good creatures can kill by ambush? --Ladyamber88 01:08, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Well, I think at least 100, maybe 150. I just want to say I love squirrels, and exspeacly love lady amber.--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 01:31, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks Shieldmaiden :D Auctually im sketching some Ideas for your picture right now... Do you want keyla sharpening his dagger? <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 02:55, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

I was wondering, I have the next part to A Greeneyes Christmas done, and I want it and the next section after that both posted before midnight tommrow, should I post the one done tonight or early tommrow?--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 03:01, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

ha har bless your soul, Of course I did! I had to get on youtube and find a part in the old tv show and sketch it based on that :D <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 03:58, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

UPDATE!
New section added in A Greeneyes Christmas!--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 04:38, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Doomedwyte
It might have been disrespectful, but it hurt my foot.

Justice is served xD

--- -<font color="Goldenrod ">Clockworthy  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:01, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Umm..ok
but how do i make the pixel number larger? --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 03:33, 25 December 2008 (UTC)

Hmm, If I had to guess
You are FIVE years old lol, idk, about 15?

?????
Shieldmaiden I have a question. Are we friends?--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 15:22, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

ur story
Keep writing~ your a great writer~ *wink* <font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 15:35, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

whats KIU?
the above '_'<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 15:58, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks,well, then KIU to you.
KIU your story up XD. I think I know who gammages son is (Its Pretty easy when you think about it) But in case you want to kill me again, I wont ask if im right. (I'll just gloat over it later. xD)<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 16:12, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

alright, Im ready, Can you give me a description of Zoucidan(Or what ever his name is) and any special details? <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 17:13, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

Serious
Ask anyone here at Redwall Wikia if your story is good and they will all say yes.

If you a more critical review, I can repost your story on Fanfiction.net and see if anyone is more critical of it. Just need your permission

<font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 17:56, 26 December 2008 (UTC) Okey dokey I'll let you know as soon as possible

ok
Ok- will do, SM later. (the edit thingy)

PS I think fan fic .net is a good idea. xD. I'm on there, AnotherAj :)<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 19:06, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
Thank you Shieldmaiden!--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 22:00, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

:)
What's KIU? --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 01:03, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

ok :)
Oh. thanks. and thanks for editing the accents. it'd sound weird without the correct accents.--<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 01:08, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

Soon
Soon very soon my story is quite long and I have been making some changes to it too so it might be awhile.--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 14:27, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

The Names
The new names of the three books in Soren's Quest are: The Claws of Doom, The Marked One, and The Destiny of One.--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 14:30, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

I don't know.
Your story is better than mine, by far mate!--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk! 16:06, 15 November 2008 (UTC) 16:44, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

oh
i thought you were a mouse--<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 17:45, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

No not at all
Don't worry your not bothering me, I actually like it when people leave messages for me, as for the template, feel free to add w/e you want on it, it says so on the bottom.

Um for MTW RTN how big is chapter 20?

<font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 19:04, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

your picture... er sketch of Zerawhatsername
Is on my user page in the pictures section. Its a sketch that I could do some improvement on if its not to your satisfaction, but thats up to you. anyways, just wanted you to know! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 21:07, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

oh
oh, sorry, i didn't read your user page. and you had matthias on your sig so i thought you were a mouse. :)--<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 21:11, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

Yeah,
I'm a squirrel. When are you adding more to MTW2-RTN Part 2? <font color="Turquoise">Pinedance Coneslinger <font color="Navy" Size="2">Talk!--Pinedance Coneslinger 00:38, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

huh?
i thought lawd was a male hare.--<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 04:36, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

no,
you said it was a female otter

--<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 04:43, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

oh!
i thought you meant martin finds lawd--<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 04:53, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

yeah
your story is so exiting! please add more!--<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 04:59, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

Alright, heres something you don't know: I took zariwhatsername and colored her on the come! tell me if you like it or not (It will be on my user page) <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 17:33, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

oh
sorry. i hope i'm not bothering you. --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 20:10, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

Poem
Thanks for the recomendation with my poem. :)

<font color="Crimson">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 21:51, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

Awesome...
I just finished reading part three a few minutes ago.

<font color="Crimson">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 22:07, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

hey, sorry, i've been treating your pic kinda like a guine pig. I got a new version <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 23:44, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

sorry for bothering you so much
I think i'm bugging you too much. I'm asking you cause you're the first one that "talked" to me on this website, an' i don't know anyone else. have you read the recent additions to my fan fiction? if you have, then how many vermin do you think there are left in Zelsh's horde? there were about 1000. --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 01:58, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

i'll do that!
I'll just somehow get Zelsh's vermin horde to increase. thanks! :) But am i bugging you? --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 02:10, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

Yep
Yea, why? You want the readers to read Part One first then clink on the internal link in the story that leads to part two?

And I'm working on it xP <font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 02:41, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

okey dokey

ok, but,
what's a brownrats? i've only read up to Rakkety Tam, so if it's in any book past that, i don't know what it is. --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 02:49, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

oh...i'm really stupid
i thought the blue thing is there automaticly. sorry. maybe i'll use that. --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 03:07, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

thanks
And thanks for calling me a friend. --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 03:11, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

thanks
--<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 03:15, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

Im a bit old for my time in school. Im 14 and in eighth. Thank you :D <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 03:17, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

yeah, i know
it's great so far. love it! --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 03:19, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, I have one other girl in my class who is a fan of Redwall (Auctually She made Airador up)I auctually thing think the majority of us are 12-15 years. I don't mean to be nosy, but when do you turn 14? <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 03:23, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

nope!
it's all perfect! --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk! 03:23, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

har har... Thats all I really wanted to know. Can you give me a description of your fictitious character? <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 03:27, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

shieldmaiden <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 03:49, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

2 things
1- I took your advice and removed most of the swearing.

2- I responded to your comment on 600 Strong (II). Please read it, it'll clear things up.

--<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 04:37, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

Re: Freaky
And you know what the scary part is? Everything I said is 100% true. For the life of me, I can't remember the technical term for that! Yeah, War movies are enough for me. Thanks again for the advice, and thank you for the compliment.

BTW, you have the longest story so far. Can't you wait up for the rest of us?! (just kidding, you have an incredible story coming along too.)

--<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 04:45, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

Your stuffy signature explanations!
I had a look on Pinedance Coneslinger's talk and what do you know, it was you who tried to explain how to do the signatures! What happened? P.S. Do you want to have a look at my new poems? --<font color="Teal ">Mauran Axestripe  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk to me!, 07:25, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm not saying anything yet
Not gonna say anything much, but Adena will live ;D

<font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain    <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 15:33, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

ah, thank you much. I was just wondering ;) <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 17:17, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

My story
I'm going to start a fan fic. Its name will be A Coneslinger's Revenge. <font color="Turquoise">Pinedance Coneslinger <font color="navy" size="2">Talk!--Pinedance Coneslinger 19:01, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

New Section!!!!
New section in A Greeneyes Christmas!

I added more to Shadow of a Warrior if you wanna check it out

Yore trying me here
You're just trying to antagonize me with something bad aren't you? I don't have to read the story to figure out it something unpleasant, so I'm gonna send in an otter thermo-nuke tank xD.

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 20:48, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

Still
chapter five but working on six. Hang in there!--<font color="Teal">Soren Rudderdale (The Warrior)  <font color="silver" size="2">Talk Matey! 16:06, 15 November 2008 02:17, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

=D
You seem hyper tonight. Too much pop or what? xD Jk. Love how your stories commin along btw.

<font color="Crimson">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 02:38, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

...
Um...that would be soda. :)

<font color="Crimson">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 02:55, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

Cool it girl, :)
Calm down. SRRF meant that you are really quite a happy kid. :D Don't worry, it's more of a complement. =D You should see when MY siblings get together, the house gets really busy with 15 kids on a sugar high. Hahaha

<font color="Crimson">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 03:01, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

Tip
If you put to quotation marks (dont press shift) around Kay's thoughts it would look better. =D Stories awesome, KIC.

<font color="Crimson">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 04:13, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

Martin the Warrior II
That's ironic, Violet saying "you are not warriors, you've never been slaves" to Martin. =D

<font color="Crimson">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 04:22, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

Oh no, did I offend you?!
SORRY! That was not supposed to be an insult. Charie seemed surprised at how excited you were about, well....I didn't read the conversation. None of my business.

I just noticed that she was online in the recent changes box, so I clicked it, read her comment, and replied to it. She hadn't been on in awhile, so I just wanted to know what was up. That was NOT supposed to be offensive or unfriendly teasing, and I'm sorry if it was! You just always seem very cheery and comment on several things. There is NOTHING wrong with that, but some people may call that hyper.

Again, I'm VERY sorry! It was a stupid and unfriendly thing to say, and I sincerely meant no offense towards you! Now I don't feel really great about myself.

SORRY! --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 04:25, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

I'll tell you something you don't know!
I just added a bit more to Elmstripe's Story. How's that? lol <font color="Teal ">Mauran Axestripe  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk to me!, 04:34, 30 December 2008 (UTC)