Thread:Selound/@comment-3148757-20111019214846/@comment-1719793-20111019220052

hmm, here's some tips I have learned from others:

first off, when making a fan fic, try to not copy off of any one elses story too much. Second, make your story make sense, and not too choppy; make the chapters three pages and up should be okay. With characters, try to not make them, well...sueish; this can be hard to do if you have an OC who's in love with a canon character, it's best to add a few flaws to prevent them for being this way. Mix up your characters' personality and design.

other than those tips, I think your stories are very nice ^.^