User blog comment:Rorzan the Black/Zephyr's journey/@comment-1738724-20100313091626

Nice start matey! Though ye need to punctuate and capitalize a little. This is how it should be, though yer don't need to change it completely. It should be something like this:

Long ago, far North, there was a colony of otters. Among them there was a young otter different from the rest.He had piercing emerald green eyes. That young otter was Zephyr Westwind. He was sleeping in his tent with his family, when he dreamed of a mouse with a magnificent sword. He spoke these exact words.

"Travel South until you reach the Abbey, find the one with the never ending appetite, stop the evil and save the Abbey."

Otherwise its a great start! Keep writing!