User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/A little night music/@comment-12865559-20130723020743

I saw that you like to write, so I thought I'd look at your stories for myself!

First off, this was so much fun to read! I haven't been able to stop reading it! However, I noticed a few little problems, so I'll get those out of the way before I say what I did like. Well, I thought cows and chickens were a bit strange for Redwall and Vilaya having Bloodwrath, but I guess vermin can have it, too!

I know it's only a little thing, but I like how you named your chapters. A small touch, but I liked it. Also, I really think having a young Vilaya as the main character was a brilliant idea! Not only is she a good character for the job, but I also got to learn about her past! I also loved Zwilt in this! He's one of my favorite villains! The descriptions in this are really good, too! There's just so much I like about it, I could keep going on about how great everything was, but I'd be here all day! ;)

Overall, this story is amazing and makes me forget about whatever tiny problems I had with it!