User blog comment:Ronnie Macleaf/The Black Robes/@comment-1628401-20101123195057

I liked the little poem in the prologue. Here's a tip, instead of just saying "long spears", research to see if there is a weapon that is essentially a long spear. A good example of this is a pike, which is a long spear. It seems good so far, with the exception of a few grammar errors and a slight lack of description.