User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/The Veil is Torn/@comment-2142396-20151021211106/@comment-7662967-20151022200856

And I am behind on comments, sorry ... whew. But here I am :) Wow, I rank that high? *hugs* I'm glad you like it, even if I mess up sometimes ... :P

Ack, alas, me too. Which can explain for how very many I have .. ;3 Also because after I had so many ships in FWC, it stands to reason they all had children ... Awww IKR? I liked writing about Whegg again, even for a little, though the two should be very useful later on as well .. ;) Yes, Togget, I like him :) I like writing mole speech, but cause I don't have a lot of developed moles I don't often have the chance. So he's fun ^^

Well, I agree he's being really irritating .. at least was being that way. And mostly that's because his character type .. which I had little choice on from my descriptions of his childhood .. lends itself to looking perfect. And I don't want that ... :/ So I have to give him some cons. However, you didn't really get a chance to meet him the way he was before the whole mess started .. and pretty soon he'll start turning back into his old self. Especially because he .. pretty much believes all of Mossflower is against him. When he finds out a lot aren't .. and finds out why, I think you'll start to like him more :)

Yea, with Bryony, you saw sort of what I did, echoing cannon. Bryony did follow him, he did refuse her, but then of course he felt guilty, because it can be sort of easy for him to feel guilty ..

Yes, he did (well, he is the Sixclaw prince. Some of the horde beasts just .. don't know where to go, and want a leader, so they fall upon Sixclaw's son) lol, yes he did, And wait til Wildag calls him that in front of Timbal and Sayna ....... XP Exactly >:D He still needs to watch his back.


 * Hmmm* Well, I don't feel like totally spoiling myself at this moment ... so .. I'll say we'll see .. ;)

Haha yep. I like Ivan, but because of his personality, it's easy for him to 'just be there'. And Byron is officially Aubretia's book rack now, isn't he. He's a little bit shyer than her, and besides .. he sort of likes her too :P

IKR? My whole intention was to raise sympathy, I guess it worked ^^ He is such a tortured character .. I really torture him a ton, don't I? At least I let him have the happier end, in the very end, but he has to go through way more so maybe it's 50/50 ... Nah, the only thing he could be blamed for is lack of judgment, but I think that gets ruled out by sympathy ...


 * snicker* no, he certainly wouldn't. "Yes Swipe, subtle is best." *two hours later* "Say Princess, you haven't actually kissed me yet." XP He's so .. the absolute opposite of subtle. Esther would be wise not to take anymore advise from him .. :P


 * Hahaha* *chokes* Yes, Aubretia is now Veil's secret admirer. And she's also confused .. ;P Yea, he did, and he needed to ... but he will do that more and more now, we've about hit the turning point for all this .. :)