User blog comment:Silas switch/Queen of Ice/@comment-1630956-20100411000811

Here, order it like this:

==Book 1: A Journey Begins==

===Chapter 1===

words here....

===Chaper 2===

words here....

and so on. It'll read better. Other than the fact that i think the rat would have more wounds and you shouldn't capatalize spring at the end it's a good update. KIC!