User blog comment:Heather the dragon rider/Outlaws of Mossflower/@comment-26879391-20151027014349

Finally I've been able to comment!

I like the premise! Most characters in the Redwall universe are very close to the abbey, defending it with their life. However, Spike and Cherry take a diffrent approach. I like how you made that diffrence! It's a breathe of fresh air, in my mind.

I'd like to see a bit of Sabre's horde. So far, they seem like a typical horde. Although that's up to change :)

The Story's really enjoyable, due to it's humor! Most redwall stories had occasional humor strewn in. I'd be nice, seeing some character develpment in Spike and Cherry, seeing how they mature.

Overall, I will be reading this! Keep me updated!