User talk:Some random redwall fan

--LordTBT  Talk! 06:07, 27 July 2008 (UTC)

re Q
hi you should add your name on talk pages and on your Fan Fiction only if you want to and on your user page oh and you sign your name using four of theses with  this   oh and that not a faq you should of posted that on  LordTBTS  page have fun at redwall wikia. --Dannflow  Talk! 07:41, 27 July 2008 (UTC)

Re: Vandal
I banned the vandal and reverted his edits earlier this morning. Being an admin I have a special revert button. =) --LordTBT  Talk! 21:51, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

Chains
Your story is listed...the list is more chronological than alphabetical so it's near the bottom. Try Control+F5 to refresh the cache. -- LordTBT  Talk! 04:40, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

Signature
Hey, would someone mind telling me how to add a picture to your signature? Some random redwall fan 04:34, 17 September 2008 (UTC)

Advice
I think that your idea is very good. One tip. Keep things simple. Readers will have a hard time reading the story if things jump around. Try to keep it smooth and flowing. Also, using words like: great, good, ect.. They dull the story. My English teacher calls them Death Words. Add emotion, colorful word and very very detailed descriptions. Trust me.

p.s. this is Charie Swordmaid, I am working on my signature and cant put it down currantly. :)

Charie Swordmaid

re: can I ask
Sorry its been a while been busy. try put four of these in a row ~ no space and click show preview if that dose not work copy this (your sig) go in to edit and copy when your in it not before:

Some random redwall fan  Talk! 21:36, 18 September 2008 (UTC)

then go into my preferences in more paste it in the sig box before you save check the raw sig button then to test go back into your talk page or any other page and type 4 of ~ again hope that helps Dannflow   Talk! 07:39, 21 September 2008 (UTC) if you need more help don't hesitate to ask :)

Thank you!
Thank you so much for the editing! that does make it easier to read. and again, thank you! and by the way, I love your story so far! Your doing great! Sambrook the otter 23:08, 21 September 2008 (UTC)

Setting things Straight
Dude. Charie Swordmaid and Swordmaiden are the same thing. I'm still working on my signature.

Warriormaid Talk! 23:11, 21 September 2008 (UTC)

Its Fixed
Ok. Ive fixed my signature. Sorry bout the mixup. Charie Swordmaid, Swordmaiden, and Warriormaid are the same thing.

Charie Swordmaid Talk! 23:14, 21 September 2008 (UTC)

May I Ask For Your Help?
I can't exactly get the formatting right. I just added a new part,may you please help again? Thank you Sambrook the otter 00:50, 22 September 2008 (UTC)

ah
Thank you again. I also have some other changes I need to make. Thanks for pointing that out. It will be fixed ASAP. Sambrook the otter 01:06, 22 September 2008 (UTC)

lets see
Thanks again, I love the signature now! (i might change the color though)

<font color="Black ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Black" size="2">Talk! 03:05, 22 September 2008 (UTC)

RE:RE:lets see
auctally I found it quite easy. i just transfered what you put up onto word and changed the words around. heres the new version with blue text, what do you think?

<font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 03:15, 22 September 2008 (UTC)

Pre-Ordering
Do you have an account on Amazon.com? If so, you con pre-order the hard cover off there for about 35% (or some where around there) off! (the book on tape is still 40 bucks) <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 00:02, 23 September 2008 (UTC)

I must be becoming quite the pest
hey,sorry to bother you again, but I just deleated the old copy of my story and replaced it with a new one (don't worry, I just added more detail and changed some charictar names) May you help me with the formatting one last time? Thanks again, <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 04:37, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

Ah, Thanks!
Thanks! I defiantly owe you one. I changes the main bad guy's character. I'm wondering if i'm even allowed to have the part I added near the end... (you might see what I mean)

Q and A
Ummmm. I have a question. When will there be new editions to Red Tide and Chains? --<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 02:05, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

The Last Stand story
Thanks, but it probably wont be finished for a while, Im gonna try to make it as long as 20 chapters

Ill be sure..
to give her some credit to ;) Please tell your friend to put his story up! I can't wait to read it! thanks again, <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 14:17, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

Okeydokey
Ok. :) Well. We're sure going to miss it. I write for the fun of it, personally.

--<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 00:07, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
Dude, thanks for adding the internal links to my text(s), you need to teach me how to do that...though I have a feeling it's painfully obvious and all I need to do is go to the manual...But it's much more fun to pester you. Ha! Black hawk 02:41, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

I know
Yea it is true that its hard to write the non-action parts without sounding too cheesy and that its a bit hard to not try to rush the battle scenes. As to the horde of innocents, im still deciding whether to throw in a twist or just let them be, after all it is mothers, babes, and elderly. So it might not viewed too good if something bad happens to them

As for the abbey, im gonna give you a hint that it wont be completely taken over, but nonetheless, its gonna be one of the big battle scenes

<font color="Green">Zaran Rhulain  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 02:58, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

Welcoming
Everyone is free to welcome new users, however if you are the first, could you please use the template in addition to any message you want to include? Thanks. --<font color="Green">LordTBT  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 03:11, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

^_^
Firstly, thank you! I (unlike many) enjoy constructive criticism. I helps point out the errors in what I write. I tried not to over do it on the fight with the three rats, and yes, I am planning to incorporate the skills Tirbit is just discovering, (I.E. Ferocious blood wrath, fishing skills, jumping extremely high, fighting off massive amounts of foes with out weaponry (oops,)and basically being taggerung on blood wrath.) as for the poems, really? Sweet, Im so glad you liked them! (and should I remove the authors note?)

now its my turn, I love what you've done with Red Tide II, seriously, I'm at a loss for thoughts and words! The language doesn't bother me. If your trying to make me hate the middle aged otter, its working. I was half tempter to write... Tirbit came out of no where and slew him so he would shut up... but im not going to do that ha ha.

GReat work bro, please keep it up!

<font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 16:02, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

oh, do you have any suggestions how I can get around Tirbit ripping the rat in half? maybe I should just make him like decapitate him, what suggestions do you have? maybe he should just get an arm take off, be left to die, found by the other gang that was beaten by Driko, Rivirs and Alba. Thanks again!

not done
No I'm not quite finished with A Warrior Goes On.... <font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 19:52, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

*sigh*
I have to admit, I never liked writing that part. It sounded waaaaaaaay to cheesy for even me. I gotta say, ripping some one in half would be quite impossible, seeing as these the ribcage and skull. Ill probably change the "Ripping In Half" to a "Twisting The Head Around Twice" thanks for listening, <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 13:08, 14 October 2008 (UTC)

hey
just read your two new storys great stuff not as good as bj but not bad wot wot keep writing. <font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 07:50, 15 October 2008 (UTC). oh and if you have ever read the books by john flanagan click here rangers apprentice wiki

Fixed
alright, I fixed the ripping in half (Cause that just sounded dumb to myself.) just thought I'd let you know. <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 13:29, 15 October 2008 (UTC)

Answers
Firstly, yes I will add more to Sambrook's Story, But I just wrote chapter 18, and I have been a bit busy (I went on a retreat up into the mountains all weekend)But I promise there will be more. Also note, I already had my ending in mind, and I am NOT taking it fromDoomwyte. Actually I already had an Idea for my weapon, before Doomwytecame out, But I know it sounds like Zaran's wepon (the book Zaran). (Ill see if I can help with the names in a sec) My weapon: To be named Heluste. A double bladed where the blade and the handle are both the length of a sword blade. But heres where mine differs.the blades can collapse into the handel. the middle can come apart into two blades. Do you see the resemblance? ok LEt me see if I can come up some names. hmm... Ill come back with those. Yes, I loved Doomwyte. and I am sad you are taking chains away, and I hope you will some day expand it. If you can tell im kind of in a rush towards the end, so ill get back to you. Ill talk to you later, <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 13:21, 21 October 2008 (UTC)

Cont'd
Ok, im back. Some names:
 * Ashton
 * Darla
 * Theo
 * Sashya

hmm... ill have to get back to you on that (If you want me too).

The book Doomwyte: Amazing.
 * Simply amazing.

It was short and I read it in a few hours. But those were the best few hours of reading in my life.

My opinion:
 * It is sad to see chains go, but right now, Im REALLY hooked on Red Tide. Its great and I don't want to stop reading.

My Story:
 * YEah, Ive been kinda busy of late, so I haven't had time to write it. but as a bit of a spoiler, Tirbit and Sella meet Alba, Tallborath, and Rivris in chapter 18. Er... not formally... yet. Oh, Im glad you like it ;)


 * Thats it for now. Contact me if theres anything else you want to know, or if you just want to talk.

TTFN (Ta Ta for now!) <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 22:45, 21 October 2008 (UTC)

Red Tide Riddle
What's your poem about? <font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 23:21, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Poem
Okey Dokey I'll start fiddling around. Thats how I write most of my poems. :D cheesey huh?

<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 23:30, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

OK
I knew what you meant. I wouldnt like someone to write mine either. I'll just fiddle around to get some ideas. Ok?

<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 23:35, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Ask And You Shall Recieve
I doubt you'd want to use this, especially because it's ultra-cheesy. I came up with what would probably make up half a poem.

I remember the meadows, though the lash makes me forget,

I remember sweet cream, but only gruel is in my stomach,

I remember Mom and Dad, but I know they’re gone.

I feel the whip’s kisses on my back, and the salt water on top of that,

I feel these splinters in every paw, and every other place besides,

I feel death is calling out to me, but I must hang on to write.

Because I also remember when the chains were gone.

That's all I got. I realize you said you didn't want someone else to write it, but when I read that I was already halfway through, so I mentally said 'screw it, I wanna finish this cheesiness!' Black hawk 23:49, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Right
Might want to have explained that. Also, somebody is a leetle excited to read the next update, especially since you've already read the next part. Ha! Black hawk 00:00, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

There, are ya happy? That took all over ten minutes to sort out. Death Knight: Part Two is in existence. I split because that is approximately where Red Tide did, ~50 kb. Black hawk 00:17, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

Funny you should ask that...
about Redtide (II)

It sounds good Either way (Though, personally SHUT THE HELL UP sounds a little more satisfying.) But if it was kept the younger element (If any) would not be allowed to read you story =(

(Which sucks for them, cause its a great story!)

now about the poem. I was just reading your talk page before you said that. I have been feeling very poetic of late (If you can tell by the one poem I have, not many of them are happy,) But, I just got done with one called "Tirbit's Blood Wrath"

I would love to help you! some ideas were actually churning when you said "Free as the birds" I will prod around with some ideas, but as you request, I will not write it.

<font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 00:14, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

P.s. I have up to chapter 17 and almost all of chapter 18 written. I have to say my self, there not good... so far. One of my spoilers will be happening, the travelers meet, and I am adding more to the dream poem. I have to say I haven't been able to write much because of two things: School (Homework) and basic procrastination. I will be writing much more be reassured, I promise not to leave every one hanging for much longer!

Heeeelp!
Will somebody please help me? I'm very new here (well, a new member, I go here like every day), and I can't figure out how to do anything. None of the mnuals or help pages give me useful information. Fer one thing, how do you make a flipiin' user page thingymajig!?--Redwall Obsesser 01:24, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

I read you comment thing...
About the poem, if the mouse was depressed or something like that and probably lost all spirit while aboard the ship maybe it should be something about death and the like... just a suggestion i know you didnt mean me when you left those comments but oh well xD--Aida Otterock 02:53, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

As you wanted ;)
chapters 17 and 18 are now up, And i think you know what im going to ask. May you? I still don't get how to do the formatting =(

hi just wondring do you have a support gruop of pllp
I see you got rid of chains :I liked that ( and have you got a club of Support pllp? cos on all the new users talk pages there is a list of help talk pages what else will pllp tink of? he he kiding no offence ) you have become a great editer............................................................................. have lots of fun --<font color="Blue">Dannflow   <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 23:16, 1 November 2008 (UTC) ps could I join??????????????????????. dannflow

thanks
and happy editing <font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 23:34, 1 November 2008 (UTC)

Um...
Dude when are you going to add more to Red Tide? Your like holding us all in suspense!--<font color="Orange">Aida Otterock  <font color="Orange" size="2">Talk! 02:05, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

The Manuals
What do you mean when you say "the manuals don't seem to help"? The Manual is written in easy to understand language, and is quite clear. Is there something hard to comprehend in the Manual? Also, do not tell people to ignore the "show changes" button, in fact quite a few people could be using it more often the way the Recent Changes page looks. --<font color="Green">LordTBT  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 03:29, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

The manuals are sort of confusing. --Aranta(drunkambrose) 03:37, 2 November 2008 (UTC)Aranta(drunkambrose)

Given that this is the first time in 3 years that anyone has said the manuals are confusing, you must understand that it's a little difficult for me to believe it's entirely the fault of the manual. The manual does not use any language that is more complex than the works of Mr. Jacques. In fact, given the recent talk of the manual being "confusing", I had some people entirely independent of this wiki and Redwall come in and read the manual, and they absolutely had no problems understanding it. So if people are still having problems, I need to know precisely what is wrong in infinitesimal detail, if anyone wants it to be less "confusing". --<font color="Green">LordTBT  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 07:53, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

Tags
On Aranta(drunkambrose)'s page you said you couldn't figure the tags out. You did fine, dude. Everything was there, it was just that you mixed something up. I don't know all of what you were doing, but I found the mistake. It was just that you opened a center tag and a nowiki tag, in that order. Except then, you closed them in that order. So you typed and then closed them as  instead of closing the nowiki tag first. Basically, the tags stayed open. The cool part was that together, we confused like five people by talking about tags. :D -<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 05:36, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

Oh yeah...
Sorry forgot about the poem and thanks about the signature thing--<font color="Orange">Aida Otterock  <font color="Orange" size="2">Talk! 14:03, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks =)
I was just wondering. Whenever I read it It just seems like theres not enough detail and its kinda rushed through, but thats my opinion ;) Thanks! <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 14:51, 3 November 2008 (UTC)

poem
HOLY CRAP!!! That poem is incredible!!! How'd you do it man?!?

<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 22:07, 4 November 2008 (UTC)

poem
Dude, I LOVE it! Its not too dark. It's reality.

Um. Dude. I got a question. Can you read Lenora Longtail and tell me what you think with the latest part. Zarah Rhulain helped me with it.

I it to gorey?

<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 22:21, 4 November 2008 (UTC)

L.L. (Lenora Longtail) =D
Ok. Good. =D I was kinda worried.

You have had a fighting scene though! Dont worry. Your storie's got us all hooked. XD

<font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 22:31, 4 November 2008 (UTC)

Gah...balgh...ninng... I am at a total loss for a word of any sort.

Absoblominloutly taflipin'rific! (to use the hares mode of speech

I LOVE IT

dumbfounded, <font color="Blue ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 23:45, 4 November 2008 (UTC)

Awesome...
I myself am a dark poet, a very dark poet and so i completely love your poem its awesome you did great--<font color="Orange">Aida Otterock  <font color="Orange" size="2">Talk! 00:28, 5 November 2008 (UTC)

Template
I created the custom template for welcoming new users, its on my page, feel free to use it if you please

<font color="Green">Zaran Rhulain  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 02:00, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks a bunch!
Thanks for getting rid of those boxes, I was getting quite irked by them(Sorry if the reply is a bit late). Well, I admit, I also did find that said paragraph confusing...anyways, hi again and also thanks for the comment!

Frentiza the ferret 12:22, 11 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks alot
That really helped me, man!--Deyna the Mighty 04:26, 16 November 2008 (UTC)

;)
alright, it was just something I typed it up quickly ;) Sambrook the otter   <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 00:39, 19 November 2008 (UTC)

Hi...
Can I have your opinion on something? With Lenora Longtail, I'm needing a little help. What I have right now is that Sapwood dies, Lenora stays at Redwall for a bit. Then she's gonna head out. But, i've dug myself into a little hole here and have no idea how to do this. Do you have any suggestions? Thanx.

<font color="Orange">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Yellow" size="2">Talk! 22:00, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

What she should do when she leaves Redwall. Got any idea's? <font color="Orange">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Yellow" size="2">Talk! 22:51, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
Those idea's really helped! I'm definatly going to have the Long Patrol in my story. There was going to be another character introduced, Zepher Windblade. Lenora and him are almost exactly alike. So, you can probably guess everythings else. But, anyways. I knew she was going back to Southsward eventually, thank you for the ideas about why she should be there. =D

<font color="Orange">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Yellow" size="2">Talk! 23:56, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

No problem

 * Thank you
 * Spoiler, some hares a little later xD *hush hush*
 * No problem
 * Yes it is

Thank you xD

Red Tide (II) is coming nicely, slavemasters should get what they give

<font color="Green">Zaran Rhulain  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 03:35, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

Lol, I can imagine, I'm gonna find it pretty funny when I read the slavemaster getting beat by his slaves. I might do another story too, one where a unit of 21st century US Special Forces get "inexplicably" transported to the time of Lord Brocktree and help fight against the Blue Hordes. Should be an interesting concept xD

Thanks
That really helps. =D <font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 21:26, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
For all the suggestions, its just that I am NOT good when it comes to writing stuff like that. Any recomendations are welcome. I dont like people writing a story for me either, but I gladly accept advice.

I do better when its mammal vs mammal, but when it comes to reptiles...bleh. Interestingly enough, in real life, I LOVE snakes, lizards, frogs, all that jazz. But in Redwall...I just...It feels like I'm disecting a frog or somethin. So, if you can help me with that in any way. I'd be very grateful.

Thank you!!! =D <font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 02:42, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

One week
You just couldn't resist that, could you? I'll show you one week. Go ahead, build your stupid suspense. grumble... <font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 03:07, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

I knew it! <font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 03:10, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

How you like me now
How you like me now : <font color="Green">Zaran Rhulain  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 03:18, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

hi its me dannflow
hi I dont no y but I asking u I gust its just because you a good witter I gust I mean I loved chains 1? was there a two? and redtie 1 and 2 cuold you check a story im witeing (cos I dont wa post it and no 1 wants it) please get back to be rsvp :) If u wa  check the bit on fan ficton on my talk i am puting a bit about it later on tonight --<font color="Blue">Dannflow   <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 03:19, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

Ok it up but only for two days ( it cant be copyed ) please tell me if you think I shold post :) --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 08:32, 2 December 2008 (UTC) remember if you dont think its good that ok I will be fine tell me if you think I shuold keep going and it only up for two days:)

re: story
hi thats fine you can contact me via the email  this user :) this is about the middle of the proluge not the bengin :) thaanks --<font color="Blue">Dannflow   <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 00:40, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

re re re:
if you have an email on your account your can email me by the via the email is user on the sidebar under manual of style :) if not I will give it to you :) --<font color="Blue">Dannflow   <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 04:56, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

that ok
thats ok rely it dose not matter much Its an email I made for wiki <font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 05:28, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

thanks
I will use the revision you did I am using micrsoft word 2007 its esayer to speak in to than 2003 but the grammar, comes it up a bit funny. Not as good as in 2003 because most of body was affected by a stroke I have a speech problem so to help me type faster I use a mix of type and speach maybe that's why my grammar is not good. Thanks --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 18:27, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
I really appreciate the idea you had for toning down the fanfiction. I just kinda ignored most of it, but when I got to the part with the hammer an the fire thing....I snapped. I've been severly burned myself. So, yeah. I am a little sensitive about it.

<font color="Teal">C.S.maid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 01:33, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

toned down storys
hi I read your comment on sword maids page if it help I know there a wikia just for fan fic click here to go to the wiki there are about 820 storys so that is a good place to put the more gory storys on and a toned down ones  here ? I hope this helps --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 20:47, 4 December 2008 (UTC) ps I am in the 5th page of my story

you have me on ede on what will happen in red tide 2 a weeks a long time I mean you ended on one word Panic. I am going to die --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 20:54, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

FanFiction.net
Yea I know about Charie saying that Death Knight Part Three is too graphic, personally, I think its ok. Even though that part of his story is very graphic, it shows that Black has a creative mind. This site is not strictly for kids or adults, but it is user preferences. So I'm also fine with the external link to the unedited version.

With Fanfiction.net, I did post up that story, I needed to get more reviews so I can improve later chapters. To post a story, you need to go to Publish, then Document Manager, then go to the upload box, name the chapter you are uploading and put the file on. After that go to Guidelines to confirm that you read the rules and stuff. Then go to New Story, do all the neccesary info and start putting in the chapters. If you want to change the order of the chapters within the site, go to My Stories, click on your story, Content/Chapters, and click edit on whatever chapter you want to move. It will give you a list of numbers, that will be the order of the chapters.

Hope this helps

<font color="Green">Zaran Rhulain  <font color="Blue" size="2">Talk! 22:48, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

On fan fiction that was me, I wanted to see what other people had to say about my story, so I posted it up.

Lol, he is, buts ok.

I Am the Darkness
Dark imagination? Exscuse you!

I love my new nickname. Black. Like my heart or something? Apparently...

I'm not sure about fanfiction.net because not an amazing amount of Death Knight: Part Three was cut out. About a page. I'm thinking of a different way I might use. For now, there are no more really gory parts. Just *dun dun dun* the final showdown. That battle isn't going to be mind-bogglingly nasty.

-<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="red" size="2">Talk! 23:20, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

:) I like it
call me it all you wish, I like it! Thank you,I love hearing that :) <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter  <font color="orange" size="2">Talk! 00:10, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

I did not read about the wiki
sorry this might just end your plans on the fiction wiki to post a story you need to go to ficton. net a lot harder yes I iknow just read the comment on ur page sorry should of read more carefuly sporry or did you all redy know this? can wait for four days :) red tide --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 05:32, 5 December 2008 (UTC) but  there is a wikia that let you put up storys I might put up I story up there --<font color="Blue">Dannflow   <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 05:36, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

I Am Beowulf!
Darn right. I've written almost all of the finale. There's another poem. And I'd like to say that it is not borrowed from that inside joke at all. I prefer the term 'inspired.' I just have a page or two to go. So close. I feel you need to do some editing though. I might of lied when I said it didn't get 'mind-bogglingly gory.' Its not as bad as the censored parts, don't worry...much. -<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="red" size="2">Talk! 05:12, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

re:post
hi I will post it when I have fishenshed ( I cant spell!!!!!!!!!!) the proluge about one more page I hope I hve got my computer to read it out time and time agin each time I find new mistakes ( I cant spell!!!!!!!!!!) I dont think I will do chapter 1 before I post else then I will most likey do chapter two and so on and so forth and I will never post --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 08:20, 6 December 2008 (UTC) ps do u think it is less gory anofe ( I cant spell!!!!!!!!!!) to be pposted with out eidting just from the part you read I mean thats about the worst :)

maybe monday two days time

Well
Don't worry about spelling- we can handle that. A writer's job is to write, and editor's job is to fix spelling mistakes. Which are you? BTW, update on MTWII- Return to Noonvale.--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Green" size="2">Talk! 13:18, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

I am done
I am done the proluge but post will have to wait till tomoreo becouse my time has run out :) untill then --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 23:05, 6 December 2008 (UTC) a full six and 1/2 pages

Ooops!
That comment was meant for Dannflow- I have to go to his talk page, right?

It is up
its up heres the title The missing eight seasons please cheek it :) --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 02:04, 7 December 2008 (UTC) oh and can u do the table of comtent thing

Ah Thanks
Thanks, I was wondering what I was doing wrong, I was messing around with the wording a bit xD

<font color="Green">Zaran Rhulain  <font color="Blue" size="2">Free Help

thanks thanks
thanks so much man help I did what u sudjeted nver been good at spelling :( I adding a bit to make matthias more angery at basil:) --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 06:18, 7 December 2008 (UTC) sorry I must be a such a pest ( put your whores pest name here)

Substory
If you go to The Last Stand of Redwall Abbey, there is a substory I created because I had writer's block for last stand, please read and tell me what you think of it.

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 02:38, 10 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm not stopping the Last Stand, I just have writer's block for it. I'm gonna start it back up soon. But the Delta meets Redwall was just an idea floating around my head and was just blocking up ideas for Last stand

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 03:14, 10 December 2008 (UTC)

thanks a lot
thanks lots hope or exams go well --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 01:38, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

The Last Stand
Don't worry I won't give up on Last Stand, but Otter Delta is occupying a large portion of my imagination right now. Just writing it all out so I can continue The Last Stand

Your 600 strong is coming along real nicely, cream of wheat, lol.

<font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 00:56, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

PS Are you going to continue Red Tide? I liked that story too

I thought that was you

lol, what was in the unedited version? cream of crap?

No Fair!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No deleteing! What, don't you like it? How would you like it if I deleted my story, huh?<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 19:44, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

WHAT??? WHAT HAPPENED??? NOOOOO T_T <font color="Teal">Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 21:36, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

Oh! I got it! I think I missunderstood soemthing...ok. --<font color="Saffron ">Chris <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! 22:02, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm sorry
I didn't know you had technical difficulties. I didn't mean to yell. (That's the only prob with the wiki- when you write something down, you can't tell emotion as much as when you actually say it.) Again, I'm sorry.--<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 23:01, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

Understood
BTW, update- Started Chap # 10. --<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 23:52, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

I'd post it in parts
Like I'd post the first few paragrapghs at a time- about each time the scene breaks should do nicely. Keep it Up! (Wow, hta's getting too long to wirte- i'll just put KIU!!!) Rock On!!<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 04:40, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

Hello Matey!
how ye doing? Hope ye haven't been stung by bees lately. Ye recall when you said that Bragoon and saro's deaths were sadder than Rose's? Well, check out my homepage and see what I added to my favorite excerts from the books! Also I am close to reading every Redwall book!!!! YEAHHH!!!!!!!

--Martin the Warrior 01:06, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

UPDATE
Chap. 14 Martin the Warrior II- RTN Part II <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 14:36, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

Oh, thank you matey!
Wow, that was nice! Thank you, and-

Merry Christmas!

Sorry- Don't know how to do multi-colored text. *WINKS* <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Talk! 20:50, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Merry Christmas! (I can't abide "Happy Holidays"!)
<font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 21:22, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Merry Christmas Yourself
Feel the wrath of my HTML!

''' <font color="#348017">M e <font color="#green">r r <font color="#41A317">y <font color="#0B8C18">C h <font color="#green">r i <font color="#348017">s t <font color="#green">m a <font color="#green">s ! '''

' <font color="#FFDD00"> And A Happy New Year! '

How long did it take you to remember, write out, and copy and paste that code? It took me like five to change your's and add to it. -<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="red" size="2">Talk! 21:44, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Five minutes, just to clarify. As opposed to hours. =D -<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="red" size="2">Talk! 21:51, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Ha! I saw it. I thought you said you had at least some of Welcome Wagon written. I have more of Death Knight, but my brain hurts because I'm not sure if it's what I want to do. It's totally different from Death Knight. -<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="red" size="2">Talk! 22:14, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Someone's going to die! Yay! Wait...Ha, just kidding. I'm not that dark, however often you insist. -<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="red" size="2">Talk! 22:17, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Well, I think at some point you mentioned "tomato soup," and I thought up my idea. I wasn't going to use it because of 600's tomato soup, but then you posted it, and it was different. Because it was different I decided to use it. -<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="red" size="2">Talk! 22:20, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

My gift
Spoiler xD

...and the nuclear detonated before Kaylee could stop all it, all was DESTROYED!!!!

muahahah lol just kidding

<font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 00:28, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

You got IT!
KIU is Shieldmaiden talk for keep it up (too long to type. I'm starting part III of Martin the Warrior II- I'm up to chap. 21!!!) <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 05:22, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

yer
im still witeing havent had much time lately tho with xmas and all then we going camping so cant get much done mayhap half a page... thanks for the Christ-mas message happy new year with many more to come. --<font color="Blue">Dannflow  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 07:51, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

Freaky.
I'd just finished your comment and was about to leave am essage here whenI got you rmessage. Anyways, I understand why you put in in the first place (I'm flppin glad I'm not in the army.) The chant was good, it mad me want to get up and strangle Urgan nagru, Badrang, and Kurda. BTW, You are gifted. I'd hate for that gift to go to waste. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 04:41, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

The Chant
There's nothing wrong with the chant. I was just saying that in Redwall, no one is addressed as man or woman. It's always "beast" or "vermin" or "woodlander" or "scum-sucking coward." I dunno what you should change it to, if at all. Also, that and "Who do the ladies love the most?" were totally seperate thoughts, weirdo. -<font color="Black">Black Hawk  <font color="red" size="2">Talk! 00:23, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

???????
What did youmean by that post on Charie's user page? <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 02:54, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

The whole Hyper thing
Yeah, in my family that would be hyper. Its good to be positive. =) Oh, and (I saw your comment on Sheildmaiden's page) the reason why I havent been on in a while is: first- my computer's been getting fixed, second- school (my college classes), third- the holidays. So, there i'tis all in a nut shell.

<font color="Crimson">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk! 04:33, 30 December 2008 (UTC)