User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20131224233323

Again, I apologize for the delay in commenting. This was a good end to the chapter, though! There were a few grammatical errors such as less then in rather than 'in less than, but overall, it was fairly clean. I liked all the reunions and how Dom gets an unofficial family. The new characters such as the otter are interesting. Nice job, Astar. KIU!