User blog comment:ScottyBlue/Tales from Bowlaynee Castle/@comment-1427879-20130202165118

Twice, you put tounge instead of 'tongue, but otherwise, I don't believe there were spelling errors. I liked the mention of the Rogue Crew as well as the description of the fire. A bit before Arith noted the attraction between Nixel and Sherlyn, I caught on as well, so that will be interesting to watch. I predict that Iram and Hook ran into the creature, whose name I can't remember, whose eye is supposed to be the gong. Scotty's adventures with Grumbu, as well as her promise, are interesting so far. Good update, KIU!