User blog comment:Hollyfire53/Extension of Bluestripe the Warrior- The Ending for Skip Rorc/@comment-1630956-20100525014903

.*Sniff* Wahh, i died! *tears evaporate* Ah, well, I liked this anyway.

One thing though. It seems like you change my age halfway through the fanfic.

Rorc didn't know if he was joking. "But, Blue... what'll I do wi'out'cha?" The badger shook his head. "Yore still young. Free Southaven."

Stonepaw gave Rorc a look. "Last time? I thought you would stay and help me!" The otter's smile turned sad. "Stonepaw, I am a very, very old otter warrior.

See? It doesn't seem like a ton of time passes in this expansion, so you may want to clarify.

Three cheers for Holly!