User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/Grey Gardens/@comment-1427879-20120127222846

So is this more Vilaya's tale up to the Sable Quean exploring some of the things you mentioned in flashbacks in ALNM? It's interesting so far! The beginning reminds me of POTO...btw you should probably put who writes what before each chapter. And I think you're missing a quotation mark somewhere. KIU!