User blog comment:Coldstrype the Scythe/Story for Ejaxk/@comment-1927467-20100327140058

The story was written well. I'm concerned about teh appearance of IronBuck, before CopperJaw fights Ejakx, Ejakx beats IronBuck because of his speed and agility. During the fight with Copp. and Ejakx it is farely evenly matched because CopperJaw is an "gymnist" performing many assorted flips and rolls, at great speed. Ejakx is also "motaly wounded" and would not be fighting to his full capacity. Besides all of that, the story was very good and I loved the random duck idea. -CopperJaw "Why is a raven like a writing desk?"