User blog comment:JumpoverMoon/The Path to Take/@comment-1427879-20111208210458

Sorry it took me so long to comment. At the beginning the sentence structure seems a bit repetitive but besides that no errors that I could see! I wonder if Viko likes Seena? And that's what happened to the marble which I suspect will play in later. Vlade is amusing and his back story was interesting. Poor Callie but the new char is going to help! Yay! KIU!