User blog comment:Brockfang/On the Knife's Edge/@comment-1145722-20091110175324

Nice! I like it! Very good prologue.

But try describing the characters more. What does Vanefur look like? what is his personality? Describe what Ceteruler and Ryegrass' life was like before the vermin came.

But anyway, this is quite good! KIU! :)