User blog comment:Ailavyn Siniyash/Noonvale/@comment-1738724-20111214041823

This is a pretty good story, great plot line. Few typos here and there, but it doesn't really matter.

Great characters, seems like Xenton is the rising tyrant, eh? No mention of Redwall yet....I have a feeling Dexna is some kind of descendant of Sunflash, but I might wrong. KIU!! (Keep It Up, and KIC is Keep It Coming)