Thread:Astar Goldenwing/@comment-1427879-20140302010900

Hey! For some reason, RW won't let me comment on your blog post. Therefore, I'll leave my comment here. Sorry it took me so long, btw; maybe you should just assume it will take me a few days every time. Anyway, I really liked this update! I didn't really notice any mistakes, either. My only comment there would be that once you spelled Maple, Marple. Also, even when hundred is plural if it is connect to a number like 2 or 4, there is no s, like three hundred. I liked the twist of the spy and the "play" they did to confuse him. Also, I liked how this update developed different characters' personalities and started planning the final battle. Nice job, Astar! 