User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Cripple/@comment-25720178-20151002012756

Hello Astar!

I realize I haven't commented in a while, and so here I am with a three day weekend! (It's a meeting day for teachers tomorrow)

The song was lovely :) How did you write it? (XD I'm curious for several reasons, one of which I just love singing. Besides that, I have a poetry unit at my school and the teacher will give us quite a lot of extra credit if we present our original poem to the class.)

Poor Armata :( I really sort of liked her character a lot, and poor Razorclaw. Viscum really is a force to be reckoned with DX

Farl's and Kyle's scheming is both suspenseful and heartwarming, 'cause it's great to know he isn't alone in his wild ideas :D I just hope they have luck... but I guess Viscum won't let them away easy...

This is going great! You're certainly good at writing and I love all the characters here :D Keep it up!