User blog comment:Redwall151/Title: Undecided-Intro to villain:Ziltav the Horrifying(or assassin) NEW FANFIC! :)/@comment-1427879-20101124205712

Hm, Interesting. He's evil and it's descriptive though your sentences may be a bit too long. Besides that you may want to change the title. It's good though, KIU!