User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/A War from Inside/@comment-2142396-20150420164355

I’ve been neglecting this story for awhile but not anymore. ;)

I’ve got to say that I really love Lilly’s character. And to think that Fragorl and Adkar plan to made a Shadow Fighter out of her is really scary. Well, at least she has Groddil to help her. Talking about Groddil… He was Fragorl’s apprentice? I knew there were dark times in his life when he was working for Ungatt Trann, but that he almost went so far… I like seeing more of him.

I have to admit I didn’t take Fragorl seriously in FWC… but here she is downright scary. When she was threatening Lilly’s family… Brr! (She kind of reminds me of Viscum, by the way…) And Fragorl escapes the mistake many villains make, i.e. keeping their prisoners in the same cell where they can plot. She does keep them in the same cell, but she gains from this much more than she loses.

‘A pair of eyes watched on silent wings’… Just as I read it, I thought about a bat character introduced. But I may be wrong, of course. Great work so far! KIU!