User blog comment:Ferretmaiden/Zaroc book 1. the beginning/@comment-1630956-20100512011744

Shouldn't Zach be the one leading, since he knows his way around? Besides the fact that you've missed a ton of capitals at the beginning on sentences, it's a good update. It would be strange if Zach was the one who was supposed to kill her...I wonder what Whitepaw would do if that were true?