User blog comment:Spiriz Sandfleet/The Warrior Spirit/@comment-5156759-20130220011036

Good start, nothing like a classic Redwall way to begin your story. I like the traveling to learn the story as opposed to just knowing it, that's a good change actually.

Quick question: "The creature touched its rudder-like tail to its ear in a sign of greeting." Can otters actually do that? I didn't think their tails were that long...

That is just minor nitpicking, overall great start, please do keep me updated!