Thread:Selound/@comment-4482397-20111110032622/@comment-4482397-20111129033024

heres the next chapter... notice. the next chapter i want Findo to be the one who directly kills Hillgorse, and Keena has Findo accused of rape. and gets him in a lot of trouble... i also think she should have a crush on Ralken that he knows about but for the most part ignores her....

just as comic relief and for drama. ^^ A perfect love rectangle. Keena, Alya, Elonwyn and Findo XDDDD

the chapter's called Run Away Run Away I'll Attack!

ELonwyn stood nervously beside Aquastar, casting furtive glances back at the rambling rosehip players. She wished Aqua would stop chatting to the squirrel in whispers, she wanted to get away from here before they were spotted by Badrang’s guards.

Elonwyn’s ears perked. Two rats were skulking nearby, and she recognized one of them. Keena.

Elonwyn bared her teeth. She was going to prove to them all she wasn’t afraid anymore. That bully would get a lesson she’d never forget!

Lonny slid away from Aqua, unnoticed, and hid behind a barrel of unknown strong smelling booze. Keena was practically dragging the other rat along. Elonwyn drew her shortsword.

“Keena, I can’t see that little stoat no more.” The bigger rat whispered, sounding nervous.

“Shut up! It’s because we’re in a different position! No pipe down!”

Elonwyn stepped out from behind the barrel. “I’d say you’re in a very interesting position indeed.” The young stoat said coldly.

Keena smiled evilly and pulled out her sling and notched a stone. “Well it looks like the little wench came to us! Done drooling over Prince Ralken are you?”

“Jealous, Keena?” Elonwyn raised her sword. “I’ve seen that nude drawing you have of him.”

“That’s a lie!” Keena screeched, raising her sling to crash it between Lonny’s ears.

Lonny dodged the sling by a second, and the stone clanged against her blade. Elonwyn took a few steps back. The bigger rat tensed, then turned and ran.

“Blackdash you son of a seagull!!!” Keena turned to yell after brother. Elonwyn took the chance to brace herself. She held the sword with both paws, and waited for the second Keena turned her head back, then she leapt, her sword flashing in an arch.

Keena screamed and swung her sling like a club. It struck Lonny on the eye and she fell back, her paw pressed to her hurting face, staggering back in agony. Keena laughed and swung the sling again, hitting Elonwyn on the shoulder, hard. Elonwyn cried out in pain and swung her sword as she fell back with the force of the blow.

Keena stared at her chest in horror as blood oozed down from a cut on her sternum. Her mouth hung open and her eyes were wide with shock. Then she looked up from her chest, her face contorted with fear and anger. Elonwyn struggled to her feet, raising her sword again.

“How dare- you little- I’ll make you suffer!!!” Keena lunged at her, raising her sling, lashing it around wildly. Elonwyn dodged desperately, barely keeping from having her skull crushed.

Keena was suddenly knocked off her feet and smashed against the wall with a great force. Elonwyn, who had been shielding herself with her arms, looked up.

Findo had Keena pinned hard against the barrel, with her head and shoulders on the top, and the rest of her hanging down.

Findo snarled down in Keena’s face, ignoring her gasps and screams as blood ran down the corners of her mouth.

“Findo!” Elonwyn said desperately, holding a paw to her throbbing shoulder. “Findo! Please!”

Findo didn’t seem to hear her. “You seem to be taking liberties you don’t have Keena my dear.” He growled, his face dangerously close to hers.

“Help!” Keena screamed. “Let go of me you monster!!!”

“Oh, I can’t do that!” Findo purred. “You’ve attacked someone my cousin holds very dear, and we could have Badrang kill you for that you know.”

“That’s enough Findo.” Ralken’s calm voice came from behind. Findo glanced up from his tormenting Keena. Ralken stood, flanked by Alya and Aquastar. Alya immediately leaned over Lonny and lifted her arms. Elonwyn gave a gasp of pain.

“She’s fractured her shoulder.” Alya said.

“Did you hear that?” Ralken smiled darkly at Keena. “You’ve possible ruined my Cousin’s arm. I hope you have a good explination. Let her go Findo.”

Findo flung Keena to the ground, and she stared up at Findo with pure hatred. Then she sniveled at Ralkens feet. Ralken raised an eyebrow darkly.

“Prince Ralken, she attacked me for no reason! I had to defend myself! Please belive me my prince!” she groveled at his feet, sobbing. Ralken rolled his head.

“I don’t like liars Keena. Get out of here or I will make your life miserable.” Keena struggled to her feet and ran, sobbing. Fakely.

“Elonwyn…” Findo glanced down at Lonny.

“Don’t talk to me.” Elonwyn whipered. “You could have killed her.”

“And she could have killed you.” Ralken said coldly. “You have a black eye, several bruises, and a fractured shoulder to prove that.”

“Why did you do that by yourself?” Aquastar demanded. “You should have called me to help you!”

“I’m capable of protecting myself.” Elonwyn whispered resentfully.

“Oh, yes.” Findo said sarcastically. “Really capable.”

Elonwyn blushed, and then winced.

Alya helped her up. “Come on, let’s get you fixed up.”

Keena rubbed her bleeding chest, sniffling dramatically. Blackdash came up behind her cautiously.

“You left me to get killed.” Keena snarled.

“I got scared. At least now you know-

“Shut up!” Keena snarled. “I’m going to get that weasel and that little wench for this. Believe me! I have a fail proof plan this time!”

Blackdash swallowed.

 