User blog comment:Ferretmaiden/Folgrims Past/@comment-988934-20091104030140

ok, strike the last comment on the review, I'm actually sorry I said it because it was just plain rude.

It's not that you lack proper english writing skills, it's because you don't re-read your work after writing it and you don't add alot of details. It gets really confusing at times to read because everything is jammed together, yet vague to understand. Only by re-reading your work and correcting your own mistakes can you improve to become a better writer.

My apologies, Zaran