User blog comment:Lordsunflash/Corbus Quick-blade/@comment-1630956-20100917014809/@comment-2104511-20100917020134

point 1: Well I think I can explain the "formal" way the characters speak and that is probably due to the way i speak most of the time. It's kind of ironic because I can do a ton of accents, and as I have mentioned before I am bad at the hare's accent(once again I can do the accent I just have trouble typing it) before writing the story I was actually considering telling the story to someone as they write it down but then dismissed it because I doubted any of my friends would do it.

point 2; Jak had quite a interesting development(first it was that a patrol of hares would come to help, then it was just him, then I made him insane, then I had an idea to make him French and abandon the insane idea[came back as Palagus])

point 3: as for the part with Zann running away it happened because I was quickly running out of ideas for the siege and didn't want to copy off the books so I moved the sea because I knew i could write more about it