User blog comment:Snowpaw the Wild/The Past is Gone/@comment-1630956-20100715193301

"Not that anyone cares." you say. Well, i'll tell you, I can't care if i don't know about the story! I don't see everything that goes on on this wiki y'know! Now A: Update me. B: This is a great story, although in the part where Columbine's dreaming its hard to say where it begins. Put a space break after this paragraph:

''Gonff hurried down to the wallgate and opened it, allowing Columbine in. He soon assessed that she was tired and aching, but not seriously hurt. They headed to the dormitories so she could have a rest.''

It'll separate when she goes to rest from when she dreams without revealing that she's dreaming, it'll just look like a short time lapse.

Now KIC, and people do care.