User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/Stolen Tears/@comment-26141072-20160105234552

IT'S TEARS OF THE OCEAN!

Gosh, a year ago when we were still on FWC it didn't seem possible O.o

Your writing style has improved so much! It's brilliant! Practice makes perfect, I guess!

As for the book, well I really wasn't imagining Conva, Barrannca (however you spell that), or Ublaz the way you portrayed them, and I was surprised at the history you put Sampetra down to. Loki, the Empress, the different culture. . . in the end I thought it was fascinating so it was a pleasant shock.

Ublaz is really going down. Wow. . . chrystal balls. . . Shadow fighter. . . didn't know we'd go that far, but it's a cruel yet interesting change. He seems particularly twisted, though I prefer the less 'magical' and more 'physically powered' villains like Farran.

Sayna's new character also took me a bit by surprise. Of course trying to imagine you as old is a bit hard. . . I still think of her as that hot-headed mousemaid with bloodwrath, rather than an old sceptre in the forest. ..

At the moment I'm connecting way more with the characters from Lutra and Sampetra than the characters from Redwall, but that might just be me. ..

As for the action and plotline. . . It's really interesting!! I love Romsca (her flaws and development are brilliant, by the way) and Xzaris, and Val and Rasconza, and how they all connect with each other. I feel really bad for Romsca and Xzaris, there's always this dooming feeling whenever I read about their movements, and the monitors,etc.

The rebellion at Sampetra is probably not going to turn out well :/ I'm a little worried about how the Waveworm will survive when it returns. Not good. I'm still surprised the Monitors wouldn't let them go after the pearls, it's almost as if they want them to go back to Sampetra to die. . . I'm a bit confused about the 'Unknown Lord' stuff.

Man I ran out of time I've got to go but I'll comment more on the actions and stuff later!