User blog comment:Bluestripe the Wild/Bluestripe,A Name Remembered/@comment-2231917-20100904023933

just finished!! in one part you said panthera didnt wear chainmail but yet you said he wore a chainmail breast piece.Furo tugged back hard on his lance and it became unstuck. you could make that sentence better by making it this, Furo tugged back hard on his lance and removed it from the ground =) good book now on to lord of bloodwrath