User blog comment:Silverfalcon Pikehawk/Corsairs of Redwall/@comment-1630956-20100406224359

Ooh, good story 'ere mate! Now, there are a few errors that need fixing, such as word misuse and such, but that can be done anytime. You missed the link for Mossflower, it didn't work. I agree with the rest of the readers, Revenge is Vice. He didn't seem all that bad though. KIC matey! Don't just abandon this!