User blog comment:Segalia/Segalia Riverstorm's voyage/@comment-5156759-20131130194407/@comment-1427879-20131224233722

Wow, this is probably one of the most amazing critiques I have gotten. Thank you so much! Though I would humbly say that I have improved since writing the beginning, I'm also afraid that you will be disappointed as you continue as there were many options I could have taken with various characters and I'm not sure I gave them enough time. It would definitely be interesting to go back and give this a more thorough revision, but I don't have any room on my plate right now. Perhaps in the future. Thank you again, for both the constructive criticism and the high praise. Merry Christmas, Dicer!