User blog comment:Laria Wavedeep/The Son Of A Warrior/@comment-1630956-20100426203542

Moonwind pulled his friend up and said, "I'm not leavin' yore side mate. Too late, get ready mate! Redwaaaallll!" The "mates" are a little repetitive there.

Hmm, what happened to Varlidass and Drintag? Their forces seemed quite small in that fight...and you didn't really have them running away, only "several vermin" ran away. You might want to add somthing there...KIC!