User blog comment:Wolf985/the tale of two rogues chapter 2/@comment-2207385-20110504034917

ohohoh now this chapter was very interesting to read! must be the first fan-fic I see that mentions beer hehe. anyway theirs a few typos but a bit of hunting them down should be enough to eliminate them and I must still advice with changeing the way the paragraphs are to make it easier to read. nice chapter, good job!! (on a side note, the names you come up with for characters are quite outstanding!)

May your blade always strike true and Happystorytelling!!