User blog comment:Segalia/Grath Longfletch: Green Longings/@comment-5156759-20130805005743

Before my actual comments, a few things; your second link (the one referring to the impudent searat) does not work. Perhaps you spelled the character's name wrong in the link.

For some reason, it took until this update to see just how experimental you were being with the point of view; how she views things very simply, not adding details, just a mention of the event and moving on from it. To one used to great and long descriptions, I'm not sure how much I like it (despite praising it extremely before) but it is a very interesting way of writing and if it were at times flavoured with a more normal writing style it might turn up to be something very good indeed.

Nonetheless, it's a good story, and I enjoyed reading it and will no doubt enjoy reading the epilogue.

On a separate note, what is the book that you published about? I would be interested in taking a look at it...