User blog comment:Akash.B/User blog:Akash.B/@comment-The Forbidden Tale/@comment-1808183-20100118003746

WOW! You are a really great writer! I liked the part where Seaburn and Burge were fighting. I think that you should'nt have introduced Moxor as the abbey warrior, but that he should have been the 'self proclaimed' abbey warrior. Nice bit about him looking up to Matthias, just like Matthias looked up to Martin. Maybe don't say that Moxor tried to steal the sword, I just think that puts him as more of a thief than a want-to-be- warrior. Great job, and keep writing!