User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20141224235534

Haha, I had the same goal of updating my fanfic before Christmas. A very merry Christmas to you, Astar! There weren't too many typos in this one: latter, not later, touch not tough, convicted not convinced, both of his not his both,ground' not grindedand with all the action, I was more focused on the story. I had a bad feeling about the stoatmaid, but I wasn't expecting such treachery. And the death of her mother was sad. I quite enjoyed Foxglove's history, and now I wonder what's going to happen as she tries to escape! I also like how you include more realistic details than most action stories, mentioning how long a broken leg takes to heal. Nice update, Astar. KIU!