User blog comment:Segalia/Journey of Warriors: A Sequel to SRV/@comment-2142396-20170824180004

First of all, congrats on graduating, you are a free man now! :D

If I remember right, Malital's original plan was to make drugged Redwallers murder a family of woodlanders and thus disgrace them, but I guess she decided to slow down to spread the rumors and create an effect of dread. I really hope that the Redwallers would succeed in turning Malital's messenger to their side, but at the same time I'm dubious. After all, they only succeeded with Paldra because she received a relatively small dose which wasn't very potent...

I'm very excited about Abbes Paldra's plan to find out about Malital's origins, motivations and possible weaknesses, mostly because we, the readers, don't know much about them either. That account on the Apis family tree may have some useful information in it, I think. Blodd Apis didn't seem a type to have children, but if there were two sisters, maybe Malital is her niece or cousin? Maybe an apprentice? There are many possibilities...

Ah, Riplar's misfortunes during the sailing were so vivid! I knew that cats and water didn't mix, but I didn't think it's also fair for foxes. :D Now that at least some of our heroes reached their destination, I feel that we are nearing the final of the story. I'm excited to see how Riplar's reunion with Selra would go, and what would happen when the squirrels and the otters catch up with them as well. Keep the good work up!

Continuing on the topic of landmarks started in the previous comment, I have to admit that I mostly tend to forget about the Eastern Sea, and when I don't I imagine it to be farther to the north-east, otherwise, the continent of Mossflower becomes rather narrow. But it's true that the landmarks can sort of 'wander' over the maps. Hmm, if the canyon in question is south to the lake, then it can't be the one Danflower and Song traveled through, but if it also flows into the lake, they may be connected somehow. ;)