User blog comment:Laria Wavedeep/Redwall's Taggerung/@comment-1988904-20100421162325

Here's my review for the rest:

I really like your poem in chapter 9. And... the lyrics of the song in chapter 10. And... the Gousim Marching song and... the Gousim Party song in chapter 14. And... the lullaby in chapter 16. I'm going to run out of space if I keep naming them! They're amazing! I have trouble with poems and rhymes, but it seems to come to you naturally. I don't suppose I could convince you to write a song for my characters to sing at a feast or around the campfire... ;-)

I wasn't sure what I think of Trumin. He's a bit of a tyrant, but he doesn't seem that dangerous. He's just kinda cranky. Brolun on the other hand is a great villain. Foxes just seem to have a certain mystique about them don't they.

I really like this exchange of his from Chapter 15: ''"As yew can see, yore leader is dead. I'm yore new chieftain, Brolun the Pike. Yew will obey my orders, an' do it without question. If I says march, yew march. If I say sleep, yew sleep. If I say eat, yew eat. And if I say fight, yew fight. Understood?"

"Yes Chief!"

Brolun cackled. "Haha, yew guys are quick learners! ''

Note the Brolun cackled should be on the line with his dialouge otherwise it seems like he said "Yes, Chief."

Brendila is really fun. I'm a sucker for the strong female characters, being one myself, lol. It was sad that her father died. :'( Though I kinda saw it coming.  And I'm guessing the sequel is about her and Dayl's son Moonpaw.  I've got to check that out next.

Well that's the end from me. GREAT STORY!! I'm glad there's a sequel because I definitely want more.