User blog comment:Richard Starkey/Radeenden/@comment-1738724-20110323090749

You indented the sentences which are in the boxes, so delete the spaces they'll disappear, like this:

I'm in a box. DIE BOX DIE!!!!!

You see? Hope that helps. Anyways, you need to work on your grammar and punctuation.

Then Radeenden burst from the shadows, screaming "I'll kill you with me bear hands Murderer!" You need to put a comma after screaming, and 'bear' is meant to be 'bare'. Besides all that, good story.