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Tav looks like a girl. The eyelashes and something about the face. Also, the torso tapers too much for a boy. Arms look wacky and the tail is too thin at the base. The knees are too knobbly and the paws are off. Shoulders should be wider. Ears too small and the way the head attaches to the neck is a bit odd.

I love the way you have the fur, and his kilt is awesome! I can't do wrinkles :(

Keep drawing!

ShieldmaidenI live by honor and die like a warrior 15:52, November 15, 2009 (UTC)