User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/A little night music/@comment-4423064-20111220202553

A great job overall with the great characters, And as I always have said the descriptions are extremely well written and make for a good read. If there is one thing I must complain on it is that I had a bit of a problem with keeping track of everything, it seemed like there were one to many things going on in the story and, while each of the sub-plots was great in itself I feel like a few were being trampled over by the others. I can't wait to read more of your stories in the future but remember to tone it down a little bit.

PS I loved how the chapter titles were mostly, if not all, song names.