Thread:SalemtheCruel/@comment-5942879-20131013230545

Thanks for your constructive criticism on my first two fanfics, it helped me a lot on my fourth, "the story of zemmerug zitspike". If you would like, you can read it to and add more criticism if any is needed. And again, thank you for helping me.

Sincerely, Burglebuber Sixclaw 