User blog comment:Lordsunflash/Corbus Quick-blade/@comment-1630956-20100910000315

I read the first couple of chapters, and the thing that strikes me most is the fact that you really need to revise. Punctuation, capitals, grammer, all need revision. That said, the plot is interesting, if a bit rushed with the first attack in chapter two. I can't say for the rest of it, i haven't read that far, but i think i'll get there. Oh, and if you think that your array of comments are bad, look here.