User blog comment:Peony Laminar/Peony Laminar/@comment-From the South/@comment-1884658-20100515224759

Wow, you are a good author. I didn't find so many errors this time.

“I’m just as deadly without a rapier as I am without one.” Didn't you mean "with one?"

Flippin’ Disgustin’ Stuff! It looks kinda odd to have every word in the sentence capitalized, unless the name of the drink was "Disgustin' Stuff."

The smoke started to clear and Peony heard Willow whisper, “We’re Ready.” Just capitalization.

Wow, no one else is giving you Evil Critisism. Well, you KIC, this is really good!