User blog comment:The Dicer/Paws Of Steel/@comment-1427879-20130626213704

A few punctuation errors and once you put reseed rather than recede. Besides that, I didn't notice any mistakes. Wow, that was dark. It was almost getting to be too much, but then we got to his brother. Thank goodness for his brother. I hope that this helps Damian and I'm glad that this story is on the upturn! Good update, KIU!