User blog comment:CopperJaw/Perview of the Books/@comment-1630956-20100605144637

press enter twice, it makes a new paragraph.

A few things to point out if you don't mind. One, there are no "men". "hares" or "warriors" would be a better term, in keeping with the lack of humans.

Stand hares of the Mountain! reads better as  Stand, hares of the Mountain! with a comma after "Stand".

I nearly stopped reading at the beginning, because it reminded me so much of Lord of the Rings. In fact in the first few sentences, I thought you were going to copy that passage and just make a few word changes. (Of course, the entire thing is a little long for that, you would've needed to add somthing, but anyway) It's interesting.