User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20141023033413

Oh my goodness, you're making me like Foxglove and Kars more and more which will just tear my feelings apart when we get back to the conflict with Redwall! That's definitely a compliment. I did notice several preposition swaps, tense errors, and you should say I'll kill him instead of I kill him. Otherwise, your grasp of English is amazing; I love all your details and descriptions! Ah the fight...but I like how you used the opportunity to show a wide variety of vermin, make them multi-dimensional. I'm still worried about what will happen to Foxglove, though I know she's going to survive til Redwall. Very nice job, Astar! KIU!