User talk:Pinedance Coneslinger

--Dannflow  Talk! 20:46, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

Ahoy!
Ahoy pinedance coneslinger! Im Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  Merry Christmas!! 21:10, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

i am going to show you how to make your own signature in a step by step basis! Here is my signature

Sambrook the otter  Talk!


 * copy the formatting and then follow my instructions.


 * 1.)when copied, paste to word (or notepad, any form of typing application works as long as you can paste things to it)


 * 2.)Here's what to edit:
 * A.)Replace my name with yours
 * B.)change the color (if desired)
 * C.)and replace the picture name with your own picture JPG name. (Right now im asuming you know how to copy, paste, and make files JPGs (Er, I think they can be bitmaps, im not exactly sure) Warning! The picture will not show up if it is not on the website, so be sure its a picture that you uploaded on here or was already on here.
 * 3.) IMPORTANT! Don't change ANY of the technical stuff unless you know what your doing. everything has to be EXACTLY right to work


 * Here's a list of colors that have been found to work(credit to Zaran)-


 * Navy * Orchid
 * lime * Maroon
 * Aqua * Aquamarine
 * Turquoise * Magenta
 * Chocolate * Cyan
 * Salmon * Goldenrod
 * Fuchsia * Khaki
 * Olive * Thistle
 * Tomato * Wheat
 * Red * blue
 * crimson * saffron
 * green * teal
 * orange * purple
 * yellow * black
 * silver


 * 4.) cut (or copy if you wish to fiddle with it in the future) the signature.
 * 5.) Go to the big MORE box at the top. Scroll down it until you come to My Preferences
 * 6.) scroll down on the page that opens when you click My Preferences.
 * 7.) Paste the signature in the signature box
 * 9.) be sure to check the Raw Signature bow before saving changes.

I hope this helps! If you need any more explanations or if you have any other questions, I am always willing to answer them! Be seeing you around! Sambrook the otter  Talk!

P.s. If it works, may I see it? I love getting feedback!

Hi!
Hi, I'm Moriel, good to see you, see you around -ends redundantness- --- -Clockworthy  Talk! 23:31, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm glad you like my story :D! Are you going to write a story? --- -Clockworthy  Tell me happy birthday xD 19:48, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

Welcome to Redwall Abbey, Pinedance Coneslinger!
Welcome, Pinedance, and have fun! *(I take it you're a squirrel)*Wink*

Suggested fan fics are:

Tirborath- Sambrook's story RW Martin the Warrior II- Return to Noonvale Parts I and II Otter Delta Tearful Vengeance Vengeance Quest Moriel and Treil Parts I and II Red Tide I and II

There are more, but I can't remember them all. Happy reading!

User:Shieldmaiden |Shieldmaiden ]] Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 23:59, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

Da other greeting xD
If you got other questions or any of that riff raff ask:
 * Sambrook the otter(The Artist) [[Image:Just_Sambrook.JPG| 40px | ]] My Usertalk Page!., <font color="Teal">C.S.maid  [[Image:Martin2.JPG | 70px | ]] <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk!, <font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  [[Image:Martin002.jpg | 35px | ]] <font color="Red" size="2">Talk!SRRF,
 * <font color="Teal">Aida Otterock [[Image: AOTfanart.jpg | 30px | ]] <font color="Teal" size="2">Talk!, <font color="Green">LordTBT  [[Image:Tbtico.jpg]] <font color="Green" size="2">Talk!, <font color="Blue">Dannflow  [[Image:Coggs1.jpg | 45px | ]] <font color="blue" size="2">Talk!, and <font color="Black">Black Hawk  [[Image:Argulor.jpg|50px|]] <font color="crimson" size="2">Talk! Black

Plus if you are a fan of Fan fictions, some suggested readings are:
 * The Last Stand of Redwall Abbey
 * Otter Delta
 * Sambrook's Story
 * Red Tide 1 and 2,
 * Lenora Longtail
 * Death Knight, Part Two,  Part Three
 * Death Knight II
 * Martin the Warrior II- Return to Noonvale, Part Two
 * Fren's Quest
 * Tearful Vengeance

I'm also here for help xD <font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain   <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 01:05, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm about to add more to my story.
I'm glad you like it. (It's not THAT good) <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 03:38, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

YAY!!
Sombeast agrees with me!!! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 04:44, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

Digital art
Yeah, Its pretty awesome. I can't wait to see your art work ;) <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 17:22, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

Yes
That would be really AWESOME!! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 21:26, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

Is anybody
else here homeschooled? <font color="Turquoise">Pinedance Coneslinger <font color="navy" size="2">Happy New Year!--Pinedance Coneslinger 23:13, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

Psst!
Hey Pinedance, tell me here what you've noticed. Hopefully no-one will think to look here (but they probably will).

<font color="Teal ">Mauran Axestripe  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk to me!, 00:11, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

*whispers*
I noticed that Elmstripe is Russano. <font color="Turquoise">Pinedance Coneslinger <font color="navy" size="2">Happy New Year!--Pinedance Coneslinger 00:38, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

Mmmhmmm
You got my meaning, didn't ya! Congrats! <font color="Teal ">Mauran Axestripe  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk to me!, 00:41, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

And the speaker in my newest poem is one of those Elmstripe saw that stood with the ancient warriors! <font color="Teal ">Mauran Axestripe  <font color="teal" size="2">Talk to me!, 00:44, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

RE:
<font color="Chocolate ">HAPPY NEW YEAR, PINEDANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 00:57, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

HNY
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO PINE <font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain    <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 01:59, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

Happy New Year to you too! --<font color="Aquamarine ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk page 03:02, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

To all of you I was unable to say happy new year to,
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <font color="Turquoise">Pinedance Coneslinger <font color="navy" size="2">Happy New Year!--Pinedance Coneslinger 03:04, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

Happy new year!
Have a great 2009!

Just Fren  <font color="purple" size="2">HAPPY 2009! 14:16, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

Three Cheers for New Year
Happy New Year to you as well! --- -<font color="Goldenrod ">Clockworthy  <font color="silver" size="2">Tell me happy birthday xD 15:51, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

Same to you, happy new year--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 16:19, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

Ageistic.
I turned 16 yesterday. --- -<font color="Goldenrod ">Clockworthy  <font color="silver" size="2">Tell me happy birthday xD 23:08, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

not nessicarily
Well i'm only a year older than you, i'm 13. --<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 00:08, 2 January 2009 (UTC)

'Arppy new year mate :D <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 17:58, 2 January 2009 (UTC)

Simple,
Lawd already died, and- not telling!!!!!! (most likly a certain otter, good luck trying to figure out which one, and maybe one or two more besides . . . . .) BTW, update on Taggerung Quest <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 01:28, 4 January 2009 (UTC)

Aye aye mate. I'm Home schooled also. Oh, Just a question. When are you going to upload more art work? I really like what you have up! <font color="Teal ">Sambrook the otter(The Artist)  <font color="orange" size="2">Merry Christmas!! 04:48, 4 January 2009 (UTC)

wow!
your drawing's great! i love it! i wish i can draw like that! --<font color="Aquamarine ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Talk page 05:34, 4 January 2009 (UTC)

Update
MTWRTNIII <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 04:32, 6 January 2009 (UTC)

update
Matrin the Warrior II <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 15:44, 6 January 2009 (UTC)

Nice story! <font color="Goldenrod ">Mauran Axestripe  <font color="goldenrod" size="2">Talk to me!, 23:10, 7 January 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, update on Elmstripe's Story!*dances around room* I've half released the secret! Yippee! <font color="Goldenrod ">Mauran Axestripe  <font color="goldenrod" size="2">Talk to me!, 01:15, 8 January 2009 (UTC)

ok, I will thanks! --<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 03:51, 10 January 2009 (UTC)

cool, new cousin! --<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 04:02, 10 January 2009 (UTC)

I will be putting esmaerdalla (not spelled right) in my story soon!--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 04:23, 10 January 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, of course! That would be great! : )--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 14:32, 10 January 2009 (UTC)

Quickwind
I have never really thought of his fur color, so you can make it either grey, red , black, or white. His eye color is blue, also I imagine him being quite agile and quick. His weapon is a hard wood staff and he wears a robe, with a long, dark, flowing cloak. If you need in more details about him, just let me know. --<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 22:01, 10 January 2009 (UTC)

Quickwind lives at Redwall when it is created, but I never decided if he stayed there the rest of his life, you can decide that.--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 22:05, 10 January 2009 (UTC)
 * P.S. What age to you imagine him being in your story?

Well, he would probably be middle aged, to old, not married, and his personalty is the strong and silent tipe, but also loves spending time with the dibbuns.--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 00:16, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

I don't oicture him married, but you could say that he was married and had kids, but his wife died a few years ago, and the lids are all grown up, but really you can do whatever you think would fit in your story best!--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 02:37, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

I use
Sonlight curriculem. I AM BACK FROM COMPUTER RESTRICTION, YYEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 04:40, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

Request Away
Sure! What would you like? --<font color="Goldenrod" style="background:Black">Clockworthy <font color="aqua" style="background:Black">Expand your horizons...read my story  00:20, 14 January 2009 (UTC)

Seems like
you and I are the only one online right now....<font color="Red ">Prard’ras’kleoni  <font color="Olive" size="2">'sup! 00:57, 14 January 2009 (UTC)

Your story
Loved it! The description of locations and such really gave a good visual! From begining to end there's a noticable differance in your writing style and skill. As it got closer to the end the story was much more refined and used more powerful and descriptive verbs. If the begining was just altered in the technical feild, not the story line, then it woul have a convincing feeling to it. Even so though I enjoyed it a good degree. For example your description of the wildcat set the mood perfectly, SPINE CHILLING! And also I really enjoyed the fact that you tied some well known characters from the book series into the book in a believable way. Such as: Gonf & Columbine, Gingivere, ect. ect. Good job!<font color="Red ">Prard’ras’kleoni  <font color="Olive" size="2">'sup! 01:29, 14 January 2009 (UTC)

Poem&Story
Thanks. xD I love writing so it works out well. You live in Utah too! Wow! What part? <font color="Green">Charie Swordmaid  <font color="Green" size="2">Chat! 01:33, 14 January 2009 (UTC)

BTW
you draw better than I do!<font color="Red ">Prard’ras’kleoni  <font color="Olive" size="2">'sup! 01:34, 14 January 2009 (UTC)

KEEP IN MIND THESE ARE ONLY SUGGESTIONS!
Well for example don't use the word gaze every time you want to describe the fact that someone is looking at or upon something or some one, however that does not by anymeans mean that gaze is a bad descriptive word, because it's really a good one but just don't abuse. Maybe look up synonyms for the word that you want to use if you feel that that word is a cliche` or repetative in your story in a thesaurus either online or in a book. Also, the location of a comma in a sentence is important because it sets the speed of the sentence and tells the reader where the sentence my pause, falter, or slow down. "Her walnut fur and light brown paws contrasted nicely." is a quote from your story. Instead of just nicely all alone, try "contrasted against the snow nicely" or something of that sort.

"Those squirrels had learned their lesson, a long and painful one.

She turned and addressed the crowd of vermin behind her. 'Well, those fools learned their lesson. Onward, to our next victims.'

The vermin cheered and hurried off with bloodlust in their eyes."

this is another quote from your story. The 'learned their lesson' part is repetative so maybe try rephrasing it either when she actually says it or when it's the writer saying it to the reader, your choice. Also, hurried off is really sort of dull in comparison to sprinted off or dashed off and also it would probably be better if you VERY breaifly said where they're dashing off to, like They sprinted off into the woods or through the trees or across the valley or whatever, depending upon the geography of where they are; remember to keep that part breif or the pacing of the sentence might get set off kilter.

"She wept for her parents, brothers, grandparents, and friends who had been killed so cruelly."

try She wept for her parents, her brothers, her grandparents, and friends who........ that is just an option, really doesn't make a huge difference And in the place of cruelly maybe viciously, or mindlessly would be better suited although that too doesn't make a significant difference, 'cause cruelly works well enough too.

"She was unable to understand why one would want to slay other living creatures."

want is sort of a cliche` word so maybe why one would desire to..... or maybe find pleasure in the death of others. Oh, and this is another one of those things that you don't have to do but MIGHT fit better; instead of unable perhaps incapable.

"Snowflakes drifted down from the grey sky, falling on the hard, brown earth."

in the place of hard maybe rigid would work better.(Love the description in that sentence!) (BTW I realize that right now I'm being extremely repetative and using Cliche`s all over the place, but then again this is a reveiw not a story:))

"Here and there, a few snowdrops bloomed for they are the only flower which can survive in the winter." After bloomed put a comma.

"The squirrel slowly crept over to it and found a cottage."

The squirrel slowly crept over to the light(or it whichever works better) and found it came from the window of a cottage. See the difference?

COMPLIMENTS Personally I'm in doubt that I could have done the accents of the Hedge hog family and Dibbuns so well;) Loved the descriptions, they gave clear vivid images of their surroundings!

also my English teacher warns us against using words that make the story boring and in something like a short story its tempting to use them so I wanted to compliment you on that 'cause there were'nt that I saw!(My English teacher calls them Danger Zones, words like is, are, thing, was, were and stuff. Now that's not to say that you can't or shouldn't use them because for pacing reasons sometimes they must be used. Even Brian Jaques himself uses them from time to time! so don't stress!)

The rest was Pure genious! All of these are simply suggestions because you asked for them. I liked the story so much that along with Taggerung Quest, and one of Mauron Axestripes short stories I'm going to print out a copy for myself to read!( I haven't read any of the other short stories on THIS site due to the fact that I'm relatively new here)(Technically I had an account of similar name ith Wikipedia, but I wasn't as involved woth the site as I would have liked.Forgot the password to it so I made this account)

Loved your story. I look forward to updates on it. Keepwriting, and have fun with it.

<font color="Red ">Prard’ras’kleoni  <font color="Olive" size="2">'sup! 04:48, 14 January 2009 (UTC)

P.S. Hope I helped.

no problem!
I love critiqueing writings anyway!<font color="Red ">Prard’ras’kleoni  <font color="Olive" size="2">'sup! 04:43, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

Grins evily and rubs hands together
What do YOU think? And remember the prophecy. . . . muahahaha! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 12:49, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

RE- MTWII
finished Martin the Warrior II- RTN Part III

about to start Martin the Warrior II- RTN Part IV

muahahaha! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 15:01, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

help
how to kill a fox? How to kill redeye and Loony pants? <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 23:35, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

MTWII
Hey have you read sheildmaidens MTWII?<font color="Green ">Prard’ras’kleoni  <font color="Red" size="2">'sup! 01:07, 16 January 2009 (UTC)

typo
the fox is redeye. Sorry. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 13:55, 16 January 2009 (UTC)

Update
Martin the Warrior II- RTN Part IV <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 02:06, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

Busy
Sorry, if I haven't been active much, school has been keeping me busy and I'm re editing my 2 stories and writing a third one. After Januaray is over, I should be active again.

Great job with a Coneslinger's Revenge, Daffadil sounds adorable

<font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain    <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 05:23, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

Okay
I'll read the update today!<font color="Red ">Me!  15:23, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

update
MTW 4 Martin the Warrior II- RTN Part IV

and Tirborath(Sambrook's story RW) <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 19:35, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

== UPDATE ==

Martin the Warrior II- RTN Part IV

forgot i already put that.oops <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 22:01, 18 January 2009 (UTC)

Update!
Update on The True Tale of Rukky Garge!--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 02:14, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

I'll read the update soon!
<font color="Red ">Me!  03:55, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

hmm
maybe we could co-write- I always wanted a sequel to Triss. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 05:11, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

co-writing
is when you write something together. A book that has been co-authored will featyre both of the author's names.

Take the Left Behind Books.

New York Times best sellers co-written by Tim LaHaye and Jerry B. Jenkins. Both of them wrote the story, contributing to it.

Does thatanswer your question? <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 12:23, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

I'm game if you are, matey A few ideas . ..
Perhaps Peace Isle is attacked

or Salamandastron

or Riftguard (or what ever it's called after the slaves are freed)

Maybe an illness hits Riftguard (Kroova HAS to be in it. Won't be the same.)

Perhaps a band of slavers? none of those since Mattimeo (book). ..

Something about Triss's family?

<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 18:25, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

scry
I left a message the same time you did!

Yeah, Triss MUSt find a member of her family. Maybe her mother?

yeah, alternate every chapter, but we MUST agree on basic story linem other wise this whole thing will go south.

<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 18:28, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

Real nice of you to say that about my fan-fics. Warriors is quite a bit more violent, though, then Redwall. You can check out the Warriors Wiki at. It's really different from Redwall wiki.


 * <font color="orchid" style="background:Black">Hollyfire <font color="cyan" style="background:Black">Queen Tsarmina's Lair 18:32, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

Sure I'm sure
Maybe start it with a prologue on Triss's mom arriving at Peace Island or Riftgard.

creatures from the far west across the seaq or from the Land of ice and snow. attacks peace isle, martin talks to Triss, sh

Then Martin, a usual, is working overtime to ensure every turns out alright.

Got to go now<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know!

re
excellant, except

perhaps yu could mentin that instead of killing each other off, the moniter lizarda and the vermin moved to individual sides of the island, and a ship of pirates landed, curious aboutthe island, the sampetra vermin slew the other corsairs- now they have a ship.

Other than that, I say awesome! go for it!

Let;s not make it too long after Triss- I don't want Triss, scarum, sagax, or kroova to be adults.

Can;t waitr to see what you put! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden    <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 01:43, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

I can't wait to see it! <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Sambrook the otter(The artist) <font color="navy" style="background:Black">Need anything?  04:03, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

Nice update
on A Coneslinger's Revenge!<font color="Red ">Me!  05:28, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

good, you finished mtw
I like the name you chose. should we have Welfo mention Triss, cause then Moonsong wou;ld freak out? <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 03:01, 21 January 2009 (UTC)

READ
A Tale of Two Quests by Christain. GREAT!! Martin's sword is lost in a swamp!!!

NOnnvalers have forgotten Martin, Rose, and Brome!!!

And worse!!!!

<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 03:17, 21 January 2009 (UTC)

okay, I'll read those then!
I started Southern Raiders yesterday. Didn't finish <font color="Red ">Me!  13:32, 21 January 2009 (UTC)

wow!
how do you survive? I also have a sister who is 1000000000...times more annoying. --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Please leave a message after the beep...or after you click 02:55, 22 January 2009 (UTC)

Noice!
Oi loikes et, miz Pinedance!<font color="Goldenrod ">Mauran Axestripe  <font color="goldenrod" size="2">Could you point me to Redwall Abbey?, 03:05, 22 January 2009 (UTC)

hmm, my turn
say the corsairs almost crashes and accidently find the cove, capturing or killing a seaweeding party. Suppose Welfo is in that party, and Moonsong, seeing a friend who was kind t her duaghter get cruelly treated like that gets bloodwrath causing the vermin to flee w/ welfo, and saty, pehaps Bistort? Then Moon and urtica give pursuit.

At Redwall, Scarum is up to his usual tricks, and perhaps steals or accidently ruinsa huge cake for tha abbot? And perhaps Triss ahs this huge hatred for adders caudse of shogg (or would that be better for kroova?) then Martin tells her to go in the ship to Peace Island and 'Follow the corsair who knows not fear, To reunite with one you held dear.'

OK, I'm out.

BUt Kroova MUST be in. I can't imagine it with out him, and It's hard not to ignore the fact that he dide and plunk shogg right in anyways.

But we are cowriting, and Shogg is (inreverisbly) dead. WAAAAA!!! <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 03:44, 22 January 2009 (UTC)

siblings
I only have one older sister :D  Actually we get along pretty well! Most of the time....... <font color="Red ">Me!  04:10, 22 January 2009 (UTC)

I read your poem!
It reminded me of a mother singing softly to her child.... then again though that is sort of the whole point of a lullaby isn't it.... I liked! <font color="Red ">Me!  05:17, 22 January 2009 (UTC)

Have you
read my rakkety tam poem? <font color="Red ">Me!  17:40, 22 January 2009 (UTC)

wow!
5 1/2 hours??!! You must be really good. I don't take any classes other than school. (well, i used to take kung-fu but i hated the teacher so i quit.) --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Please leave a message after the beep...or after you click 00:30, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

yes
but kung-fu was from china and karate was from japan --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Please leave a message after the beep...or after you click 00:40, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

my
sister's 8 and my brother's 5. --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Please leave a message after the beep...or after you click 00:44, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

after i finish my homework
i half do it and half go on computer --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Please leave a message after the beep...or after you click 00:56, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

no
i don't have finals yet. only in 6th grade y'know. and you have to answer word for word? wow...my mandarin teacher is like that too. if we miss a little word, we get the whole answer wrong. >:[ --<font color="Blue ">ladyamber88  [[Image: Triss2.jpg‎| 50px | ]] <font color=" Magenta" size="2">Please leave a message after the beep...or after you click 01:02, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

Why can't you?
? <font color="Red ">Me!  01:05, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

Updated
Added part to Zaira's Apologue <font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain    <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 01:45, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

amen pinedance!--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Talk! 01:47, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
 * p.s up date on The True Tale of Rukky Garge

You're right,
Abortion is murdering babies. I mean, what did they do?<font color="Goldenrod ">Mauran Axestripe  <font color="goldenrod" size="2">Could you point me to Redwall Abbey?,

?
Home school, charter schoool public school, private school? <font color="Red ">Me!  04:54, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

believe me
as far as people being mean to other people, and all of that goes, your lucky.<font color="Red ">Me!  17:37, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

nay, but I AM in the middle of doing the GN, however I could use something to get my mind off of it. <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Sambrook the otter(The artist) <font color="navy" style="background:Black">Need anything?  00:19, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Drawn and Done
I was just about to come here and tell you that I've just got to ink it and color it now XD Took a while. I'll probably have it by Tuesday. If I'm lucky. Maybe Thursday, because I just realized I colored it wrong. --<font color="Goldenrod" style="background:Black">Clockworthy <font color="aqua" style="background:Black">Expand your horizons...read my story  01:03, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

sure. any particular stance? <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Sambrook the otter(The artist) <font color="navy" style="background:Black">Need anything?  01:06, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Thanks :D Ill get right on it! <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Sambrook the otter(The artist) <font color="navy" style="background:Black">Need anything?  01:22, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Shogg's
ghost, pehaps? Yeah, jubille for Abbot Apodemus (which, by the way, is part of the Latin name for "Wood mouse"),

and sagax,of course, gets all mad at scarum. Mem flackery, too? and perhaps he tried to blame the dibbuns, or they assumed the dibbuns did it.

plot idea- mayeb kroova's parents were killed by adders.

his mom, his dad, and his best friend.

ouch. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 02:32, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Your Pictures finished and on my page (in a few minutes) One comment about it. I personally would have put her in a solid woodland green dress, but oh well, If you want me to change anything you know where to find me. <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Sambrook the otter(The artist) <font color="navy" style="background:Black">Need anything?  04:12, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Update
I've done some magor adding to Southern raiders and some more of the Spin off if you're intrested ;) --<font color="red" style="background:Black">Firetooth <font color="red" style="background:Black">The Fire Cave 17:55, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

you
just an idea, but you could make that picture of Pinedance that Smabrook drew your sig picture! just idea though..... <font color="Red" style="background:Silver">Prard 19:34, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Alright, but...
I must warn you, they review more critically than we do here, so you might not be happy with what they say. To save you from some critics harsh eye, you should fix up A Coneslinger's Revenge first, add more details and make it longer. Trust me the effort would be recieved.

<font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain    <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 21:26, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Could you
check out A Swordmaid's Journey? I've begun to add mre- still in process! --<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 02:55, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

no
not maurun or verminfate. keep guessing!<font color="red" style="background:Silver">Colonel Procyon <font color="red" style="background:Silver">What else is new!  14:05, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

You
still haven't guesed me! <font color="red" style="background:Silver">Colonel Procyon <font color="red" style="background:Silver">What else is new!  14:06, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

you got me!
Prard! I made a new account 'cause almost no one left me a comment for like 2 days, so I got bored and Started the general storyline of my soon to be fan fic. (BTW, If Shield maiden happens to read this then, I haven't forgotten reviewing your fan fic. just kinda discouraged from critiqueing it 'cause it's so huge!) <font color="red" style="background:Silver">Colonel Procyon <font color="red" style="background:Silver">What else is new!  14:03, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

I'll always be Zaran, Pine xP, already spent alot of time on this account lol. Good game, don't make too many or Lord will interpret it as spamming lol

<font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain    <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 05:08, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

I meant don't make too many accounts, it gets harder to keep track of who is who if you hve like 5 diffret accounts lol <font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain    <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 17:46, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

I know, I was just answering your question

A very minor update
There is a message on Talk:Hollyfire's Tale, but it isn't mandatory. :<font color="orchid" style="background:Black">Hollyfire <font color="cyan" style="background:Black">Queen Tsarmina's Lair 20:44, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

No,
I'm not Colonel Pryocon or whatever his name is (I think he's Prard). Not even Bram Wildlough or Ferranta Brushtail is me, they're my friends. The only other wiki user is Tigan Barkwater, on the Edge Chronicles wiki, which really needs patching up. <font color="Goldenrod ">Mauran Axestripe  <font color="goldenrod" size="2">Could you point me to Redwall Abbey? 21:21, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

update tagg quest, MTW II part 4 <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 14:15, 28 January 2009 (UTC)

Update!
Update on The Land of Eternal Ice. --Verminfate 22:38, 28 January 2009 (UTC)

Update!
Update on The Land of Eternal Ice. Some new (or actually returning) characters! --Verminfate 06:31, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

EEEK!
Audition tomorrow! AAAAHHHH! Wish me luck!-- Pinedance Coneslinger <font color="navy" size="2">Talk! 01:48, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

Special Alert!
Just letting folks know that all of my fanfictions have been moved to those fangled new blog things.

and I'm almost done with your picture--I just can't find my camera...sorry it took so long ^^; --<font color="Goldenrod" style="background:Black">Clockworthy <font color="aqua" style="background:Black">Expand your horizons...read my story  14:58, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

ney,
Martin the Warrior II- RTN Part IV

Taggerung Quest

A Swordmaid's Journey

Good luck with auditions! what're you auditioning for? <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 15:09, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

Fan-fics
All of my fan-fics, current or upcoming, are now being moved to my blogs. Thanks! --:<font color="cyan" style="background:Orchid">Hollyfire <font color="cyan" style="background:black">Talk to me, please! 18:54, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

I hope U
made it! Which one did you try fir? I am not familiar w/ the [play, but I know thw fairy tale. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden [[Image:Zara whatisit.png| 85px]]  <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 20:21, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

only
acouple days. I know you did good. BTW, how's the latest in A Swordmaid's Journey? also check out

Taggerung Quest

Martin the Warrior II- RTN Part IV

Tirborath(Sambrook's story RW)

<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 20:29, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

Hope you enjoy!
Update on The True Tale of Rukky Garge!!!
 * Tree_Climber(not logged in)

saw your user page
YAY! another hardy fan!! have you read the originals (the ones written in the 1920s) or the GN's? <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 20:39, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

o9nly quips I have
is that chet, Iola anmd Callie aren't in enough anmd in number 9 frank falls in love. Otherwise, the plots are good (the artists change, but paulo Henrique is the best I think) Also, they're funny. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 20:52, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

if you can't find,
the author is Scott Lobdell.

Seee, after the first one, the writer has F & J join this undercver agency called ATAC (American Teens Against Crime)

<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 21:03, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

unfortunatly,
my library has only 2 GN- 3 and 9- and the other system I use don't have that many either,. WAH, though they are found at Barnes and Noble

any suggs for Martin the Warrior ii? <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 21:10, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

ya sure
you want the end? It'l give alot away. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 21:21, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

why
don't you tell me you ideas, And I f any'll work that I like. . . <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know!

sorry
my sis stole the computer

MAJOR SPOILERS FOR MTWII RETURN TO NOONVALE

OK, basically, picking up on the most recent update:

Two thirds of the Pearl Queen's crew( One third foraging for supplies lost in the storm led by Keyla, other third looking for a new mast led by Gammage) go ashore.

The flitchaye sneak up on the Guosim and Attack. Dell sees and tells Keyla, whop sends him to get Gammage, who has a bigger force cause of the mast. Keyla's crew ambush the flicthaye, but are nearly routed until Log alog gets the guosim to gether on a counter attack, but the battl;e isn't won untyil Gammage shows up. Trouble and Log alog have a reunion, as does Brome, Keyla, tullgrew and celandine (remember, Tullgrew and Celandine thought he was dead and Keyla wasn't sure who died.)

They go on the Dark wave and continue their journey.

Nothing for back at noonvale. :(

Uh, I do have they are engaged in battle with arrival of reinforcments from pearl queen, but are still outnumbered.

there's more, butthat shouldbe enough 4 now. <font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 21:53, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

RE
Brome mets a very pretty mousemaid and they fall in love yep- how about Burdock?

Martin dies (Don't think you'll be useing this un) '''Uh. . . *blush*'''

Gonff sits around in the gatehouse or somewhere else thinking up clues to the Doomwyte Idol's eyes Good!

Columbine gets pregnant again Yeah!

When Martin comes back they have a big feast and Skipper falls into the pond and Lady Amber has to save him (Yes this is from Mossflower but you could use it) '''Maybe- though he was already humiliated once. . . maybe Lay amber gets stuck in a tree and Skipper has to climb up and save her!'''

Ivy, Chugger, and Gonflet invade the kitchens at night and when they get found they get put on Abbess's Report Oh yeah!!!

<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 22:07, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

You might find
that they make more sense if you read them in order, like Redwall. You should start with Into the Wild because Firestar comes to ThunderClan in it, then Fire and Ice, when WindClan return. Just a thought! --:<font color="cyan" style="background:Orchid">Hollyfire <font color="cyan" style="background:black">Talk to me, please! 23:27, 31 January 2009 (UTC) P.S. There's a Warriors Wiki at. I'll welcome you there!

A very important
update on The True Tale of Rukky Garge--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Wich way to Holt Rudderwake? 19:14, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

I
would like update messages. Hollyfire the Fearless <font color="cyan" size="2">Queen Tsarmina's Lair 21:05, 1 February 2009 (UTC) P.S. I answered your question, if you didn't see it already.

Maybe....
You were around when that story was posted? Wow, I am behind. And to answer question.... I don't know. I'd like to, but I want to finish either 600 or Red Tide first. Probably 600 though, Red Tide is kind of a losing battle. I have no idea where I'm going with it.

By the way, please don't take this the wrong way, but I finally got around to reading A Coneslinger's Revenge. Sorry, with over 90+ fan fics, its hard to keep up. Well, I wish I had read it earlier, I was missing out! Nicely done! --<font color="Red">Some random redwall fan  <font color="Red" size="2">Talk! 23:09, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

PS: You gotta tell me how to write a scottish accent. You do it very well.

Update
New section added to Fren's Quest: Part II! -- Frentiza the ferret  <font color="purple" size="2">Leave a message! 15:36, 2 February 2009 (UTC)

Update
on Nightmoon; you know where it is. Gotta go! Hollyfire the Fearless <font color="cyan" size="2">Queen Tsarmina's Lair 23:17, 2 February 2009 (UTC)

Hey!
Hey pinedance! I'm not a user yet cuz I'm slightly younger than you but you can call me Arrowtail. I turn 13 in two weeks. I also saw in your talk page that you asked if anyone else was homeschooled. I AM!

-Arrowtail

hope you enjoy the
update on The True Tale of Rukky Garge!--<font color="Blue">Tree Climber  <font color="blue" size="2">Wich way to Holt Rudderwake? 23:11, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

Whoops, that's a problem
but I fixed it. Thanks, Pinedance. Holly the Flame  <font color="orchid" size="2">Harken to me, vermin! 00:10, 4 February 2009 (UTC)

Good!
I know ye'll do good!

About the blogs and fan fic, why don't we make a joint account so we can both acess it?

<font color="Green ">Shieldmaiden   <font color="Saffron" size="2">Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 02:54, 4 February 2009 (UTC)

Update
Update on Zaira's Apologue

<font color="Teal">Sleepy Zaran Rhulain    <font color="Navy" size="2">Message me! 03:08, 4 February 2009 (UTC)