User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20130918030250

There were several errors that I spotted, but most were missing thes and one instance where you put razored instead of razed. This was definitely an interesting updating. This new group puts a twist on the plotline in Terramort. I like their history too. Well done, Astar! I'm interested to see how this turns out. KIU!