User blog comment:Skalarana/A story of a sister and a brother/@comment-2047407-20100521234336

Coral the Critic is back

Ch 3: "Im so glad it was you and not some scumy vermin. can i came in. yes, yes please do came in"

change the came into come

Also Ch 3: "Finley they made it to the abbess'ss room" 2 mistakes here Finley should be Finally, and abbess'ss should have 1 s after the '

And lastly Ch 3: " ...and that my mom is...died: it should be "dead" not "died"