User blog:Redmight/Knights of Redwall

Hello there!! This is my first fan-fic and I've worked on it with all my heart to create it!! so enjoy!! and don't be afraid to critique or comment!!

Chapter 1: The storm of Greed and Love
A forest's rain enveloped in the pitch blackness of night can be made beautifull and deadly at the whim of its will, but what manner of storm ever finds itself fighting against one who holds nothing but harmonizing music in the form of a guitar and the inner of voice of the soul that sings like this...

Now hear my voice rise to the sky and play a melody!

Me and my guitar will march, in hopes of reaching home!

Don't let me walk alone tonight, Just send me to my home!

even though this storm is harsh and batters down my soul!

I'll march it on!

Endure it all!

Just to see my home!!

I'll fight the wind!

Defeat the cold!

 and truimph over all!

''The storm will rage with howling winds! and scream in thunderous roar!''

How dare you just defy my will and march towards your home!

He'll send the pain in tears of rain to flow right to my soul!

He'll send the freezing flow of winds to crystallize my hopes!

Even though he sends his rage my body just goes on!

In disbelief he'll simple stare for the strength that I possess

''How could this be! How can it be! what kind of beast you be!''

I'll scream my soul into the night and tell this horrid storm!

No matter what you do to me my hopes cling to my soul!

and my guitar will epicly just follow with my voice!

as I sing the end with victory

That tonight!!

I'll!

reach!!

My Hoooooooooooooome!!!!

Guitar and voice, together in harmony filled the dark forest with hope, even if the storms howling winds screached dreadfull sounds of sorrow and the rain in clattering beats fell upon the entire forest. In the middle of the forest, in a path barely visible in the dark, a mouse of great physical vigor is seen walking holding a magnificent guitar and contemplating at the spectacle of nature that is a storm. He raised his head and smiled at the sky letting his brown eyes sparkle in the moonlight as his golden brown fur felt the chillin wind of the night, he wore a white rain coat belted with a tool belt that held various crafting tools and sported a simple blue shirt.

"It felt good to play that song in such weather" he chuckled to himself as he strapped his guitar to his back and continued on his way.

He walked for no more than a few steps when the winds intensified and pushed him back, he struggled a bit but regained his balance instantly

"Oh Raylond you really have to stop being the only craftsbeast in this area of the forest" he humorously thought outloud, for it was true he was the only craftsbeast in the forest after a terrible accident ended the lifes of the few craftsbeast he had the honor of calling friends.

He was ok with being the only craftsbeast in the forest, it meant his services were required by everybeast and he loved doing his job but unfortunetly it also meant that EVERYBEAST needed his help, be it day,night,shine or rain he was needed, and he hated that for it made him leave his beloved home and the love of his life, Sunflower.

(this is not the end of the chapter I'm still going to continue it!!)