User blog comment:Skalarana/A story of a sister and a brother/@comment-2047407-20100509205350

OK its time for Coral the Critic: Ch 2: "Their father and mother were both died" it should be "Their father and mother were both dead"

Ch 2: "He would start out to Redwall the minute he stopped talking to his self" It should be "himself" instead of "his self"