User blog comment:Skalarana/A story of a sister and a brother/@comment-2047407-20100522011513

1 more critique that I overlooked,

Ch 3: "He leapt up and almost tripped over the dibbuns who were lishing at the door"

It should be listening not lishing

and in your comment back to me its hospital not hostbitul. and suppose not spos unless you meant to say it like that

Im sorry for doing this its just i hate spelling mistakes