User blog comment:Segalia/Segalia Riverstorm's voyage/@comment-1738724-20110429031559

Hm..like ye said, a tiny bit confusing...got a bit lost there. Didn't catch any mistakes, which is good, considering you did several edits :) Selra, Riplar and Rori seem to have a good friendship. I think the twin foxes will become good...maybe. Anyways, KIC! Can't wait for the next update :D