User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/Stolen Tears/@comment-2142396-20160122192156/@comment-7662967-20160122220727

Yea, I knew it would be slowish, but I did want to show some of Holt Lutra before I .. um .. killed them. :/ So I'm glad you liked them :)

In truth .. I agree with you, I need a little more on the attack itself. I expect it's me being vague, because more description would make it more violent. and more sad, but I think I do need a little more there. That's the place I think I probably fell apart ... soo I'll probably be editing it. IDK, we'll see if I can think of something.

You pick up on so much! *claps* I like your comments cause of this, because you don't give people favors. You crack down on the pirates, which is a good thing, yes, it is. They are evil, I'm writing from the pov of villains. One could argue they don't understand the woodlanders, but that's a lame excuse, because ... if you people would listen instead of just killing .. *shakes head* My pirates, I love you, but you need to wake up and smell the coffee. Aaannnnd ... you will. But you'll be paying big time ...

As for Barranca, he is certainly in the wrong. He sees really only what he wants to, and he's going to get smacked around quite a bit more then just with the Monitors. Trust me. However. He may someday regret his words and actions .. but that /doesn't/ mean I'll let him off the hook.

XD That is the entire point. You aren't supposed to know quite who to cheer for >;) Oh no .. they were plotting all along. They look like normal weasels .. but they have quite a few tricks up their sleeves.

As for the Monitors, *nods* the pirates got too cocky. They didn't do anything .. until anybeast acts like they might defy their Mazzter .. and then ... *snap*! Look out, you have just antagonized a crew of dragons. XD Need I say any more than ... You will pay.

Yes, that is intended to raise mixed feelings. No, he probably wouldn't .. in fact I guarantee he wouldn't. He's never bothered to think about anybeast but himself and his immediate family. Until now. And now .. well, some things must continue in their set courses.

No, it's just Lutran, Coral, and Marine .. why? Well, when I get done, I think you'll be glad it was just them. :'( I am glad, for one ...

Oh yes, Plogg and Welko ... changing them just didn't fit. And they'll be back for the adventure of the next book. ^^

Yea, Sayna has grown up .. and it took her several hundred seasons to do it. But she .. still has an extremely feisty and disagreeable side ... *snickers* ;P

Maybe because it is? I'm truly not sure, but I'm working on that. And it's quite possible that there is a connection. Those monocles did indeed change the way woodlanders .. and vermin .. see the world forever.

It is? Wow, thanks! I liked the concept but I found it came out .. a little off, IDK. But I'm glad you like it ^^ I will agree with that .. yes, he's completely infuriated .. to the point he is crying. Uhhmmm ... well .. *clamps paws on mouth* *whispers* if you look at my picture of Lutran .. ever wonder how he got that scar? *winces* Yea .. it's got something to do with that.

Yea, that's Barranca. In truth he's Conva's half brother, they have the same father but different mothers. However they grew up together and don't think of themselves as anything but siblings. Conva's mother was a ferret, Barranca's was a stoat. And their father was a weasel. So their family is messed up. XP Romsca's black fur does come from her mother, as Barranca's comes from his. But it makes him look a little more related to Romsca and all that. ;)

You noticed that? :) Thanks! I wondered if anyone would, cause it's pretty subtle. but I felt a distinction there would be good ;3