Thread:SaynaSLuke/@comment-25720178-20141128022141

Hello, its me again:) If I post a FanFiction, could you read it and tell me what to improve upon? (Its boring right now, but will tie together later) I'm feeling self-concious and nervous about it so I thought I should start by asking your opinion. Thanks, you've been a great help to me, as I'm a new member and don't exactly get how to do things efficiently. Sorry if I'm annoying... It happens to happen. 