User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/8 Facts About.../@comment-1427879-20160907044508

I always love the history you give your characters as well as what I learn from reading about them, such as the Slavic/Tartar name distinctions. The tunic hues distinctions is another real cool concept! I like the depth that this gives his relationship with Lana. I do worry that if he has a tendency to cut people off instead of fight, this could conflict with her argumentative nature, but in general I think their relationship is very cute. Also, interesting siblings! I think there are too few siblings in stories, so I'm glad you included them. KIU!