User blog comment:Deyna the Mighty/StarBlade/@comment-988934-20090523161448


 * blink blink*

I'm sorry, but I have to agree with the anonymous user above. After my time on fanfiction.net, I've become a bit cynical towards stories like this. This seems a bit too utopian for my taste. I don't want to sound like a know it all, but the reason why vermin are afraid to attack Redwall is because Redwallers have proven themselves countless times in the past against mighty hordes and their leader, thus earning a reputation among goodbeasts and vermin as a solid fortress full of feared fighters, sorcery, and "riches" from their battles.

I'll still help you with the molespeech though, just post up the lines