User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/A little night music/@comment-2207385-20111205194306

Purely fantastic, awe inspiring in its description and deeds of the Sable known as Vilaya, you clearly went beyond the call of duty in making this story. You created a story of magnificent design and I thoroughly enjoyed reading every sentence, the way things turn out in the warmblood games, how they army of Vilaya splits into two, how the opposing organizing attacks and ultimately defeats Vilaya, all of it done incredibly well, the characters, Ambry, Nitram, Shawn, Jangus and ultimately Vilaya, were all done with superb ability, every time they appeared, they felt alive and believable, with weaknesses and strengths. I loved the references to nearly every book, having descendants and just so many other kinds of references as well, especially the cake. I loved that every single chapter heading is the name of a song that summarizes and captures the feeling of the chapters and overall story. Salem you have created and finished a story that you should be proud of, you really should as it is Magnificent. Congratulations!!!!!

May your blade always strike true, and Happy storytelling!!!!!!!!!