User blog comment:Selound/Kalza's Random Redwall tale: Part one/@comment-3159314-20110223062734

Wow....Uh.....I have to say the beginning was a good start, but I'm pretty sure humans(or cars) exist in the redwall world. Don't get me wrong this was a nice story and I'm sure you put work into it but, it disturbed me that humans where in this.