User blog comment:Nightpaw Streamspliter/The Nights Future/@comment-1630956-20100512015043

Sorry, I was in a hurry when i first reading this. It's good so far, although you are missing spaces after commas and periods. Yes, I have the same problem finding names for characters, but if you take the time to come up with them yore story will be much better. I liked your introduction form Erva, you pretty much summed up her history in a few sentences. KIC!