User blog:Maudie Thropple/Of Otters,Pirates, and War!

Authors Note:This is a fanfic I started writing before I joined this site, I had a poll on my page to help me decide waether or not to post and continue this story, well, seven some votes was enough for me! so here it is, and please comment if you like it.(It'll probably suck xP)

==Prolouge==

This is a tale of Otters,Pirates and war, of tyranny and justice,of right and wrong, of triumph...and tradgedy. Here Evil will strike, perhaps kill, and win. But you must read on to learn the tale......

chapter One
Dark,angry purple clouds rolled and boiled fircely accross the dark night sky,Mountinous waves churned and crashed all around;Blinding lightnig followed by deafening thunder ruled the darkness, and evil was on the high seas! Suddenly, a flash of lightning momentarilly reavealed an enormous corsair ship.Abord it it's captain, an elegantly dressed, horificly evil fox! Zothgarr Von!A name none who knew him would ever forget!Zothgarr Von!That terrible fox, firce, ruthless, cruel.Zothgarr Von!his ships, all crewed by a motley assortment of weasels,ermine,ferrets,stoats, and rats,But no foxes.Just that single, dreaded Fox!Zothgarr Von!As the thunder boomed out,a wicked, cruel ripped from his throught. "Ahaahaahahahahar!Come to me my little otterlings!Ahahahar!!!" As he neared his quarry, an evil grin spread accross his features.A most un-pleasant grin. Zothgarr's quarry as it turned out, were not going to give up so soon.Though they did make for an extreamly unsual sight; for it was a small ship crewed by none other than Captain Gurrsum Bikkle D. Strongclaw, terror of the high seas and her recently liberated crew of young, very young, otters.the captain was a Mole pirate. "Ahar me bootiful young'uns! Youm below deck! Iffen youm wan'ts to escape yon Zothgarr, row for you'm young loives moi mateys!" she belted out in her strange dialect. The crew were about a score of young otters, most of them under ten seasons old, though a few were in their teens. Thunder boomed out ass Gurrsum skillfully manned the tiller.

So do you like it so far? I'm a novice writer and I would be beond happy if you would give me feedback. Constructive critisism is more than welcome.--Mad Maudie you dare to mess with me y'flaimin' salad swipers!?! 04:13, December 16, 2010 (UTC)