User blog comment:Hollyfire53/The Ultimate War/@comment-2214222-20100729110436


 * Neildown- True again. I, once again, wish Hollyfire53 the best of luck in writing this. However, I think that if the character's creator wishes to have a story about their character, they can write it themselves. And you say that it does not appear she's quit on a few? Here and here are clearly abandoned, if you look at the last update time at the bottom.


 * Jadefang- I wasn't giving Shadowbane as an exception for nothing. He's a villain, and why would a villain get married? I'm sure if people knew some of the things that Hollyfire53 was planning, they would object (I'm guessing, but most readers get shocked at thoughts of any author).


 * Verminfate- Constructive. Fine. Yes, there are way too many characters, she gave people the option of being a main or side character, and nearly everyone said main. How are you going to have fifty main characters and five sides? This is going to get very confusing- if it already hasn't- and it's going to stress Hollyfire53 out. And yes, I have a few fan fiction, although it is not Redwall-related, it is Warriors, which is where I came from, and you can find it- my ONE fan fiction- on the Warriors Fan Fic wiki under the name Darkdawn. And while this is hardly the place to add this, I think you write good stories, Verminfate.


 * Snowy Longname- I previously stated that my choice of words was less than superior. 'Stupid' was a poor word choice, 'long', 'confusing' and 'likely-to-be-abandoned' would be much better to describe my feelings.

Fine. Constructive criticism.


 * 1) Since you added Menga, you might as well tell us what happens to him.
 * 2) Fiona and Merlot cannot be sisters, as they do not remotely look alike. I'm sorry, scratch that, they could, but the personalities seem very unalike, and I find it hard to imagine them truly being sisters.
 * 3) Windflin Wildbrush just vanished after her fight, yet Segalia Riverstorm and Rorc Nightblade appear a few more times after. Windflin was one of my only favorite characters in this story, and I would like to know what happened.

I understand you are busy, but please just take my opinion for what it is- an opinion.