User blog comment:Coldstrype the Scythe/Arklor and Castille intro/@comment-1591768-20100303203159

Kk, FTF, BNNITO. A. Correct your grammar, or I'll hack your account & do it for you.

B. I wasn't aware of why he had three names, so your integraion is brilliant.

C. Study other fanfics, learn correct spacing for several people are talking, and say who's speaking more. Also, you neglected to say Slawn's species.

Other than those things, it's brilliant!