Thread:Astar Goldenwing/@comment-7662967-20150722183739/@comment-2142396-20150723084029

I've seen the picture on DA and commented on it.

Now, detailed comment as promised. ;) As I've said, I really love how you did Varyg and that you can immediately say he is vole and not mouse by his small ears and short tail. That's great considering he is your first vole! His pose and expression are amazing! Also, it's a small detail, but I love Varyg's sleeved shirt.

And I love how you still managed to put a lot of details in Zekran, like his tunic (its color is perfect!) and his crossbelts (I was halfway through planning the final battle when I decided he needs these crossbelts... that's why I prefer to have some buffer space while writing ;) ). I love his pose, and I think I even see some resemblance to Groddil in his muzzle shape.

The beginning of the story will come soon. ;)