User blog comment:Varkanax39/The Last Champion: A Novel of Redwall (fanfic)/@comment-1427879-20120609200144

I saw one or two errors of extra letters such as knocked instead of nocked and none instead of one. The Prophecy's squirrels as Dibbuns does add another level of intrigue as to how they're going to be involved; I hope the Dibbuns can make some progress on the Riddle. The evil moles will create more trouble when/if they take over the Cellar but I am glad that Rivan has suffered a few defeats. Redwall's plight seemed a bit overwhelming at first but luckily they're still doing alright. Skipper and some others escaped so I wonder where they are...pretty good update...or should I say several updates? KIU!