User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/Four Warriors Cometh/@comment-25720178-20150117001942

You write so much so quickly! (And yet it's still so good!)

I could discuss everything for about an hour, but just don't have the time.

I absolutely love the humor, about how Tsarmina has to deal with the... Let's say, dull stupidity of the vermin under her command. That really made me laugh! It's amazing how dynamic each character is!

The suspense is excellent! Hopefully Rose wakes soon, it feels like she's been out of the world for a while.

I love how it played out that Sayna found Timbal was a marked one, I can guess Bella's reaction...

The "Grey characters" are some of my favorites, as I've always favored the idea that so called "vermin" could be good. You've sure used Whegg more than I expected, and that's a good thing!

Speaking of characters I wonder what Amber's and Warthorn's next move will be?

I hate to say it, but I've missed a lot of details throughout the story because I was trying to finish it, silly me!

The plot twists are ingenious! Keep writing!

(I was reading the comments below. Warriors are amazing! Yes, I had to add that.)

I apologize for my lack of useful comments and activity, school's really been killing me. I was up 'till 11:00 last night, which is late for me working on an essay, only to wake and discover it was a snow day so you can imagine my mood. I would really like to do artwork and upload it, but still haven't found the time.

Truthfully, I think I'm more of a roleplayer than writer, I've found that I have trouble writing the points of view for all of the characters on my own, it feels so lonely. Still, I've made slow progress. Perhaps I'll get to Chapter 10 soon!

So, just so you know I'm still alive I though I should comment!

If you'd like to, perhaps we can start the Collaboration Fan Fiction soon? (Creating a plot I mean.) I know we were waiting for more ideas, but getting a start would be good.

Thanks for reading, I'm glad to have started reading the first time I did, and glad to have stumbled on this site. I do ramble on quite a lot...

Well, that's about it for now, I can't think of much else except...

Excellent work!