User blog comment:Fiona Fox/Madluck/@comment-1298206-20100625024859

'''Note: This is constructive criticism. Not trolling.'''

The plural form of "fortress" is "fortresses". You might want to put "flames" instead of "flame".

When you wrote:"From a greatly feared young war-lady, to a older vixen, who's no scarier than a badgermum" you should have written:"From a greatly feared young war-lady, to an older vixen, who's no scarier than a badgermum."

Madluck...hmm...I want to hear more... Keep it up, matey!