User blog comment:Riverrune, The Rogue Bard/The Tale of Flinn Furrit/@comment-31874168-20170506003700

I wanted to keep my chapters short, because I like how short the chapters are in typical Redwall books, but this first one went long. I'm not sure if I'll introduce the first round of baddies OR "meanwhile at Redwall" in chapter two. I have a general plan for the layout of TTOFF, but I'm not sure how to pace the chapters that change what perspective the story is coming from. I will likely keep "baddie" only chapters short. There will be a dragon, but he's not the first baddie you'll meet in my story. I'm trying to have multiple plot lines, as I've always enjoyed reading in the real books. This is my first time writing Redwall fan fiction, so I welcome any comments, feedback, or corrections (if I get a major fact wrong, misspell a name, etc.). My thanks to anyone who reads my story. :D