User blog comment:ScottyBlue/Tales from Bowlaynee Castle/@comment-1427879-20120811010249

I did notice several simple spelling mistakes that should be easy to fix. Also, missing commas if you are for comma-buts. I liked how Hook had to use two monocles for spectacles. And this next part of Scotty's should be interesting. Knowing this backstory of Grumbu makes me like him more...it makes him quite interesting. I also like the young hareprince whose name I forgot. KIU!