User blog comment:Peony Laminar/Peony Laminar/@comment-From the South/@comment-1630956-20100416184004

wow, brilliant battle! I liked the uncertanty of the slaves as the hares were entering the compound. Description was wonderful, Zigor sounds evil, and Willow and Galena are still captives. I was wondering how you were going to keep this alive for two more books. Now i know (somewhat).

Sighing in frustration, he pushed into empty space a rat that had lingered a second too long in his path.

This seems a little akward, maybe: Sighing in frustration, he pushed a rat that had lingered a second too long into empty space. KIC!