User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/The Warriors Begining/@comment-24479943-20141031000005

Alright, I must admit I didn't do a good job of keeping up with this as it was written. But a few days ago I copied it and put it on a Kindle so I could read without a computer.

It was awesome!

I liked Sally, and Erwin was really cool too. The horses took a bit of getting used to, but they were a cool addition. Luna was an interesting character, more so when she reveals she's blind. I bet there's a story behind how she and Polleekin met. ;)

Oh, the final battle. That was awesome. I did wonder if you were going to keep Rose alive, since that usually happens in alternate history fanfics, but I guess not. :P After the battle, I could really sympathize with Sally - er, Sayna - and how she was feeling.

All in all, I really enjoyed reading this!

I do have a question, though. Sally seemed to blame her Bloodwrath for Gruven's death. Did she kill him accidentally while going for Badrang?