User blog comment:Hollyfire53/The Ultimate War/@comment-2214222-20100729001450


 * Silverfalcon Pikehawk- I have enough taste to recognize a ridiculous idea.
 * Verminfate- It is very confusing; any self-respecting author should know that too many characters makes for reader confusion, and author confusion as well. It will eventually get that Hollyfire53 will forget that one character is off fighting corsairs, the corsairs will escape to go fight something, and the character is just left there. She has, what, fifty characters overall? She'll never tie them all together.
 * Skipper Rorc- Fine. Credit to Hollyfire53 for undertaking this huge project. First of all, I am not a troll or a flamer. Sorry if I appear this way. I am not here to antagonize any of the readers or Hollyfire53. So I apologize up front for any anger or inconvenience that my reading and commenting will/has caused.

That being said, this is why I think that this story is "stupid". That was probably poor word choice on my part. But it is said, and it will go. I think Hollyfire53 has too many other fan fiction going on. She will never finish any of them; granted, she finished one, but her stories aren't very well developed at all. But that's for another story.

Hollyfire53 has about a million characters for this fan fiction. As I previously stated, it will take forever to get to the climax, likely multiple blogs, and it will take fifteen chapters simply to introduce them all. Another thing is that, while she does a good job in describing the characters, the author has no control over what happens to their character. Look at Vermin King's Shadowbane. Did he ask for a mate, and, if the Guide is to be believed, an adopted daughter? Guessing by previous posts from users like MentalZ, who begged for Macbeth Ravencliff to not have a mate, he probably didn't. I understand that roleplaying games are banned on here, but I still think that Hollyfire53 should ask the character's creator for permission to do certain things. For example, what if Ming's creator and Neil's creator hadn't wanted to be related?

Just think on my comments. And do not think that I am being inflammatory.