User blog comment:SirForgotmypassword3times/Legacy of Redwall: Thesis of Intention and Relevance/@comment-8072-20130809042547

It's clear you've put a lot of thought into this. Here's what I think:

Aside from a few sporadic mentions of 'Redwall' and 'Mossflower' here and there, there's not much in this that really makes it "Redwall." You need to take a few steps way, way back here, and look at Mr. J's vision, and then yours, and see how yours is a radical departure from the original.

What I would suggest you do (now having taken a few steps back), frankly, is erase Redwall from this entirely, and develop your own fantasy story with your own rules, characters, species, etc., for which there are numerous places online for sharing...and then see what people think of your original creation.