User blog comment:Spiriz Sandfleet/The Warrior Spirit/@comment-1427879-20130223212734

I did notice several spelling mistakes, mostly homophones, as well as a few bits of confusing sentence structure. Nice start, though! I liked the vivid description and I'll be interested to hear more about the slaves' ordeal on the ship. A few questions: Why did the Abbot have an atypical accent? Was he raised by otters or just more laid back? Also, wouldn't Devi get whipped if she didn't row? Good job. KIU and update me!