User blog comment:Segalia/Grath Longfletch: Green Longings/@comment-1427879-20120528205507

Before I get into the comments about this section, I should probably put up a warning. Warning: the beginning of this section contains lots of gore and carnage. Which I thought was the best way to portray it. BJ doesn't show us this scene but it had to have had immense impact on her. The rest of it is taken from the scene in the book though I don't show the ending. Now she starts on her great voyage which means that this section titled Jouney will continue for more than one part including meeting Martin II etc. So yeah...I probably won't update this until I get ahold of my copy of Pearls of Lutra which should be in about a week. It'll revolve more heavily around canon but I'll try not to rely too heavily on it.

@Starpetal: Thanks! It's okay, I like honest reviews ;). I think I've written an update with one line of it in SRV...then there's this one. And now you have updated!

@Astar: Thanks!

@Sandingomm: Thanks! Did you want to be updated?