User blog comment:Segalia/Journey of Warriors: A Sequel to SRV/@comment-2142396-20190612191536

This update was shorter than usual, but I still enjoyed it. I’m glad to see that Rori and Carma managed to find a way out of the whole situation with Nottenc, though I expected something similar to happen. ;P Haha, and Slashclaw’s ‘Chaos, revenge, fun, why not’ line was so perfect for him! :D It was pretty generous of him to give the badgers four days, though it’s a very short time for them to find something to use against Malital… Guess that would make the future updates more tense, then!

Though I also have to admit that some elements throw me off because they seem to come from a much later time periods than medieval-like era of Redwall; for example, the mention of high blood sugar and the presence of gas lanterns fall under this category. And it felt odd to see Malital being referred to as ‘woman’, since there are no humans in Redwall, so it wasn’t the term that I would’ve used. ^^;