User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20120605152846

There were still a few grammar issues but not too many. Grawn the badgerlord...it makes sense but I can't remember it from the books. I think Chestnut only annoyed me because he was determined not to obey the rat even though it would have helped. At least he feels bad about getting captured. I do wish that a badger or hare could have killed Krugg but at least he's dead. Nice job, KIU! And have a great summer travelling, even if you can't update :)