User blog comment:SalemtheCruel/How to write good Redwall fanfiction, Part Two/@comment-6532857-20130507183950

haha. Good, I think the people who "wrote" the first season of the RW TV show should have read that part on Mary Sues, Cornflower is so perfect! One other thing; don't make "miracles" happen all the time; I hate fanfics full of heroes escaping totally crazy situations. And do not put too many characters! Even the RW books had this fault sometimes, I could not keep track of Salamandastron. Even Tolkien in the Hobbit introduced too many characters at ones. "Dwalin, Balin, Bifur, Bofur, Bombur, Fili, Kili, Dori, Ori, Nori, Thorin," and who else? So please do NOT introduce too many characters at once.