User blog comment:Kytrae Wingblade/The Arrow Has Wings/@comment-1738724-20100601125608

I am the first reader...I can't believe that Lord Kytrae is a bad badger...bit confusing and fast, but good start mate. Might want to start a new paragraph every time someone new speaks. In other words, press enter twice before someone speaks. I wish Kytrae wasn't a bad one...:( Oh well, tis yore fanfic, KIC!