User blog comment:Snowstripe the Fierce/The Spearmaid/@comment-26073479-20150629042627

Cool story! XD

I like how you connected Spathar with Mortspear's family (Wanting to conqer Salamandastron must run in their family XP )

Hehe, Patchpaw is a riot :) I like a good, funny hare character. It's also neat how you made him white with black patches. Unusually-colored beasts always make for cool characters XD

The only big problem I can see here is those little scrolly-boxes (they make it kind of hard to read); though if you're using Visual editor I really don't know how to fix them :/

Anyways, this is a good fanfic! KIU! XD