User blog comment:SirForgotmypassword3times/The Memoire of the War - By Recorder Dan/@comment-5156759-20130103150533

Well, first of all, bravo! This is all very well thought out and your writing style is excellent! I was wondering, when you were talking about your character Dean, in the year 2012, does that include modern technology and such?

To your questions: I thought for a bit of time about the name for the world and could come up with nothing better than what you already had yourself, i.e., The Homeland. That'll do nicely.

About the order my preference would be this one: "Firstly, I could write it beginning a setting that happens almost directly after the timeline of the original Redwall Canon while the succeeding stories occur chronologically including the revelation of other aspects in the Redwall Universe that I have come up with such as other civilizations that have helped to establish the history of the Redwall world."

Please do continue your writing and keep me updated about your efforts!