User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Cripple/@comment-1427879-20150603172629

Very interesting. I did have a feeling that there might be something romantic between her and Rurick when she first spoke of him (or a very strong friendship which I totally would have approved of as well). The apple/porridge scene with Rumba was funny, and one of Kyle's comments about having enough pirate-vexing for the day. I'm very interested to hear more about Lana! I had a feeling she would be faking her illness (I wonder if Connie was in on it), but now that they're on friendlier terms, maybe they can work together! Kyle was quite useful in his protecting her. There were a few missing words at the beginning of the chapter, but the rest was quite good. Nice update, Astar! KIU!