User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20150823043537

Ah, I was totally on board with the eagle destroying Bladegirt beast by beast. I really enjoyed the tension between the vermin, however, as well as the unintentional murder of the eagle. I liked the last bit about each beast believing they had the upper paw. I saw a few errors, such as blood being referred to as one when it should be some, but nothing major. The polls were hard! There were several places I wanted to put two answers such as the Terramort Isle subplot (we've spent so much time, I'm invested) as well as Freedom and Maple since we haven't seen them in a while. This was interesting, Astar, KIU!