User blog comment:Peony Laminar/Peony Laminar/@comment-From the South/@comment-74.4.73.107-20100423205902

hmm, no i think that part was fine. Again, the hares add humor, but this time not so much so it doesn't overwhelm the rest of the story. I liked the last line of chapter 15 especially. I think the only thing was that Thalweg seemed to know a little much about Redwall, and Regolith didn't seem to react to that. You'd think he press for mor info on how Thalweg knew so much. The only other thing was when Halfear and Bloodnose mention Redwall is where they're headed soon, Thalweg didn't react much. I mean, doesn't he know that that's where Dan's from? I'd think he'd have a more surprised reaction or something. Hope that helps!

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