User blog comment:Snowstripe the Fierce/The Scarlet/@comment-2142396-20150718122620

I like the idea of Melanius going on an adventure; I always wished for Brian Jacques to write more about characters that were mentioned but didn't get a story of their own. Keep it up!

On an editing note, the text will be easier to read if you double-spaced the paragraphs each time a mew character speaks or a new event happens; otherwise it's quite difficult to follow.