User blog comment:Nitram the Warrior/Tales of Mattimeo: Slagar's Legacy/@comment-2207385-20110408024330

Hello there!! I just finished reading the story and I must say what a treat it was to read such a fun story!!, heres what I thought was fantastic!!, the characters and the way they are is portrayed so vividly that when you read about them you just can't help loving them especially Sly, I found the dialogue to be quite well executed and pleasing, also I loved that fighting style with the cards that is such a great idea, also I'm quite curious of how magic will be handle in this story I can't wait to see! as for the negative things, first I felt a little lack of scenery description in the story for some reason, and second you have quite a few grammar errors around the story they don't break immersion but they do distract a bit now and then, other than that everything is shapng nicely! can't wait to see how this story develops!!

May your blade always strike true and Happy storytelling!!!