User blog comment:Skipper Rorc/The Rise of Freedom/@comment-1427879-20110710202125

You updated! yay! I think once you put be instead of me, goodness sake should be goodness' sake, do should be to, ago probably should be before, you should be your, one comma should have been a semi-colon, be should be he, though should be thought, you forgot an end quotation mark, sunned should be stunned, cloths probably should be clothes, than should be them, game should be gave, of should be or, thing should be things, then should be ten, fist should be fish, you forgot another end quotation mark, is should be are twice, another comma should be a semi-colon, fist should be first, you forgot another end quotation mark, You may leave up now, Marluk should be something else but I'm not sure what, my should be 'me and that's about it.

Was it just me or did you just do 9 and 10? I wonder what 'Slave' meant...and what he's up to. Fytch is strange...Wow, Colan has gotten good. At least he's still with Torrin...two close encounters so close together! I agree with Laria about the last section and the plan. That was good! KIU!