User blog comment:Tsarmina the Wildcat/Light or Shadow/@comment-1630956-20100409023618

Grr, how come i didn't find this before? Amazing plotline, only a few misspelled words, here, i'll try and find some of them.

I rose again, but watched at my mother took her finally breathe. Should be final breath.

There is more, but i have to get off. Oh and here: My nausea returned, but this time, I did heave onto mother's night gown. Instead of underlining, just don't do italics.

Great beginning, all you need to do is KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!