User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/Cripple/@comment-1427879-20150923234507

Oh my goodness. Yeah, Armata did make Viscum lose a little bit of control over Razorclaw, but it was still sad to see her gone. Interesting but sad to see Razorclaw's reaction. I did really enjoy this chapter for Kyle's sake, though. He is really coming into his own, saving the prisoners twice with a few well-thought words. Well done, Kyle! It's exciting that we're starting to come to the escape though I imagine that will be a big hectic situation. Lana reacted exactly as I thought she would to his help, but I'm glad she saw the light when she heard about the heron and apologized. The dirge was good as well. Anyway, really well done, Astar. I thoroughly enjoyed this update!