User blog comment:MajorPerigord09/Southsward!/@comment-1689247-20100311203226

Good job! You got the feelings or the King across great in the last bit. There are some small grammatical errors, but they're mostly typos. Try to describe more, as Arrowtail said, and press enter twice EVERY time a new person speaks. If you do that in the first paragraph, it will probably get rid of the 'block' everyones complaining about. KIU!