User blog comment:Skipper Rorc/The Runaway/@comment-1428497-20100407003531

Snowpaw, ur a genius. I really like this UD. You got the food descriptions perfect! The only thing is you were a little repettive on the food containers. For instance, with the beverages, you say barrels twice and close together. There was one other thing like that in the same area. Besides that, you spelled nest instead of next, at the beginnig of the next paragraph. I'm on my dad's iPhone, so it's hard to go back andlook. Anyway, sorry, I'm being a critic. I really liked how you brought zartho to redwall. Great UD! I want more!!!