User blog comment:Segalia/Segalia Riverstorm's voyage/@comment-1607590-20120202011313

Great update! Love the concept of Rori and Carma maybe being siblings or related at least! :D At first I was thinking Carma was falling in love but then this comes up, and it's a great change from what most other stories/fan fictions involve, (the falling in love living happily ever after etc. though those are nice, it's refreshing to have a change in plot :D) enjoyed this one, put a good twist on it! Keep more updates coming!