User blog comment:Segalia/Journey of Warriors: A Sequel to SRV/@comment-1427879-20180705194646

I always start updates early with great hopes to finish them in a reasonable amount of time and then I do something like move continents and out the window it goes. Anyway, update at the Abbey! Something's up and Slashclaw knows more than he lets on.

Astar: Thank you! I'm so glad you thought it was impressive. It took me a while to figure out how the make the "troll" dangerous but still grounded in the Redwall world. I keep trying to connect to the books around this story, so I'm happy it worked! :)

Yeah, maybe I'll go back at some point to see what jumbledness should be revised and what adds effect. Thank you! Yes, her Bloodwrath had to come in sometime, so we'll see what that means for the future. Haha, Lijel's risk-taking is part natural, and part, as you surmised, related to his long history with Segalia. That's a very good point! And something that had to do with everyone coming out worse than I intended. Maybe it's the battle experience? We'll see how that affects them long term! Thank you for reading and commenting! I always look forward to your indepth commentary :)