User blog comment:Astar Goldenwing/For Freedom/@comment-1427879-20150303050017

This was indeed an interesting update! I noticed a few small grammar mistakes such as switched letters, but the only one I had a question about was when you put tierce of their numbers. Did you mean a third? I liked the inclusion of the Old Language. Was that based on Welsh or another language in our world? I was confused by who everybeast was because it's been a while since we saw them, but I liked Elsie, and her insistence that she's not a mouse, and the introduction of Ull. He was quite entertaining even though I thought he was a little younger than he said. The trusting vermin dilemma was interesting, especially with Thornbush's hypocrisy regarding Laufey. Quite an interesting dynamic you've set up to be explored! Especially with Surt and his threats. Interesting update, Astar! KIU!