User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/The Veil is Torn/@comment-2142396-20151202195748/@comment-7662967-20151202211321


 * applauds* And I've been slowed down quite a bit .. that's what happens as you get older, I guess. Cause It seems like I always have something to do, and I just don't get the time to write, read, comment, and chat that I used to. Of course I'm on several different sites, and I'm trying to limit it down to RW, DA, Holt Rhulain wiki, and the OYAN forum I'm on. I just can't keep up with more than that ..

Well, I'd planned her for awhile, then it looked like I wouldn't get the chance to, then I did .. so she was surprising. She's not thinking that deeply .. she's mad at the one she can see did it. I don't think she was actually in the attack, so Xzanthia is the one she can really pin the blame on. Oops. I knew I forgot something .. I will go and see if that can be fixed (thanks for pointing it out) :D

Hmm .. you know, that scene was some how disappointing to me as well, but I couldn't figure out why. However I think you pinned it .. I will see if there is a way to show him fighting them a little more, but also show Ivan's POV, which as you said, I wanted to do more of .. ;P

Nope .. I've thought of a sidestory for him .. but I have soooo many sidestories *facedesk* But he has no luck. That is .. until he met his guardian angel .. and yes, Catkin sees to it that he has a happy ending (cause those are the best kind in her mind, of course) In fact they become the first founders of a prosperous Holt ... Holt Lutra. >:) Which reminds me ... I still have some editing to do on this book. *makes list of things to add/change*

Yea .... :( I feel bad for those two, and everything I did to them .. but that was one of the ironies of Accused from the beginning.

Ehhh .. well, you might very well be right. *thinks* yea, I think you are. I suppose it's a preview of upcoming attractions ... <_< Yes *sniff* Poor Tyre. I thought maybe I would let him live and become good and all .. and then I realized .. wouldn't Xzanthia be out for his blood first? So it just seemed a little far-fetched that he would make it .. cause somebeast was bound to get him .. :(


 * bawls* You don't know what I went through when I realized I had to kill him. I'm sitting here, typing along, wondering who I can kill in the final battle .. and suddenly it comes to me. Mizzah. And I'm like ... Nuuuuuuuu .. yet I know I have to do it :'(

Ahh, yes, Ivan inherited his mother's ... cat-like abilities :) And *mahaha* yes he took Wurgg down like a boss. 'excuse me sir, I don't kill my enemies from behind. I make sure they see me first.' Well, there could be a reason for that .. I'd kind of hinted about Veil, but nearly killing Ivan came to me as a sudden inspiration, and .. yea. There was no warning, I nearly scared myself .. lol

Yes she is >:D I know, back when you were making all those guesses, I'm reading them like 'wow, these are awesome ideas! Not correct, but still pretty cool' and then of course I was laughing, cause I knew. Finally you pinned me on it, I can't remember if I kept myself from spoiling it or not .. ;P Well, I thought for a good while about it. Then I said to myself, 'this isn't new, but it might still be surprising ...' and so I did it. Well, she was getting close .. even if she hadn't been thrown against the wall like that, she'd have likely died anyway. But I also wanted to knock Veil off the stairs .... because I'm evil like that. XP

Yes, I wanted to prove she did indeed have a place in the story, and also show a different aspect of her character than I had previously shown. She was a very interesting, and fun, challenge for me, being Lus's addition, and also a sort of time traveler. at first I wondered about time travel, but then I looked at everything else I've done, and was like ... 'I've done this much already, how different is it?' I'm glad I put her in :)

Awww .. yes, I'd been neutral to it myself, but then I decided .. you know, I now he cares about her, he's just .. hopeless at showing it, so .. let's do this XD Yea, they really do .. *thinks of everything I did to them* Yea, he still is. And as I said, I'm going to have to edit the ending, I'll put in some more there too. Well, the picture is sort of misleading, because it was a scene I modified near the last minute. I thought I was going to have a big long thingy at the end for a long time, but in taking this curriculum, OYAN, I'm learning that after the story goal .. in this case, defeating Xzanthia and getting the abbey back .. it's not a good idea to keep writing stuff that doesn't have a lot of driving conflict. I suppose it does, in a way, but I was afraid it would confuse people, so I tried to crimp it down, Maybe I should not have .. I'm not really sure. But I'm going to change some things either way .. cause I forgot some stuff .. :/

XP Yes, I couldn't bring them into focus as a very prominent ship .. I didn't have the time .. so I tried to hint at it here and there ;3 Yup, Cedric has just been told his cousin is far better looking. "Oh I didn't mean you. You and Fripple are cute and all, but your cousin .. now he's the real good looking one <3"

Yea .. I lost her without meaning too .. there was supposed to be more with her .. but .. *ahhhh so many characters!* TotO should remedy that. (should) I imagine she'll be effected for a good while .. probably all her life .. from what Xzanthia did. But hopefully she'll let her sister and her sister's friends, become her friends as well :) Which she does, I believe ;)