User blog comment:Segalia/Segalia Riverstorm's voyage/@comment-1630956-20110220192902

In continuing this arc: As a writer, i'd move on to give the readers somthing to anticipate, but I guess you've kinda already done that when you stopped there. Personally, as a reader i'd like you to continue this part of the story. Or switch over to the foxes, their story is turning out to be quite interesting. At the moment Carma seems more likely to become the Badger Mother of Redwall than a Badger Lady, she seems to have more of a nurturing heart than a feirce one. Not that i'm saying that she couldn't be feirce when she needs to, but I don't get the feeling that she'd like to be stuck with a bunch or hares all the time, spouting off war stories.