User blog comment:IllusionOfOblivion/A Twisted Reality/@comment-2142396-20150108200600/@comment-25720178-20150109004716

Thanks! I really appreciate the, especially such a helpful one! I love detail, so it goes a lot slower than some Fan Fictions, and perhaps it can seem a bit boring at times, as well as a style that can take some getting used to, but I'm glad to here that appears to be a strong point!

That's good, I don't want them to both seem... Rash and careless, lest they get beheaded for their actions, so it's pretty much just another one of my odd writing things. I never really thought about the green color coding until a chapter of two in, and once I thought about it, it seemed like a piece of this puzzle! It pretty much symbolizes how destinies can intertwine, like the weaving of cloth, or the vines of a plant, or even the feathers of weapons. Who knows, but I really do appreciate the constructive feedback!

I never intended Illusion to be a semi-main character, it just... Happened to use her quite a lot, and now I have more planned for her. One of her mainly strange occupations is being a Seer, so I'm pretty sure Cerberus won't mind, he just feels like he wants a Seer for his twisted customs, and would never admit to needing one. I like Zevquain a lot, I thought with all the serious characters there needed to be some light hare humor! Though I do a bad job at their accents and style, it helps a little. And for some reason, I just though Woodsorrel decent was another little thing there could be.

That's good! I worry he's... Too un-villain-like. I don't know where the wolf idea seemed to work, but having a name as Cerberus fitted with the whole vicious canine creature thing. I actually did some research on squirrel species, and though this type doesn't exist in Great Britain as far as I know, I wanted him to be used. Something similar to a Fox Squirrel, but it's not totally determined.

Yeah, Salmandastron and its inhabitants don't exactly know yet either, but they'll find out soon enough! His family is... Not in the best spot, but he knows the situation has hope.

Oh yes! I completely forgot all about that! Thank you for reminding me, it completely slipped my mind. I'm keeping the second name I think, at first I wanted Zev to have the "quain" part after his father and the line of Woodsorrel's by I changed my mind an forgot later. I'll edit that. :)

I'll keep writing! Though it may take a while to get a long update, my device crashes a lot, and it is aggravating when that happens. I'll try to update you!

I appreciate the comment and suggests, thanks! I'm glad to here it!