User blog comment:SaynaSLuke/The Warriors Begining/@comment-1427879-20150925005324

Hey! I decided it was about time to check out your fanfics since you follow mine. You read mine, I'll read yours, right? I admit I was hesitant at first to read them, both due to the insane speed you update with (seriously, how?) and my wariness of retelling the book stories. It's true that some characters are quite different, and while I do like some of BJ's originals, I'm fond of how you treated others, like Groddil. While the beginning was choppy, it got better as it went along. I thought the horses were an interesting addition, and fairly well done. It was hard to follow sometimes, partially because I can't remember the originals very well either, but the connections were interesting. I'm interested to see how you follow up on them in the sequel. Speaking of which, I have a feeling Rose isn't really dead...because after all if you were to rewrite MtW, why would you still kill off Rose? :P

I do have to say that Martin's actions in the end battle really annoyed me. While I was sad for Sally accidentally killing her friend, I feel like that could have been written more impactfully. But, as you've mentioned, your writing improves from here (isn't that always how it happens?) so I look forward to see how deal with various story elements. Not a huge fan of the headfur, and arranged marriage, but you're the writer, your choices. I really appreciate your comments to other readers because they make me understand some of those choices better. Anyway, good start and I look forward to seeing where you go from here!