User blog comment:Urgar the Piratefox/Juska/@comment-7662967-20150910014057

Ok, so I'm late. I got sick over the weekend, sorry ..

Anyways. I like the start so far! :) It'll be interesting to read about a young Sawney Rath, he always was on of my favorite villains. Ack so now we'll find out where Grissoul came from :) I'll keep reading! :D KIU

As for the paragraphs, I'd suggest looking at another Fanfiction like mine or Illusion's or any fanfic with the paragraphs divided correctly. It's a little awkward .. I'll give you an example here.

It was a rainy day on the west coasts. Zann Juskarath Taggerung stood in a cloth tent. His seer, Yerslynn, stood by his side. Zann spat on the ground, where a dead body lay.

"Yerslynn, what troubles you?" the Taggerung asked the vixen.

Yerslynn bowed to her Taggerung. She was odd looking. Her coat was patched with creamy brown, red, and white. Her brass bracelets clanged as she stood up. The vixens voice was wispy. She muttered,"I have nothing on my mind. Thou mustn't worry about I. All omens are in thy favor."

The ferret smiled. He put a paw on the vixens shoulder. Zann whispered to Yerslynn, "What news of my son have you seen? Is he coming back to Juskarath?"

Yerslynn smiled. "I saw thou son in my visions. He t'will be coming back soon," she whispered back.

Zann dug his claws into the vixen before letting go. "Good… Go to your tent, seer."

Yerslynn nodded wryly.

That's how I would do it, and so on. just but your curser behind the line of writing you want to move, and hit the enter key two times. Hope this helps! :)